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July 21st, 2008

Monday!

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Hello!
I almost forgot that it is Monday. It's been a busy week between writing the book and watching the storms. The storms had a bad habit of hitting right about the time I was really starting to write. I can't complain too much, though. Across the river, they're still without power in some places. I got lucky here and just had a couple blips.
I am a bit behind on the book, but not by much. I might get caught up yet tonight. I'm over 40,000 so I'm on the last leg of the book, and I think I'm going to do fine. Finally. It's even turning out to be a lot more fun than it was when I was so worried about it. (grin)
I'm sure as I get closer to the ending I'll start going stark raving mad again. But that's okay. I generally work pretty well when I get to that stage.
I sent off a submission today. I haven't been doing enough of those lately. I am not one of those people who frets over things once they are out in the mail, but I do tend to fiddle with them quite a bit before hand. I have learned that I need to say 'time to go' and do it, rather than let myself keep messing around. This is especially true in cases where I have other things going on, and I'm as likely to just let something sit, and then start fiddling with it again later, rather than send it off when I should. Sometimes you just have to let go.
The great thing about the publication world is that they always need something new to go on the shelves. Think about it: every single month each publisher has to come out with a number of new books. They don't slack off because if they do, those spots on the shelves go to a different publisher. They are also always looking for a new talent so they can have the next new big writer.
Of course, you have to be a good writer to make it. If you aren't willing to keep working harder and make improvements, you can always just stick with self-publishing and hope for the best. Lots of people are happy on the Internet, but there are a lot of us who want something a little more difficult to achieve. So we work harder at it, and sometimes we make that right connection. It's not easy, but then few things that are worth working for are easy.
And it's almost midnight! I'll get this uploaded and get back to work!

July 14th, 2008

Moving forward

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I am happy to report that for the most part, the book is moving along just fine now. I'm inching up toward 35,000 words and trying to do about 1500 a day on it. I have been finding all kinds of interesting little things to add in. Now that my mind is finally focused on the work, it's going much better. I'm really enjoying it, too. As long as I can stick close to my current schedule, I don't see any problems with getting it finished well ahead of time.
That's my hope, anyway. Oh, and even while I was writing this, I came up with an ending plan that will really help to tie everything together. This is really going well!
I've been having real fun doing background work for some of the sections in this book. It's made me pull out some of the science books I haven't looked at for a while -- the Cosmos book by Scientific American, Language Instinct by Steven Pinker, A Traveler's Guide to Mars by Hartman... great books for science fiction writers. Of course, they all lead to even more background work, and my Britannica's have really gotten a work out lately. And yes, it is inspiring me with new fiction ideas, as well as the nonfiction stuff.
We are having a little trouble with Edmond who is going to have to go get a shot tomorrow, I think. He is very sensitive to bug bites, and even though I've put the Advantage Frontline stuff on him, he is still losing fur in spots -- including where I put the Frontline, poor guy. He's not too bothered by it all, but some of the bites are looking bad and he won't stop scratching them and making them worse. Just as bad as a kid sometimes, right?

July 7th, 2008

That's better

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The nonfiction book is finally starting to move.  I found the problem, I think, that was holding me back. I had the order wrong, and because of that, I couldn't get a flow of information from one section to the next.  I haven't actually shuffled the order yet, but now that I think about how I want it to go, I have found that I have far less trouble moving from one section to the next.  I'm somewhere over 24,000 words on the project, and I've started enjoying the work again.  So my plan not to work on anything else until I got this done has turned out to be a good one.  It's forced me to focus on the work, rather than bouncing off to something else just because it was (at that moment) more fun to do.
I'm starting to truly enjoy this book, in fact. Remembering everything about main sequence stars, gravity parameters for world creation, cultural anthropology for aliens, why Latin was so important to communications.... it has been a lot of fun again. I am starting to think that I won't have much trouble finishing out this book. I'm coming up on the half way mark for the word count, and I still have to go back and write in a sort of 'what if' exercise every three pages or so, as well as doing an introduction and conclusion to each chapter. I am waiting on those pieces until I actually get the book in the order I want, but I am guessing that just adding those in right now would bring the total word count up close to 30k.
So that's put me in a better mood.
Other things are not going as well. Guy, the great cat that showed up in winter, took very ill again, and the vet fears it is cancer. We'll have the blood reports back today, and if it is cancer, he's not coming back home. At least I know that he had a few months with good food and companionship, rather than just being dumped out without anyone to care for him. I'll miss him, though.
But the boys (Edmond Black Kitty and Zaphod's Just a Cat) are doing well. Edmond has some sores on his neck because he scratched at some bites, but I just got the very expensive flea stuff on him again, so he'll do better. He is very sensitive to bites, poor guy. I still need to do three more cats with this stuff, but they're the ones that are somewhat hard to do. I'll have to open canned food to get their attention.   Maybe they do that on purpose, now that I think about it. Good way to get the food they really want, right?
Russ plans to come back home in about a month. I plan to have the book done by then, and he will be doing some reading/editing for me and help me with the index for the beast. All in all, it looks pretty good.
So I guess it's time to get back to work! Especially since both boys are in front of the monitor and I can't see what I'm typing. I think it must be lunch time.



