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29th-Apr-2005 01:13 pm
N/G dagsrommer Shacky20
Title: Hungry?
Pairing: Nick/Greg ( is there any other?)
Rating: R Depending on your mood, a little language, no nudity, Sorry!
Summary: Nick got caught watching Greg's ass, and Greg wants to share his noodles with Nick!


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Nick's watching Greg as he sucks those long noodles, when he should really be making fun of Greg for acting like a kid trying to slurp up spaghetti. What grown man still eats that crap? But of course his mind is not focused at all on making fun of the man, his mind was completely elsewhere where Greg's eating choices were concerned. Inside his head all Nick is thinking about is watching Greg suck down those long noodles, his lips puckered so tight around the long strands. They way he hollows his cheeks out as he swallows them down. And now he's putting that fork back in that cup, and slowly opens his mouth to let them slide down that throat of his. All Nick can do is stare as Greg chews his lunch. He's is sure now that the Lab Tech is doing this on purpose, the way he's making those little noises as he's eating. And now there's a little drop of chicken broth barely hanging on his pouty lower lip. There is no way that the Texan is thinking about that drop of broth. And he is definitely NOT thinking about taking his thumb and sliding it along Greg's bottom lip and then tasting it for himself because it was just in Greg's mouth. But the thought of chicken broth mixed with Greg is so tempting he can barely resist.


No sir, he not thinking about that at all, there’s a case, right, he’s working on a case. Remember the pretty girl, model, because it's just Greg eating noodles and OH GOD, there goes that tongue, that gorgeous pink tongue to swipe off that golden liquid from Greg's lip, and now Oh Lord he’s swallowing. How is he supposed to concentrate on work when Greg looks so damn sexy doing something as simple as eating. He’s trying to act natural, have a conversation, but it’s getting more and more difficult. So naturally when Greg walked away he couldn't help but look. He knew he shouldn't, but he just couldn't help himself. He usually wore that damn lab coat which hangs to his knees so no chance to see how those jeans hug his ass nice and tight, and just a small peek. Well OK, maybe not a small peek, maybe a lingering stare, but he can‘t blame himself. And what a mighty fine ass it is in those slightly worn ever so tight jeans. So, this isn't even his fault, it's Greg's. This is all his fault for eating those noodles in front of him, what the hell was Greg thinking. Nick looked and shook his head at his own weakness. And it isn't like he hasn't been throwing himself at me? There’s no way that could all be in his head. He couldn’t have been imagining those looks, the way the Tech could undress him with his eyes. Maybe that was just all wishful thinking on his part. Who the hell knows what goes on in the head of Greg Sanders? Oh Shit, he didn’t just look back here, did he? He couldn’t have seen me, staring, um peeking. If he did Nick knows the Tech wouldn’t just let it go, so how was he going to get out of this one.


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Greg knew Nick was leaning awfully close to him, all of a sudden very interested in his lunch. So, he took the opportunity to check another theory of his, that Nick Stokes did indeed want him. Greg made sure the CSI got a great view of his mouth, and he also make sure to take painstakingly slow bites of his lunch. He kept discreetly looking over at Nick to see where his eyes were focusing on. Greg was getting tired of this back and forth game that has been going on between the two the past three years, since Greg came to the lab. He was beginning to wonder if his incessant flirting was going unnoticed. He was starting to believe that he would have to throw himself across the lab station wearing nothing but his lab coat to get Nick’s attention. But he was sure he caught Nick staring at his ass as he walked down the hall. Maybe the teasingly way he was eating had the desired effect on the CSI that Greg was looking for. Or maybe he had been wrong about Nick all along, but he didn’t think so. The attraction was there, the way Nick would lean into him, and Greg could feel the heat off Nick’s body. And that smell, God that smell, it always got under his skin. It wasn’t colonge, or soap, he didn’t know, but Nick always smelled so damn good. He was surprised he hadn’t already grabbed Nick by the collar and laid one on him in front of the whole Crime Lab. He couldn’t keep on like this, Greg wanted answers, he wanted Nick, and deep down he believed that Nick wanted him to. Now he just needed to find his answers.


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Greg waited patiently in the Lab, watching the locker room closely. He saw Warrick, Sara, and Nick, head in there about fifteen minutes ago knowing the case had been wrapped up. Greg thought it was strange to have the victims own skin under her fingernails, but he never imagined what had actually transpired. Word had traveled fast once the CSI’s figured out what had actually happened to that poor girl. So, now he was waiting, trying to make himself look busy. Sara had walked out about five minutes ago, and now all he needed was for Warrick to leave to finally make his move. So, he cleaned up his lab station, again, stacked up extra files, already put his lab coat up. Now, if he only knew what to say. He knew he caught Nick checking him out when he walked down the hall, but why. How could see bring it up without giving away too much information or giving himself away. He wanted to know if there could be more, but he wasn’t willing to risk their friendship over it. Not one minute later Warrick ambled out of the locker room, and Greg knew this was his chance and he wasn’t going to miss another one.


