Lizzen ([info]liminalliz) wrote,
@ 2005-08-23 21:51:00
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kara/lee ficlet, yay
Because I need more spammy Kara/Lee fic (yes, flist, this is a HINT)—



The five times Lee Adama tells her that he loves her

The first time Lee Adama tells her that he loves her is when she obviously lets him win at cards because he's drunk and his hand in on her knee and she's feeling reckless. He says it rather slyly but loud enough to hear and she counts three seconds before the rest of her fellow pilots and gamblers take notice. She wins the next three rounds.

The second time Lee Adama tells her that he loves her is when he's trying to get her to talk and it slips out of his mouth as he's telling her that he's her friend and that she can tell him anything. She seems to remember that the CAG is not supposed to be her friend, but he's not really the CAG anymore. And what was that middle part that slipped out about this love thing?

The third time Lee Adama tells her he loves her is when she slams her fist into that pretty face of his (again) and demands a reason. It's not good enough, she thinks, and she can't look him in the eye.

The fourth time Lee Adama tells her that he loves her is when she's coming beneath him, unable to keep from sighing out his name as she reads the three words repeating and repeating on his lips. It's more than sweet, she thinks. Lee Adama loves me and she refuses to shut everything down to focus on the physicality of skin against skin and the wildly spreading pleasure shuddering through her -- she just focuses on his face, his eyes, and those quickly moving lips as he expertly has her perfectly captured if only for these brief moments.

The fifth time Lee Adama tells her that he loves her is when she finds him on the hospital bed pieced back together from the many parts. He weakly smiles and he says it just out of the blue and with no prompting. He's died too many times for her to not take this chance again and she repeats it back like a prayer. He grins and looks so much younger all of a sudden and closes his eyes, instantly asleep. She realizes that she does not regret telling him.



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[info]ilanabean42
2005-08-24 02:57 am UTC (link)
Aww. I'm too incoherent to give proper feedback, but I like it lots.

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 04:53 am UTC (link)
Oooh, thanks! :)

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[info]fairnymph
2005-08-24 03:52 am UTC (link)
Ooh. I needed this! *loves*

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 04:54 am UTC (link)
Oh yes, I'm in this continual hunger for a stream of Kara/Lee fic with kissing. THERE WILL NEVER BE ENOUGH OF IT. *craves*

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[info]lytarules
2005-08-24 04:48 am UTC (link)
Very cool, Liz. Nicely concise, and it... caught me. I like it a lot!

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 04:55 am UTC (link)
Thanks! :)

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[info]anr
2005-08-24 07:07 am UTC (link)
eee! Kara/Lee!

Loved it, hon. Very sweet. :)

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 12:37 pm UTC (link)
Eeeee! They're just so snogable. DAMNIT. Hee! Thanks.

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[info]stars_like_dust
2005-08-24 07:26 am UTC (link)
EEE!

I shall claim this as a birthday fic for MEEE. Even though you didn't mean it like that. YAY!

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 12:38 pm UTC (link)
OMG! AWESOME! *laughs* Birthday?! *investigates*

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[info]spoonishly
2005-08-24 09:31 am UTC (link)
Oh, the last one killed me ded.

Nice.

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 12:38 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!! :)

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[info]fairnymph
2005-08-24 01:38 pm UTC (link)
Btw, I friended you a while ago and I've been stalking you. Hope you don't mind. ;)

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[info]liminalliz
2005-08-24 03:20 pm UTC (link)
*peers out window to look at you and your binoculars, OMFG*

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[info]voleuse
2005-08-24 03:39 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww!

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[info]centerspire
2005-08-24 03:44 pm UTC (link)
*gulp* That was too much for this early in the morning! Very sweet!

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[info]ancarett
2005-08-24 03:47 pm UTC (link)
That was gorgeous, especially times four and five. . . .

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[info]danahid
2005-08-24 04:06 pm UTC (link)
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing it.

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[info]literarylemming
2005-08-24 04:18 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that's just too beautiful for words. "The fifth time Lee Adama tells her that he loves her is when she finds him on the hospital bed pieced back together from the many parts." That line just blew me away. Adding to favorites!

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[info]zorb
2005-08-24 04:27 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Figures he'd have to say it five times before she believed it. *hugs hot but frakked up pilots* Great job!

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[info]rawles
2005-08-24 05:02 pm UTC (link)
Mmmmm. Lee/Kara.

I love how Lee/Kara is having a bit of an upsurge at Home. There was a drought for a while.

This is lovely. The last part sort of broke me a little.

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[info]rawles
2005-08-24 05:04 pm UTC (link)
Uhm, that should say AFTER Home.

I can type. Really, I can.

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[info]xsomethingbluex
2005-08-24 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Awesome :D

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[info]poisontaster
2005-08-24 05:44 pm UTC (link)
For the most part, I'm so burnt out on K/L. Stuff like this reminds me why I like them, after all. Very nice.

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Awww...just sweet and pretty
[info]rabid1st
2005-08-24 06:28 pm UTC (link)
I like the evocative language you use. It kind of gave me shivers. Very well done.

Rae

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[info]zephyrrs
2005-08-24 07:53 pm UTC (link)
awwww....snuggle.

thanks.

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[info]adafrog
2005-08-24 10:16 pm UTC (link)
Great fic. The last one made me kinda sad, but still was wonderful.
Thanks.

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[info]themoon72
2005-08-24 10:32 pm UTC (link)

Very Pretty.

Thanks for sharing.

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[info]liliumscribe
2005-08-25 02:37 am UTC (link)
What a lovely idea for a fic...
Thank you for sharing.
*Wonders when those two will ever admit what is obvious to everyone*

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[info]shadowserenity
2005-08-25 10:06 am UTC (link)
So, so lovely.

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[info]carrielh
2005-08-25 07:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I loved this! So gorgeous and so totally them. This was my favorite line:

The third time Lee Adama tells her he loves her is when she slams her fist into that pretty face of his (again) and demands a reason.

Thanks for writing this.

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[info]rosiespark
2005-08-25 10:18 pm UTC (link)
Loves muchly. Especially the fourth time. And the fifth - she repeats it back like a prayer. Lovely!

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[info]svilleficrecs
2005-08-25 10:40 pm UTC (link)
Lee is so totally an "I love you man" drunk. This was adorable. :) Thank you!

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[info]wisteria_
2005-08-26 05:20 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is darling, and absolutely perfect for the two of them. Thanks for sharing!

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[info]lage_nom_ai
2005-08-26 12:44 pm UTC (link)
I really liked how you paced this story--it had a great flow to it, especially as you built to four and five (though I really liked three, too!). Lovely work. Thanks for sharing!

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indieosikpunk
2005-08-29 12:38 am UTC (link)
"she just focuses on his face, his eyes, and those quickly moving lips as he expertly has her perfectly captured if only for these brief moments."

Best. Line. Ever. Oh, yeah.

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[info]bantha_fodder
2005-08-30 04:17 am UTC (link)
mmm. pilot!sex.

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[info]widget285
2005-09-05 03:21 pm UTC (link)
That was lovely. And that last one was the perfect payoff.

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[info]cadenzamuse
2008-01-25 05:18 am UTC (link)
I have a cold. And I'm very tired. And I have to get up early.

Which is why I'm curled up on a corner of my couch whispering oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please end up this way. Yes, that must be why. :-P

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