June 30th, 2008

The annoyance of trying something different

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I am pretty much set in my ways on a number of things. I don't like change -- but I've dealt with quite a bit of it in the last half year. I always get snarly when something isn't the way I expect it to be, and when I have to deal with things I usually don't deal with. I manage to handle it all just fine, but I'm a bear going into it.
Oddly, that's not usually true about anything related to writing. I try different genres, different styles (as much as is possible in that one) and even different forms of publication. While I think that traditional publication, in both print and electronic format, is the best way to go for many people, that hasn't stopped me from trying other ways, including offering material for free from my website on several occasions. I do what is best for the particular material. It's worked out well for me, and by being so diverse, I am never trapped in one place when an opportunity arrives. I have had publishers come to me more than once asking for something, because they know I can deliver it, even if it is somewhat outside my usual work.
It's an interesting life in that respect. There's so many different things to try, and I can't understand why some people needlessly limit themselves to any one genre or publication type.  
Of course, there are readers who prefer one type of publication to another as well -- and I find that equally odd -- except in the case of people who find it easier to read a print book. Some people tell me they can't read books on computer.  Of course, I often hear this from people who spend hours and hours in chat at FM -- so I don't know quite how much of it I believe.
 (grin)
I have a sore hand tonight.  This is already more typing than I intended to do.

June 23rd, 2008

A long, fun weekend

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Russ is heading back to New York. We had a nice weekend and even managed to get a few things done. It was a pleasant anniversary, and nice to just spend the time together. Now it's time to seriously get back to work, of course. I have one project I've fallen behind on and really need to buckle down and get the first draft finished. I don't think it's going to be so difficult, if I can just focus on it! I'm about 12,000 words into it, and I need 60,000.   I have been up and down with this one -- some parts that I wrote and just didn't like and cut out again, but I think I'm on the right track this time. I hope so!  It is a nonfiction book, so that takes longer to write, but even so, I don't see any real huge problems. I have an outline that has already been Okayed by the publisher. He really liked my ideas and the section I wrote and sent him.
Just have to focus!
Also need to get Vision put together, work on the end of the month stuff for FM, and probably dozens of other things that I can't think of right now.
We did get the AC working over here, which will be a huge help through the rest of the summer. The phone is partly working -- also a big help. The vet is paid and the guys have what medications they should have. We picked up some food, and ate out at a couple places. We spent a day at DeSoto Wildlife Refuge and had a great time -- way too much water there this year and a few areas flooded, but it was great for pictures.
Tonight I'm a bit worn out. It was a long weekend, but a fun one. I hope Russ can get back home in a few weeks rather than a few months. But for now, it's back to focusing on the work at hand!
Or maybe on napping. Either is possible.

June 16th, 2008

Busy Week

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It's been a busy week. I've had three cats spending nights at the kitty hospital. One was Guy, who is a stray who had obviously been someone's cat and turned up abandoned at my house this winter. He's really a nice cat, but I can't bring him in. Edmond has absolute fits every time he sees the cat. Guy got sick first. My wonderful vet people came to the house, checked him over and gave me some medication for him. After three days it was apparent he was doing worse, so they came and got him and kept him over night, got him fixed up a bit, and brought him back.
By then Edmond and Zaphod were ill. We started with medication, but they kept getting worse, and the vet people came and got both of them. They spent three days with the vet, and Zaphod is still pretty congested, but over all they're doing well. And Guy is doing better, though he's still not completely cleared up.
I have to give medication to all three of them -- a pill to Zaphod and liquid to Guy and Edmond. They've all been remarkably good about it.
Having sick cats upset my writing, but I'm getting back into it. I'll have another 'break' in my routine this weekend when Russ comes home for our anniversary. Yay!
Writing is going very well now that things have settled a bit, though. I'm happy with the work I've gotten done in the last couple days.    I do need to start focusing on closings again, though! Usually I don't have so many projects floating around, and since we're at the midway through the year, I think I better start looking at ending a couple of these things!
Oh, and I have to remember to write to one of my publishers and get a clarification on a contract I need to sign. That might be a good plan, too! With so much writing-related stuff going on, sometimes those little details slip past me. (grin)
My cork board beside my desk is covered in notes for various stories. It makes me smile when I look over at them for some reason, even though they represent a lot of work to do. Or maybe that's the reason I smile -- I love writing so much, that seeing all those lovely little notes about stories, including some outline notes and some character/place notes, just looks like fun to me. 
I think I'm probably crazed. It sure is fun, though!