“Hey Nick, how’d the case go?” Greg asked already knowing how the case went, but wanted to keep his tone casual.


“Hey Greggo, good work there with the DNA, helped out a lot. That poor girl was so messed up dude, can you imagine doing something like that to yourself? I don’t think I’ll ever be able to look at another magazine cover the same way again.” And OK, maybe Greg had read him the wrong way if he’s staring at magazine models.


“Well, if staring at magazine covers of girls is what you’re in to. Some of us have better things to do.”


“Oh really G, what are you in to, besides college cuisine?”


“Well, I consider myself a man of many tastes, and talents. It all depends what you’re looking for?” Greg kept slowly walking closer and closer to Nick as he talked, and his voice was getting a little softer as he spoke. He could see the curiosity in the CSI’s eyes as he got closer to the object of his intentions.


“I don’t think you know what I’m into Greg.” Nick stated back with a stronger accent to his voice and a spark in his eyes Greg was sure wasn’t there before when he was talking about the case.


Nick was now standing against his locker, lost in Greg’s voice. Did it always sound so low and husky, or was he imagining it? Just like he was imagining that Greg was getting awfully close to him. The next thing he knew, Greg was standing right in front of him, about six inches in front of his face.


Greg inched even closer to the older mans face, and leaned in and took his chance. “So Nick, what are you in to, besides a nice view of my ass? Not that I mind, I kind of like that fact that my ass can draw your attention.” And Greg decided then and there that whatever humiliation he may suffer for this later was well worth it to see the look on Nick Stokes face right now. A mix between shock, panic, and a look of underlying lust in his eyes. So, Greg decided the more aggressive approach was obviously working, so he put one hand next to Nick’s head against the locker and pressed against Nick.


“What does it matter to you what I’m in to Greg?” Nick played back.


“Just call me a curious observer. So, what gets to you besides my jeans?”


“Well, since you are so interested” and in one swift move, Nick swiped Greg’s arm down and spun him around, and before he even knew what happened, Greg was pinned against the locker, with Nick leaning into him. “Maybe I enjoy watching you eating. They way you sucked down those damn noodles, making those noises, licking your lips with that tongue, you’d be surprised what I’m into Greg.”


“You never know, maybe were into the same things?” Greg bit his lower lip and released a soft groan as he grabbed Nick‘s denim jacket and pulled him in as close as he could to him and whispered, “You know, I’m also a big believer in sharing, do you want some of my noodles Nick?” He lowered his mouth right next to Nick’s ear, and Nick couldn’t help but shiver at the feel of Greg’s hot breath against him. “Did it turn you on to watch me suck those down? You know I can do other things with my mouth that might interest you.”


To prove his point Greg ground his hard cock into Nick’s obvious erection, and the CSI let out a moan through gritted teeth. “So, you weren’t just being a tease, because I don’t like teases Greg.”


“Your calling me a tease, after wanting you for three years, after all of the flirting. I was practically throwing myself at you, and you call me a tease, maybe I just wanted to get a reaction out of you.”


“You wanted a reaction Greg, you got it.” And with that Nick closed the small space between them and kissed Greg hard, letting him know exactly what he was thinking. But Greg couldn’t think for long, then he felt Nick’s tongue slide into his mouth, and he lost himself in the feeling.


This kiss was purely about lust and wanting and three long years of waiting for his lips to touch his. God it was everything Greg thought it would be and so much more. He took his chance in case Nick realized what he was doing, and where he was doing it at, and grabbed Nick’s ass and pulled it towards him.


“Well Stokes, I do believe that I’m not the only one who can fill out a pair of jeans.” He said as he once again ground his erection into Nick’s. “In several places.”


“Do you always tease when you eat your lunch Greg, because that isn’t very nice, in fact, that’s just plain dirty.”


“Did it work?” Greg inquired as he quirked an eyebrow and slid his hot tongue from Nick’s neck to his ear as he worked his earlobe for several seconds. Nick let out a small plea, begging for more, but then remembered where they were.


“What the hell do you think? Now the only question is, are you just playing games, or are you willing to share more than your lunch?” And then Nick reciprocated the feeling and roughly sucked the tender skin behind Greg’s ear. He got his answer as Greg grabbed his head and pulled Nick right in front of his face.


