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26 June 2005 @ 07:41 pm
FMA ficlet: Scar/Ed  

After this, I have nothing but the upmost respect for anyone who can actually write Scar/Ed, esp. write one with an actual plot.  ^_^  Anyway, here's another slut!Ed ficlet, mangaverse Scar/Ed.

 

Perversions of the Innocent

How twisted this society is.  They deliberately go against the great Creator’s will.  They pervert nature.  They willfully twist and destroy all that they touch.

They even pervert their children, the innocent and ignorant.

I stare at this pale child in front of me.  Edward Elric.  The legendary Fullmetal Alchemist.  I can feel the soldier’s blood staining me.  He had died defending what he probably assumed was a child.  At first glance, seeing those wide, stunned eyes staring at me, I can understand from where such an assumption originated.  But I cannot fall under that illusion.  He’s a state alchemist and thus another who perverts the Creator’s will.

At the moment, however, he looks no more than a frightened, beautiful young man who should be safely hidden behind his parents’ doors.

I step forward, not allowing my emotions to rule my actions.  He doesn’t move, simply staring at me.  Have you ever seen someone die in front of you, lovely one?  I hope not.  I hope that will be the first and last death you need to see before I send you to the next world.

Then the clock behind the Fullmetal Alchemist and his brother rings, and the larger youth grabs Fullmetal’s arm and urges him into a run.  Frustration fills me as I take off after them, not only at the unnecessary chase but at the prolonged misery this child is being subjected to.  He won’t escape.  All he is doing is stalling the inevitable.

They attempt escaping down an alley, further proving their ignorance.  It takes no effort on my part to trap them.  They turn on me like cornered beasts.  They fight, but with each step and strike, they further prove their naïveté.  I will admit, the truth behind Alphonse Elric’s form surprises me, but I ignore him as soon as he incapacitated.  All I desire is his brother.

Within moments, Fullmetal’s automail arm is destroyed, and the child is slumped at my feet.  His younger brother is screaming at him to escape.  Fullmetal and I both know he will do no such thing.  My heart aches as I stand over him.  He won’t abandon his brother.  He will not leave his brother to my wrath.  I respect him for that.

For a long moment, I stare at his bowed head.  His hair is bright and golden, matching his eyes.  He is a beautiful creature, and for a moment, I allow myself to wonder what would have happened to this lovely youth if he had chosen a different path.  If he had been born into another society, one not so defiant of the Creator’s will . . . would he have been a priest?  A scholar?  My hand hovers over his head.  The fire had shone so brightly in his eyes when his brother had been attacked.  That fire could have blossomed, grown and matured.  Both he and his brother could have been free and safe.

I could have kept him safe.  I could have protected him from this perversion.  This beautiful being could have been so much more.

But it is too late.  It is not a different world.  This society had perverted this one, and I must do the Creator’s will.

I am sorry, beautiful one, Edward Elric.  I shall pray for your soul and hope that you find peace in the other world.

Good-bye, lovely one.  With an inward sigh, I lower my hand.

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DigiFaith[info]digifaith on June 27th, 2005 12:09 am (UTC)
Ooh, that was good. Scar can be a tough character to write, but you did a great job. A good addition to a good ficlet series. XD
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 12:35 am (UTC)
*tackles icon* That has to be one of the cutest pics I've seen of those two. Where did you find it?
*coughs* And thanks. ^^''''
yma2[info]yma2 on June 27th, 2005 12:34 pm (UTC)
Just wanna add in agreement with Tir Synni, that icon really is gorgious.
DigiFaith[info]digifaith on June 28th, 2005 11:57 pm (UTC)
XD The icon was made by [info]amanecer, and it came from this bit of official art:

chrstphrl[info]chrstphrl on June 27th, 2005 01:36 am (UTC)
I SEE Scar like this.Beautiful job .
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 02:04 am (UTC)
^_^ Thank you!
The Icon Alchemist: Dear fandom Ed[info]sky_dark on June 27th, 2005 01:40 am (UTC)
Ah lovely as always =D
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 02:05 am (UTC)
^_^ You always leave the nicest reviews. . . .
Skeren Dreamera[info]forgottenlover on June 27th, 2005 01:49 am (UTC)
::claps:: yes LOVE ::saves::
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 02:06 am (UTC)
*bows*
love sonnet XVI[info]zodiacstargazer on June 27th, 2005 02:10 am (UTC)
Your scar is love. <3
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 02:30 am (UTC)
*beams*
Fandom Lurker[info]keylah on June 27th, 2005 03:22 am (UTC)
-bounces up and down- prettyprettyprettypretty! =D
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 04:21 am (UTC)
XD *joins in bouncing for the hell of it*
purplemewit[info]purplemewit on June 27th, 2005 03:26 am (UTC)
Ooh... I'm writing Scar for the first time right now, and this is helping me get a grip on him. Thanks! I really like it!

*hugs*
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 04:21 am (UTC)
*purrs* You're writing a Scar fic? Gen or with pairing?
purplemewit[info]purplemewit on June 27th, 2005 04:26 am (UTC)
Gen, but it may not be what you, or anyone else is expecting. I'm so curel to these characters. I'm putting the finishing touches on it right now. ^^
purplemewit[info]purplemewit on June 27th, 2005 04:28 am (UTC)
Cruel, rather... Curel is lotion
tir_synni: ed&al[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 04:39 am (UTC)
*g* Scar, probable character angst. . . . }D
purplemewit[info]purplemewit on June 27th, 2005 04:41 am (UTC)
Angst is putting it midly ^^
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 05:13 am (UTC)
*sighs contentedly*
takkycat[info]takkycat on June 27th, 2005 03:53 am (UTC)
SQUEEEE!
You have finally got me off my ass and create a live journal! I just love this story! It just fits in with the series perfectly.

