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Sting

  • Jan. 25th, 2005 at 9:00 AM
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Some months ago, the excellent James D. Macdonald, who (like those superlative crusaders, Ann Crispin and Victoria Strauss) is always on the watch for scams to rip off new writers, proposed a sting aimed at PublishAmerica, specifically at their false premises.

I should say that I have no objection to vanity presses--the ones who are honest about the goods and services they offer. A vanity press, in fact, is perfect for some projects, where writers of niche books need a printer so they can take the product to an audience they know is waiting: a friend did this with a book about the life of an early twentieth century car designer. She had it printed by a reputable vanity press, took the book to rare car shows, and make a tidy bundle--so successful I believe she went back for a couple of printings before her market tapped out.

What I loathe and despise about PA is that their advertizing tries to suggest in every way possible short of actual promises that they distribute the book--that going with them will get your book into the big book chains.

They also claim that they reject a lot of books, and only pick publishable books. Oh yeah?

So I volunteered to join this project: I was give a couple of names and a line or so of plot. I did not know where my portion would fall in the story. I sat down and as fast as I could, generated several pages of dreck, making sure to use bad grammar, terrible punctuation, as well as POV bobbles, maid-and-butler dialogue, every worn out phrase I could remember.

Well, a day or two ago, the people running the sting got an acceptance letter (which can be seen on the "see pdf example" bar on the web-page below) for this fumous reekaroo, so bad that my middle actually hurt from laughing when I paged through the, ah, "work", put up for the first time yesterday. Nobody knew how many writers were involved, no one knew what the plot was--where their story would fit--and writers participating ranged from long-time authors to a couple of kids in high school.

Anyway, as soon as word started proliferating out from SFF.NET yesterday, the PA people quite naturally caught wind--or whiff--and apparently rescinded their acceptance, claiming the, ah, book is "not ready yet."

So the sting can't go all the way to the end. But the originators have been encouraged by others, reading samples of this pinnacle of squalidity, to print it anyway, and sell copies for fund raisers, like the SFWA Emergency Medical Fund, which is the current plan.

So anyway, here is the link for anyone curious to check it out. (BTW, it turned out the opening chapter is mine)

http://www.lulu.com/content/102550

Edited to add: [info]beth_bernobich has more links here

Comments

[info]beth_bernobich wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:22 pm (UTC)
It looks like we cross-posted. :)

I do wish I had signed up for a chapter when Jim announced the project, but something distracted me. But oh, how delicious, how awful, how wonderfully perfect the final result. I hurt myself laughing, and that was just from chapter one.

If you read my post, you'll see the timing of PA's "withdrawal" is rather interesting. Jim announced the sting on the AbsoluteWrite forum, which PA monitors. Three hours later, the point person received the "we changed our minds" email.

[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:27 pm (UTC)
Oh, you've got the links to work--people curious to explore further should visit your posting.
[info]beth_bernobich wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:31 pm (UTC)
I have links to the manuscript, acceptance letter, and the sample contract.

And I must tell Matthew that you wrote the first chapter. We read it together and we were both shrieking with laughter. Rob thought we had gone insane.

[info]calimac wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:25 pm (UTC)
This reminds me somewhat of the story of a novel called Naked Came the Stranger, which I trust you are familiar with. It was a clever idea then, and it still is today. Authored by "Travis Tea" - oh dear. Was that the name that was actually on the submission?
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:27 pm (UTC)
I don't know--but it's the one on it now.

Yes, I know about the Naked joke, plus the Jerzy Kozinsky one as well.
[info]beth_bernobich wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:33 pm (UTC)
No, they didn't use "Travis Tea" for the submission name. Jim made that change when he set up the version for Lulu.com.

And yes, the project organizers were making a deliberate nod to Naked Came the Stranger.

[info]the_numinous_1 wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:29 pm (UTC)
I read that first chapter and just about wet myself, I was laughing so hard. Truly, a masterpiece - it warms my very tittles.
[info]rachelmanija wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:32 pm (UTC)
"Need pee." ;)

Ahh, the good old nursie novel-- I wonder if anyone still publishes those.
[info]kate_nepveu wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:36 pm (UTC)
The opening chapter was yours? I dl'ed the rtf Jim posted last night and couldn't get past the second page, it was so bad. Congratulations!
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:41 pm (UTC)
Oh, but you must persist! Not in my chapter--it's pretty much the same through--but some of them are brilliantly funny, they are so awful.
[info]kate_nepveu wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:44 pm (UTC)
If I can't make time to read the Bujold ARC sitting on my coffee table at home looking reproachfully at me . . .
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:46 pm (UTC)
Holy crom!