“Nick, I’d share anything with you, and I can do more than suck on noodles. If I say so myself, you’d be amazed at my talents.” Nick was quiet, with only a steady stare in Greg’s eyes, and Greg thought maybe he’d gone to far, but got the answer he had been waiting for three long fucking years to hear.


“My place is closer, and if we don’t get out of here now, I’m gonna throw you across this bench and fuck you for all your worth, so unless you want to get us fired, let’s get the hell out of here.”


That was all Greg needed to hear and grabbed his jacked. “I’m right behind you. Oh, and nice jeans Stokes.”

Comments 
29th-Apr-2005 07:48 pm (UTC) - hoooooooooot
Anonymous
I suddenly have such a craving for noodles.........

Ally in Scotland
29th-Apr-2005 09:15 pm (UTC) - Re: hoooooooooot
You and me both, hope you enjoyed it!
29th-Apr-2005 08:15 pm (UTC)
Loved this! I love the last line! lol. They both look purdy darn good in those jeans! *laughs* I just love this.
29th-Apr-2005 09:16 pm (UTC)
Yeah, must say it'd be a tie who looked better! I'm so glad you liked this. Still new to this writing thing so reviews help!
29th-Apr-2005 08:16 pm (UTC)
Oooh... *__* Don't wait to long with continuing this, okay? <3
29th-Apr-2005 09:17 pm (UTC)
Thanks again so much for the icons Sillie, they set the whole mood perfect, and they both match so well I had to use them both!

Not sure if I'm gonna do a part two, I'd like to if I can do it right!
29th-Apr-2005 09:25 pm (UTC)
Of course you can do it right. *pats*

And I'm glad you like the icons so much. :3
29th-Apr-2005 09:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks, I'm glad you have faith in me. I'm gonna try, but don't want to screw it up by making bad slash, you know. I started something now I just have to go with it I think.
29th-Apr-2005 09:24 pm (UTC)
good job! And...i'm waiting more,more,more!
29th-Apr-2005 09:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, glad you liked it. I'm gonna do my best.
29th-Apr-2005 10:18 pm (UTC)
Heh... I had noodles for dinner, but now I am craving them again... ang... Now you made noodles hot :D
30th-Apr-2005 03:11 am (UTC)
Ah Gee, thanks, seconds are always a good thing. Glad you liked!
30th-Apr-2005 12:27 am (UTC)
Yay! I loved the scene in the locker room. I'm sure that's happened a couple of times, but the damn writers/editors keep cutting the scenes . . .

More soon, I hope?
30th-Apr-2005 03:12 am (UTC)
I hope so too, and I am so sure they have shared more than one kiss in the locker room. I figured that locker room has seen a lot of action.
30th-Apr-2005 12:31 am (UTC)
Good lord. I want to be noodles. How sad is that??? I. Want. To. Be. Noodles.

or jeans.
30th-Apr-2005 03:11 am (UTC)
Oh Not sad, not sad at all, that was the effect I was hoping for, and I don't know about you, but I've always loved Ramen Noodles.
30th-Apr-2005 03:01 am (UTC) - smut-whore alert!!!
Anonymous
YOU KICK ASS SHACKY!!! This one is even better than the first one of yours I read!!! *hearts shacky*
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Love, Nikka_what from TalkCSI
30th-Apr-2005 03:08 am (UTC) - Re: smut-whore alert!!!
You know, I should have known that was you from the "Smut-Whore Alert", glad you liked it girl, that means a lot, and they still have their clothes on, I may have to change that though. Thanks, you made me blush girl
30th-Apr-2005 03:56 pm (UTC) - I've already commented, but.........
Anonymous
I read this last night, and commented earlier, but I'd just thought I'd let you know that I've just got back from walking three miles in the sunshine to the nearest chinese supermarket, just to buy one of those pots of noodles.

mmmmmmmmm yummy (and well worth the walk, but i'll blame you for the sore feet later)

Ally in Scotland
30th-Apr-2005 05:01 pm (UTC) - Re: I've already commented, but.........
OK, WOW I do believe this is the biggest compliment I could have recieved, you have made my day. I really need to do a second part now, I am just afraid sometimes the imagination is better than the written word. Thanks again, and I am so glad you liked it.
30th-Apr-2005 09:59 pm (UTC) - Re: I've already commented, but.........
Anonymous
(can you make the sequel about indian food, the indiam market is closer)

