Mer ([info]stakebait) wrote,
@ 2005-02-14 12:30:00
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Current mood: indescribable

Bad Fairy Blessing
I wish for you not more happiness than you can compass
but a serviceable content spreading like sunlight,
like buttery white wine. I wish you ripe pears in hanging baskets,
an orderly kitchen, open shelves stacked high with clean crockery,
ironed sheets. I wish you songs to match your mood on the radio,
with words you can always remember, but not at inconvenient times.
I wish you skin rich like cool milk in summer, like strong tea in winter.
The adaptable pleasures of the suitable be yours, now and always.
May the right moment come for you and lift you up,
carry you, victorious, on its shoulders like a coach or a conquering hero
and set you down gently on your own broad doorstep
where a smooth voiced woman in a cream silk blouse
says "dinner’s just ready, come in,"
and with closed, full lips, kisses your cheek.
I wish you laurels that bloom when expected, neither too late nor too soon.
I wish you lilacs that wait for the weekend, snow at Christmas and children, too,
in their season. May they have her grace and your wit and love wisely,
and graduate summa cum laude, and come smiling to you in the summer houses,
bearing flowers and grandchildren and your name.



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[info]ellen_fremedon
2005-02-14 05:55 pm UTC (link)
That's beautiful. Is it yours?

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[info]stakebait
2005-02-14 05:57 pm UTC (link)
*blush* Thank you. It is indeed, just written.

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(no subject) - [info]fairmer, 2005-02-14 08:28 pm UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]cristalia, 2005-02-14 08:40 pm UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 09:39 pm UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 09:36 pm UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]fairmer, 2005-02-14 09:50 pm UTC (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 10:07 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]chickwithmonkey
2005-02-14 06:01 pm UTC (link)
That is beautiful. May I icon it?

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[info]stakebait
2005-02-14 06:04 pm UTC (link)
*blush* Thank you! By all means, do.

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[info]cadhla
2005-02-14 06:05 pm UTC (link)
...I love you enormously sometimes. Most times, actually, but right now? Especially yes.

Mmmm.

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[info]stakebait
2005-02-14 06:08 pm UTC (link)
::*pouncehugs:: I love you too. Look, I made the words move! Not the poem I *meant* to be writing on my lunch break, but I'm very glad you liked it. And who knows, maybe there'll be another one.

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[info]sying
2005-02-14 06:24 pm UTC (link)
That? Is gorgeous *adds to memories*

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[info]stakebait
2005-02-14 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]mpoetess
2005-02-14 06:33 pm UTC (link)
How beautiful. And not just as a poem, but as an expression of friendship and the joy of life.

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[info]stakebait
2005-02-14 07:04 pm UTC (link)
*blush* Thank you so much! I'm glad that mood came through.

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[info]mamadeb
2005-02-14 06:34 pm UTC (link)
That is truly beautiful.

*smiles*

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 07:06 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]kalmn
2005-02-14 06:36 pm UTC (link)
may i put up a pointer to this in my blog?

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 07:07 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]genarti
2005-02-14 07:05 pm UTC (link)
Oh, lovely. Thank you.

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 07:08 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]batyatoon
2005-02-14 07:46 pm UTC (link)
*loves* Soooo pretty.

I admit to some confusion about the title, though.

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[info]doeeyedbunny
2005-02-14 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Absolutely lovely, but the bit about the freshly ironed sheets is a wee bit confusing. Who irons sheets?

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(no subject) - [info]fairmer, 2005-02-14 09:24 pm UTC (Expand)
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[info]_earthshine_
2005-02-14 09:14 pm UTC (link)
I have peeked in upon [info]fairmer's recommendation, and certainly without regret. Nice piece.

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 09:37 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]drc1
2005-02-14 09:44 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.:-)

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 10:03 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]septembergrrl
2005-02-14 09:48 pm UTC (link)
This is lovely.

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 10:08 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]mechaieh
2005-02-14 10:05 pm UTC (link)
Very nice.

(And some editors/anthologists are okay with previous pubs -- for instance, June Cotner. . .)

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-14 10:13 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]kate_nepveu
2005-02-15 01:02 am UTC (link)
That was lovely. Thank you for sharing it, and best wishes for finding a venue that will give you money for it.

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-15 02:38 am UTC (Expand)

[info]poisoninjest
2005-02-15 02:23 am UTC (link)
Excellent work. Thank you for sharing it! :o)

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-15 02:57 am UTC (Expand)

[info]softplaces
2005-02-15 06:26 am UTC (link)
That's utterly beautiful. You can have my soul.

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[info]firesprite1105
2005-02-15 10:30 am UTC (link)
This is just incredibly gorgeous. I printed it out. If it's not too late to take it down and getting it published, I think you should. Hell, if I was still working at my former literary mag, I'd insist on it. :)

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-15 03:08 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]shepenwepet
2005-02-15 08:18 pm UTC (link)
What an absolutely lovely wish.

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-15 08:24 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]_swallow
2005-02-16 10:58 pm UTC (link)
... Publication in one's blog seems, to me, to be like a print-out posted a public bulletin board-- i.e., not actually counting as previous literary publication. But I bend to the better minds who've come before me on this comments page.

Also, hey, nice poem!

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(no subject) - [info]stakebait, 2005-02-17 04:35 pm UTC (Expand)

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