*sitting up as though stung"

Yep. that's busy, awright!
[info]kate_nepveu wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:51 pm (UTC)
Yup. Back to it, but have some puppies as a congratulations:

http://www.livejournal.com/community/baaaaabyanimals/409299.html
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 06:41 pm (UTC)
My daughter and I both squeeed!
[info]mkhobson wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 05:42 pm (UTC)
Of course, now that PublishAmerica has recinded their acceptance, they will probably twist the facts to support the fact that their "system" works, and that the badly written MS was one of the ones they "rejected."

I actually liked the first chapter. I was very engaged with the sexy boobies.

M
[info]beth_bernobich wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 06:51 pm (UTC)
I've been following the updates on AW. The acceptance email is currently with counsel, along with the copy of the sample contract. Things could get interesting.
[info]mkhobson wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 07:07 pm (UTC)
Well, since no contract was executed, it would seem that the offer can be recinded without too much legal difficulty (especially if PA is willing to abandon all claims to their big $1 advance) Kinda makes me wish that the "reveal" could have been delayed until after the plotters had a signed contract in hand.

But I'm sure there are great lawyers involved here, so, as you say, this should get interesting.

[info]amberdine wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 06:08 pm (UTC)
Urgle.

Read about 1/4 of the way through and I feel ill.

Good job, guys. I... guess. :)

[info]penmage wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 06:36 pm (UTC)
I am sitting at home, sick and bored, and this is the most entertaining thing I have heard and read all day. This novel is unbelievably bad - kudos to you! I am seriously impressed.
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 06:40 pm (UTC)
It's one of those that you could open to any page and read snippets at a party, and have everybody howling.

*feel better quick!*

(Maybe this thing will kill germs!)
[info]quiller77 wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 06:46 pm (UTC)
Read chapter one. Glad I wasn't eating anything at the time. You know, if you ever decide to give up writing *real* novels, I think you could have a career writing for TV soaps. :-)
unwrecked wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 07:05 pm (UTC)
Oh, this "Sting" was a master stroke!

Congrats on the "sale," Mr. Tea!!!!
[info]faerie_writer wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 07:40 pm (UTC)
Okay, that's *too* funny, Sherwood!! So glad someone put it those PA scum.

~Maggie :)
[info]stillsostrange wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 07:56 pm (UTC)
That is beautiful. It's made my day much happier, if a bit less gramatical.
[info]stillsostrange wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 07:57 pm (UTC)
The joy has also left me unable to spell.
[info]zhaneel69 wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 09:19 pm (UTC)
*ow*

Lied down. *dies*

Eeeeeeviiiiiiilllll!

Zhaneel
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 11:20 pm (UTC)
and "laid in bed"
[info]zhaneel69 wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 09:22 pm (UTC)
Incidentally, you still wrote too well. You should have broken more rules and been truly horrid. I know you can. C'mon. You let your actual author in there to give a cohesive storyline!

Zhaneel
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 25th, 2005 11:21 pm (UTC)
*hanging head in shame*
[info]zhaneel69 wrote:
Jan. 26th, 2005 07:51 pm (UTC)
I'll forgive you. Just this once, mind. ;-)

Soooo cool.

Zhaneel
[info]madwriter wrote:
Jan. 26th, 2005 02:38 am (UTC)
I wish I'd seen this in time to hook up with it. I can write really good crap all day long. :D
[info]betty_m wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2005 05:06 am (UTC)
life is like a toboggan down the snow hill of life
Given a universe of choices, lol, I especially liked this gem: " Her sisters, all of them far more beautiful than she, had coasted through life like a toboggan down the snow hill of life."

Congratulations on a job well done.

[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2005 01:05 pm (UTC)
Re: life is like a toboggan down the snow hill of life
*g*
[info]dragonet2 wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2005 11:12 pm (UTC)
Atlanta Nights
I laughed so hard at the lulu.com reviews that I cried. It's as craptastic as Circle's. And Inside Circle's. ("Maybe if we beat these two books together hard enough, we can even out the punctuation.")
[info]sartorias wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2005 11:32 pm (UTC)
Re: Atlanta Nights
ROFL!!!!!