June 10th, 2008

I'm here! Really!

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Well, just a little past midnight. I started writing this before midnight, but I'm not going to get it posted in time, especially since I usually write on Word (like now) and post afterwards. It's much easier for me to edit on this program.
You know, yesterday I had a great topic for this journal. I should have either written it then or at least made a note of it, because it's escaped my little brain now. That leaves me with the usual topics. Like cats. The guys are mostly fine, but I have a very ill stray on the porch. Last week my vet people came by, looked at him and gave me some medication for him. He just isn't doing well on it. So tomorrow they're coming by to get him instead. I hope that getting him into the cat carrier doesn't turn out to be a problem.
Writing. There's another subject I'm always willing to discuss. I am having such an incredible good time with the background work for my new sf novel! I already have over 12,000 words in notes and such, and far more to go. I can see it coming together from beginning to end, the characters growing as I watch them, and the aliens and their cultures take form. It makes me wish I had more time to devote to it, but I do have a couple other things that really do need to get done! 
I have rules that I apply to my writing. One is that I finish everything I start, and the other is that I finish it within a year. That means the current draft, not necessarily the final one (unless that's the draft I am working on, of course). This keeps me from doing a couple things -- starting stuff and just filing it away with a 'later' attitude that really means I won't do anything, and from starting things without having a very good feel for the story, even if I don't do pre-work for it. it also means that I work through problems, rather than putting the work aside and going for something easier. Sometimes the fixes work and sometimes they don't, but I know I have learned more from the difficult problem stories than I have from the easy ones. That makes sense when you think about it. However, I really like the ones where I've worked out the problems ahead of time, like I'm trying to do with the SF book. I so look forward to writing that one!
The great thing about the art of writing is that it is an art, not a job. I know there are people who can harness their creativity to make it a nine-to-five job, and who can turn out material to specification without much trouble. That's not quite the same as having a contract to write something since there will still be a beginning and ending to the work, though it can feel like it sometimes if you lose your way. I've had that happen once, but when I stepped back and looked at the art, rather than the needed work, the problem disappeared and I didn't have any trouble.
Like most writers, I write the stories I want to read -- which means (in my point of view), the story has interesting characters, an exciting plot, and a satisfying ending. Getting those to work for me isn't always easy, of course. And it shouldn't be. If you are just dropping into your chair, pounding out a couple thousand words and not working on factors that make the story difficult for you and the characters, chances are that it's going to be pretty boring. Oh, and here is a clue: throwing a sex scene in to liven things up is not a good plot move. It gets boring after a while, just like anything else would be. I suspect that are authors are guilty of overusing one thing or another in books, but it seems like the sex scenes have really one overboard sometimes! It's like the author is trying to be a magician and waving a sex scene so that the reader won't notice that there is nothing going on in the story. Sometimes it's funny, even when it's not meant to be. I wonder if this is the influence of movies? Maybe so. Or maybe it's just the influence of writers who haven't clearly thought everything through. 
I think too much about this kind of stuff. I try to apply it to my 'overused' types of scenes. My characters often think too much, which is far more boring than the sex scenes, of course. It's one of the big things I look for in rewrites and edits. More action, less thinking about action. I also tend to repeat certain basic things, as though I'm trying to get it right the second time. It's another thing I have to watch out for. Did my character get into a fight with his brother on page 125? Do we really need to repeat it on page 355, and especially in almost the same terms and with the same outcome? Choose one and give it more meaning. Or do a 'tell' instead of 'show' in one case if it's important that the character have the two confrontations. Or change the reason and outcome, the wording -- you know, all of that stuff. Stop repeating things!
I am working on the rewrite of an older fantasy book, and I remember when I wrote it (probably a decade ago or more), how I had planned for the character to go to all these different places and have him face enemies, and slowly get the clues to what was going on. However, after the third time I realized that the travel, the battles, and the general cluelessness of the character were beginning to bore even me. Not a good sign for the writer, of course. So I took the confrontation I was on, reworked it and had the main character finally figure out who the real enemy was and go on the offensive. He stopped being a passive character to whom everything happened and who never acted to do anything about it, except to walk into more trouble.
The rewrite is fun because I can now look at those earlier confrontations and give him more clues and start pointing him toward the real trouble at an earlier stage. I'm fixing my 'repeat' stuff, and making it a stronger story.
And I'm having fun fixing the problems. Every time I look at my work and admit the problems with -- and work to fix them rather than just tossing them aside -- I grow as a writer. It's been a fun journey.

