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and now a piece from donovan!

  • Sep. 19th, 2002 at 10:18 PM
eulalia, calm
Sartre said that hell was other people.

He was partly right.

Hell is forever walking down a street in the black dark night. The buildings are desolate, abandoned, and the alleys are wide and gaping, full of malicious whispers and soft laughter. If you stop, the consequences will be unimaginable, so you keep walking, always looking behind your shoulder, always running past the never ending gamut of alleys.

Hell is lying awake in your bed with a burned out nightlight on the wall. Shadows scratch against the windows and noises you don't want explained hiss and thump on your doors. You want a drink of water, you want to piss, but you're paralyzed. You can't even piss yourself because if you make even a little noise they'll see you, they'll know you, and then you're dead.


Hell is being locked in a room with a phone that's constantly ringing. You won't answer the phone because every time you do it's just breathing. Soft at first, but each time you pick it up it's louder and harsher, coming closer. You can hear the hate even in just that breath, and you know that whoever's on the other line has the keys.

Hell is fear.

I should know. I live there.

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It r lame, I know. But it was in my head, and wanted out, so out it goes.

Comments

[info]lostboydv wrote:
Sep. 19th, 2002 09:18 pm (UTC)
Ooh, that was really cool. It reminded me of Gaiman's writing.
twolle wrote:
Sep. 19th, 2002 09:36 pm (UTC)
I'm gonna have to read Gaiman, then :P Twas cool.
[info]lostboydv wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2002 06:54 am (UTC)
Re:
Yeah, you should. Pick up his book called "Neverwhere."
subservient wrote:
Sep. 19th, 2002 09:37 pm (UTC)
Envy of your mad skillz rising.

Am seriously beginning to like Donovan.

Coherency = no.
[info]natethecat wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2002 03:15 am (UTC)
freaky
I dont know what to say. That was just wierd, unimaginably freaky-wierd.
[info]scrapyard wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2002 05:39 am (UTC)
WOW, Lynnet. Holy f***ing WOW. Remind me to talk to you about this one soooon. *_*
[info]theshadowplay wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2002 07:02 am (UTC)
Niiiiiiiiiiice :DDDDD
[info]geminion wrote:
Sep. 20th, 2002 02:28 pm (UTC)
Dude, that was seriously awesome. And not just because I have a Donovan bias. <.< >.> <.<

Ireul, you scary scary biznatch, you.
oddperspective wrote:
Jul. 17th, 2003 04:27 pm (UTC)
Awww. Please don't make me love Donovan. My head'll explode.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Sep. 30th, 2003 12:10 pm (UTC)
OHH GOD!
I just don't know where did you got that skills! Jesus, when I try to put something in a piece of paper, ideas and toughs just shoot each other and i don't write a simple word :P

I loved Donovan's since he's monologue in Claris bedroom, you know, about fear and stuff. I just f*ckin loved this side story... Despite Donovan being a mad seriall killer (lol), i guess it's the most astonishing, interesting and so much other stuff character.

Keep the good stuff on! And don't forget Claris' Project!

~Nicolau