It makes me think of giving a challenge for an idea I have been toying with. Let's say that Ed is in an alchemy accident/attack and is turned into a little kid. Scar finds him and decides to take him in and raises him in order to "save" him from his path of blasphemy. Perfect for a multi parter I think!
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 04:25 am (UTC)
Re: SQUEEEE!
^__^ As I personally adore the idea of Scar trying to play savior, I love it. But of course, I'm biased. ^_~
Ziggy says I have to go your funeral tomorrow...[info]scico on June 27th, 2005 04:09 am (UTC)
...mmm... scar fic... ^_^

good job!!!
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 04:25 am (UTC)
*sparkles* Sankyuu!
Ziggy says I have to go your funeral tomorrow...[info]scico on June 27th, 2005 04:28 am (UTC)
hee! ^_^
mikkeneko[info]mikkeneko on June 27th, 2005 04:50 am (UTC)
That was good Scar. *thumbs up*
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 05:14 am (UTC)
^_^ Thanks.
Amanda: No Good Deed... (Ed)[info]viewpoints on June 27th, 2005 05:01 am (UTC)
This is just LOVELY. ^__^ A very well phrased Scar. I can hear him like this with ease, and I love it to bits. That one scene is probabably my favourite, I've only seen the anime, but Ed giving up and allowing scar to kill him so that Al won't be hurt makes me all melty inside, and this fic does the exact same thing.
*rabuu*
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 05:17 am (UTC)
*coos* I still adore that scene (and that fact is probably demonstrated by how often I mention it). I also like how Scar so readily and sincerely promised not to touch Al. XD I don't know why, but that really won me over in Scar's favor.
Amanda[info]viewpoints on June 27th, 2005 05:21 am (UTC)
Indeed, it made Scar more likeable, since he then wasn't just 'another bad guy out to do bad things cause he's....bad' like General-with-bad-moustache-who's-name-I-forget-and-thankfuly-dies.

Scar sometimes got on my nerves, but I really grew to like him, and that one scene has a lot of power for me for all three characters- Scar, Al, and Ed. Now I'm fic bunnying Ed's thoughts while Scar's thinking this.
It's probably been done before.... but bunny.....

*kicks muse*

I'm not even writing for FMA yet!
tir_synni: ed&al[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 06:32 am (UTC)
*gapes* Why not? *waves frantically* Follow the bunny! Follow the bunny!
yma2[info]yma2 on June 27th, 2005 12:33 pm (UTC)
Very good, you wrote Scar really well (in fact this bit would work well in the anime too!) and I love the sense of regret that comes from it. Good stuff.
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on June 27th, 2005 10:03 pm (UTC)
*^_^* Thank you. I was worrying about making him IC.
ebonykain: heaven[info]ebonykain on July 6th, 2005 04:34 am (UTC)
O.O

wow... just wow. There's no words for this one. *huggles both Ed and Scar*
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on July 6th, 2005 04:45 am (UTC)
*wails* I would love to write more Scar/Ed, but the manga doesn't exactly present many opportunities. :P
ebonykain[info]ebonykain on July 6th, 2005 04:52 am (UTC)
mmm... is sad. They need to snuggle or something.
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on July 6th, 2005 04:58 am (UTC)
*keels over* I would kill for fanart of that. Snuggable!Scar. Hahahahahaha! *chokes and wheezes*
ebonykain[info]ebonykain on July 6th, 2005 05:00 am (UTC)
LoL indeed indeed!!
xpyne[info]xpyne on July 10th, 2005 11:35 pm (UTC)
considering...
Snuggable!Scar, huh? ::considers it for a moment:: I could draw that. You want Scar with Ed, right? Or maybe Al? lol, maybe both? I have this vision of Ed curled up against Scar, with his head on Scar's chest, and Scar with this loving look on his face... ::squeee:: But if you really want Al in there I can adjust. What rating would you like? Your choices are:

PG: implied gayness, fully clothed.

PG-13: noticable gayness, semi-clothed

R: undeniable gayness, naked with artful positioning

You just can't get it down to G when Ed is involved, haha, and I don't think I can do an NC-17 of Scar that is snuggable rather than filthy.

note: if Al is in this, the rating is PG-13 or lower, lol. I'll start drawing it as soon as you define the pairing/rating you want! ::salutes:: Fangirl artist slave, at your service.
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on July 11th, 2005 04:25 am (UTC)
Re: considering...
*bounces* Really? Oooooooh, you're so nice! Um . . . Scar/Ed, PG? Just fluff? *glomps* Nice, nice, wonderful person. XD
Nobody puts Qem in a corner.[info]qem_chibati on July 24th, 2005 10:22 pm (UTC)
Wow, really touching. The extension on that scene you've written here is amazing.
tir_synni: slut!ed[info]tir_synni on July 25th, 2005 03:22 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I've pretty much ruined Scar for myself writing that, but it's all in good fun. ^_~
 
 

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