Beryll ([info]rynthjan) wrote,
@ 2004-05-14 09:00:00
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Current mood: amused

Drabble: "A Beauty To Die For"
Title: "A Beauty To Die For"
Author: Beryll
Rating: G
Pairing: none
Summary: Mirror, mirror on the wall, who's the fairest of them all?
Disclaimer: Not mine... sigh
Warning: Humor, Drabble
Website: Fafnir's Lair http://www.morningchilde.com

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The light of the morning sun drenches the walls of Troy in light, giving the god forged walls a golden sheen. On the walls are arrayed the people of Troy to witness the terrible might of all of Greece brought against them.

Standing on a hilltop close to the shore are the mightiest of their foes. Agamemnon, Menelaos, Odysseus and of course great Achilles.

They watch the gathered warriors embark from their ships.

And they shield their eyes to catch a glimpse of their enemy.

It is Achilles who speaks in awed wonder:

"I can see her on the wall. What lips, soft and sweet, what noblesse to her radiant face, what gentleness and warmth to her eyes. That truly is a beauty to raise a thousand ships for. That is a beauty a man can die for."

He pauses a moment. Then adds in slight confusion:

"But I thought she was blonde, not brunette..."

Menelaos voice is arctic as he answers:

"That is Paris."




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[info]osirisbrackhaus
2004-05-14 04:42 am UTC (link)
Yeeho!!!

Made my day, hon.
Love ya!

HUGS
Osiris

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[info]mysti112
2004-05-14 08:56 am UTC (link)
Oh that was wonderful! :)

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wonderful
(Anonymous)
2004-05-15 01:12 am UTC (link)
just lovely funny XDD

Kiri.

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[info]ladyjeanetta
2004-05-15 01:40 am UTC (link)
**grins**

Absolutely delightful. Definitely brightened my morning. Cheers!

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[info]darkstar_night
2004-05-15 06:33 am UTC (link)
HA! I love it!

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[info]brandybuccaneer
2004-05-15 10:11 pm UTC (link)
rotflol! :-D Excellent! Certain to cheer the reader up considerably. ;-)

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[info]hemlocke
2004-05-16 03:39 am UTC (link)
ah ha ha! ^^ I love this - short, effective, funny with no wastage in words. I showed it to all my friends and we laughed so much. Wicked.

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[info]xmidnight_dollx
2004-05-22 10:43 am UTC (link)
I am just now reading this and I thought it was so funny! May I post the link to it in my journal,so some people on my friends list can see it?

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[info]rynthjan
2004-05-22 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much for the praise.

and of course you may post the links!

Hugs
Beryll

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[info]xmidnight_dollx
2004-05-23 11:04 am UTC (link)
Yourwelcome! It was a cool short story.

Thanks! I'll be posting them soon!

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[info]katherine_15
2004-05-24 08:59 am UTC (link)
Hee! HEE! Hee!

*hysterical giggles*

That was awesome! And v v true!

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