I finally got to finish my first "proper" fanfic. By "proper", I mean not a drabble. I'm not a big fanfic writer (I prefer writing original stuff when I do write), so it's been a bit of a hard slog, and it's not that wonderful. I'd really appreciate some creative critisim from you all (or at least those of you who watch Atlantis!!). Anything is good, from gramatical errors (I try and pick these up, but there's often a few we miss, isn't there?) to factual errors, to how characters would behave around/independent of each other.
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Title: Things Unspoken
Author: Me (
eirenealetheia)
Word count: 1,324
Rating: I'd say G. There's nothing really in it.
Warning(s): None really, but there could be some spoilers for season 2, as I'm writing with that knowledge.
Series: Stargate Atlantis
Genre: Shipper/POV (I don't know fic genres!!)
Pairing/Characters: Shep/Weir (kind of), mostly Weir POV
( Just one of those lonely nights... )The reference to the living washing baskets coming alive at the hand of Rodney is thanks to
heylittleriver and
rinkle. Considering one scene of my fic was set around doing the washing, there was no way I couldn’t include a reference to these washing baskets! Go read their fic
here. It will make you laugh. I promise!
Also, does anyone know a comm I could post this (and similar) fic in if I decide I want to? Thanks! :)