June 2nd, 2008

Monday and June

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Well, so far my day has been odd. I had to walk to the pharmacy to pick up a prescription -- a long walk in hot -- but not too hot -- weather. Stopped at Subway on the way home and grabbed a sandwich for later. That worked out well.
Got home. Wrong pills.
Ugh.
Lucky for me, they're a half dose of what I need, so I'm okay for the moment. We'll work the rest of it out later.
I also walked down to a local store to grab some stuff before the storms hit tonight. This is a guarantee that we won't have storms, by the way. I actually like walking and I should do it more often. It was a long winter, though. I don't like too hot or too cold!
Obviously, I should be living somewhere else.
My current novel re-write is going pretty nicely. I'm doing a bit of art to go with it, just for the fun of it. I'm not certain what I'll do with the entire thing when I'm done. We'll see. It's mostly an experiment that allows me to work a bit more with 3D art and is focusing me on 'seeing' some of the scenes out of the novel. Oh, the novel is Touched by the Wild -- fantasy set in my Tales from Another Place universe. I rewrote it not long ago (A year? Two years?) and wasn't really pleased with the feel of it by the end. So I jotted down notes and sat it aside, and for some reason it leapt up out of the pile and caught my attention a few days ago.
This is another rewrite-from-scratch sort of project. I'm retyping every line, examining them, adding more detail, and changing some very basic concepts. It's fun so far! I have one picture done and I think I see the second I want to do. So, I'll be working at improving art and improving writing with this project.
It should be fun.
Working on the nonfiction book, too, of course. And a few other odd projects that are floating around in there. Everything is looking good!

May 26th, 2008

Oh, it is Monday, isn't it?

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Russ was home for the last three days, but he had to head back to New York this morning. He called from Chicago. I was sorry to see him go again so soon! He hadn't been home for three months, but he hopes to be back next month for our anniversary. No guarantees, though.
We went places, ate out, and had a generally good time. Yes, it was an expensive three days -- but since we don't get to spend any other time together, it seemed to work well. We even went to a wildlife refuge in northern Missouri. It was really interesting -- they'd had a massive wind storm through that morning (we managed to miss it!), but there were huge branches down on the road and stuff. I got some nice pictures -- some of the best egret pictures I've ever managed. They're so white that it's hard to get them not to glow.
I've got to sort pictures and get a few things up.
Writing has been reduced to note taking, and discussing things with Russ about stories. I miss that when he's not around. He wants me to write a sequel to Muse, and we saw something this weekend (a normally quiet little town thronged with people and cars for a flea market) that gave me some funny ideas for Amusing Grace, the sequel I've meant to write.
We'll see. There are other things I need to get done.
Notes on Draw the Line are going very well, though. I think I'll go type some more of those in and see what more I need to do to sort them out.
So, all in all a good weekend. I hope we can have more of them soon!

May 19th, 2008

Short Stories

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It used to be that I would write 15-20 short stories a year.  The last few years, though, that has dropped down to ten if I'm lucky.  My yearly word count hasn't changed all that much, so plainly the 'short story' words are going into novels or nonfiction.  I think it's the nonfiction that cut into them.  I don't think that's going to change, either.  Maybe I just need to try evening out the two a bit more.

Writing short stories is odd when you are used to novels.  I tend to let them go wild and then tame them back down to size.  And, unless there's a really good reason for it, a short story will generally wait at least a year in the edit queue before I go over it again.  There is no hurry in most cases.

My problem lately has just been in getting things off to publishers.  One story finally went out tonight.  I'm happy with it, too.  We'll see how well it does.

Part of my short story writing energy has been going into the DAZ newsletter, where I get to write some fun little pieces of about 250 words a week.  If the products for that week all happen to be related, I can make a story out of them, and that's fun.  It's also a challenge, and I like that part.  And it pays well, which also doesn't hurt at all.

This month's short story challenge at FM is going about the way I expected it would for me.  I did very well the first few days, and then life stepped in again and I have only just now finished my fifth story.  I would have liked to have done more, but that's all right.  I'll get at least one more in, I think.  