*feet soaking in hot water and relaxing salts*

ONLY JOKING

Ally In Scotland
1st-May-2005 06:04 am (UTC)
OH my Fucking GOD!!!! that's about all i can get out... that was so fricking hot it singed my brain out...my ears are ringing... i need to go find my sweetie excuse me ... (goes to find husband *must get laid*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

tell me there's more cumming please *pout*
1st-May-2005 04:28 pm (UTC)
Pouting will get you everywhere, and I do believe that definitley ties with the biggest compliment next to walking three miles for noodles. My husband is probaby insanely jealous of your also. I am thinking up a sequel, I mean who can eat dinner without a little Dessert right???
1st-May-2005 04:54 pm (UTC)
Desert!!! you have my compleat attion, *big perkie smile* I can do Bannas Foster! No wait; bad! fire Greg no bad ... Hmmm let me see ..Ah Cheese Cake * bounces* thats ALLLL ways good, 'specally any choch, or cherry sugarry lickable sause dribbling doun chins and other body parts. * hmmm gets idea for later* ...O ooooo OR there's allllways my sweetie's fav... the BJ, after eating mint ice ceram. *imagination not nessarry LOL*
12th-May-2005 04:32 pm (UTC)
There now is a sequel to this gwenn442 at the same place, nickngreg LJ is your interested "Breakfast Anyone?"
1st-May-2005 03:35 pm (UTC)
this scene is familar. i remember greg didn't wear lab gown,
but tight shirt and jean, with name tag tagged low on hip.
He was eating NODDLE and nick suddenly looked very interested,
like your desciption. At that time I KNOW GREGGO WAS SEDUCING.
AND OUR BOYS ARE DEFINTELY INTO EACH OTHER.

but which episode is it?
1st-May-2005 04:26 pm (UTC)
Ah, lunch will never be the same, and you have a very good memory, Greg was wearing his name tag on his jean pocket! It was from "The Hunger Artist" season finale of season 2.
2nd-May-2005 01:18 am (UTC)
wow, i love fist time stories with the boys. And this one was hot. The danger of getting caught at work. The urgency but the desire to take their time at the same time. Just hot. trying to catch breath. Keep up the good work.

F

PS loved Not Superman btw.
2nd-May-2005 01:23 am (UTC)
Thanks, I appreciate it, trying to keep the mood going. Glad you liked the other one, that was my first smut fic and was really nervous about that one, glad you enjoyed them and thanks for letting me know, I appreciate it.
2nd-May-2005 05:58 pm (UTC)
are you willing to share more than your lunch?

Oh my... aggressive Nick, I like that.

That scene in Hunger Artist was very subtle but full of potential, I think you found it!
6th-May-2005 08:09 pm (UTC)
*claps* Excellent! Nick is always checking Greg out. I love how you captured it.
6th-May-2005 08:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks, and look at that pic, he so cannot deny it, he is checking out his ass!
6th-May-2005 08:19 pm (UTC)
He so is! Oh man. *shakes head*
1st-Aug-2005 06:00 pm (UTC)
I will never be able to look at noddles the same way again. lol. damn, that was hot. wish i wasn't sitting here in work reading it.
1st-Aug-2005 06:36 pm (UTC) - Hee!
Thanks, glad you liked it, now you need to read "Breakfast Anyone?" The boys have a food Fetish in this series, and it really wasn't gonna be a series, but after this one, some requested a Part 2, then a Part 3, hope you like the others as well.
1st-Aug-2005 07:36 pm (UTC) - Re: Hee!
I'm making my way to the others, but I had to go take lunch break before my boss got mad at me. Did u happen to check out the link to the fic i gave u?
14th-Sep-2005 09:28 pm (UTC)
Fucking excellent mental pictures of Mr. Sanders eating noodles there... very well done. Wow, wow, wow.
14th-Sep-2005 09:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you , that pic inspired me, and the following were just my own imagination gone wild, with food of course. And it was all Nick's fault for staring at Greg's ass anyway.
15th-Sep-2005 10:33 pm (UTC)
Yes of course... it's all Nicky's fault :-D
16th-Sep-2005 12:20 am (UTC)
Have you read the two follow ups to this story yet? This series was probably my most popular one to date, not including and "Lying in the Bed I Made" series cause that hot quite a response, but Hungry series is all about the hot smut.

Reclaiming Life was pretty popular over at ff.net, I wrote that with [info]kristen999 and we got like 220 reviews, and it's up for best post multi chapter GD fic for the fanfic awards, that's my best chance I figured, "Hungry Series" is up for two awards actually, but I don't hold out much hope, up against some much better stories I think.

Kelly
17th-Sep-2005 08:36 pm (UTC)
Ohh i will :-D
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