I did something odd with this year's stories. They're all related.  I need to write one now that will explain and continue the story I just finished.  (So, can I call it really finished?  Well, for now, yeah.)  I think I'm going to start it tonight.

I've lately come to realize how nice it is to be free to write pretty much anything I want.  I made a decision never to put anything up on line that wasn't already written so that I didn't 'have' to work on something specific when I didn't have the link to the imagination that it needed.  That way leads to the land of 'oh, just throw this in' and some pretty odd (and boring writing), at least for me.  And for others, from what I've occassionally seen.

It's always good to know how your mind works, especially for something like this, and work in the ways that are best for you.  Yeah, I can do a whole 250 words a week for some product 'story' and make it work, but I'm glad I don't have any other 'must do this now!' work.  There are some weeks when it just would not be a good thing.



May 12th, 2008

Yes, busy as usual!

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  That's a nice little American Goldfinch picture I took last month.  He hadn't quite gotten all his breeding plumage in yet, so he looks more like a little chick than a bird.  Cute guy, though.  

Today, I turned my attention to the notes and background work for Draw the Line again.  I've been working on this one, off and on, for months already. Every time I pick it back up I get excited about it -- and realize how much work I still have to do.  This is a major project, and though I have pages of notes, most of them are notes directing me to do more research and new note taking.

I love projects like this.  There is no guarantee that the book itself will live up to the amount of work I'm putting into it, of course, but if it falls short, it won't be because I didn't put as much into it as I could.

I just finished a major rewrite of a short story.  I need to read it again and then send it off.  I love doing the occasional shorter work.  It's like taking a photo instead of making a movie.  There's an art to it, but you aren't going to dedicate years of your life to getting it put together properly.

I've been active over at ArtZone lately -- nice to expand my horizons a bit.  (grin)  

Next big project is to get the house cleaned again.  It's not bad, but the cats are shedding something fierce this year -- seems to be much worse than previous years.  I think it's this yo-yo weather we've been having.  I've been brushing them out as much as I can, but it doesn't seem to have helped much.

And now, I think I'll go back to typing in more notes, at least if I can get Zaphod off of them!

May 5th, 2008

And back for another Monday -- barely!

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Hello!
Yes, it has been busy. Nothing new there! But to make certain I didn't have any time at all, I've been doing the story-a-day challenge at FM. It's not really meant to be story-a-day, but I've been managing it for the first four days and I'm working on my 5th story tonight. Probably won't for much longer, though. I have more work headed my way.
I've been having great fun with the writing side of things, though -- especially with the new stories popping up for this challenge and rewriting some older material as well. The great thing about being a writer is the ability to let your imagination run free and write whatever you want to write, and challenges like the one at FM are a great way to step outside the norms and try something new. The more you write, the better your chance of selling something. And because there are so many wonderful markets out there, the more diverse your writing, the more of a chance you have to sell the material. 
Oh! And here is something really nice!
Yes, a bundle of three of my novels, the two 2YN Books and the Vision workshop book, which includes both material by Holly and me! I'm so glad to see it all available in one group like this! Holly surprised me with this one.
So, that's it for my week. Didn't get the lawn mowed because I can't get the lawnmower to start. We're looking into hiring someone instead. I've been a bit lazy around the house, too. I'll need to get back to work on that cleaning stuff again.
But mostly, I've been writing and enjoying the freedom to let my imagination play wherever it wants. You can't ask for a better life than that!

April 28th, 2008

It's Monday!

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Yes, it is Monday and I'm actually here!  What a surprise!
It's a busy time right now. End of the month with an issue of Vision due and updates to Forward Motion to do. I don't mind being busy, but the last few days of months like these drive me nuts. I have everything done ahead that I can -- or at least most of it -- but there are still a few last things I'm waiting on.
And not to mention the work for the DAZ newsletter and all.
But you know, things in general are pretty good. I've had three book releases in the last month or so, and sold a short story.   There's nothing quite like the feeling of having a novel accepted by a publisher -- knowing that you have already entertained that person -- and seeing them willing to invest time and effort to help you reach others.  Of course, there's always a lot of work left to do on my end. Now that the entire Dark Staff series is out, I need to go back and push the series. 

And the re-release of Silky, with two more novels in the series to follow, is going to be a lot of fun!



"Exciting, complex and richly textured, with a world you'll believe
and a protagonist you have to cheer for -- Silky is wonderful." Holly Lisle
(Quote from original 1998 Embiid Publishing release.)

This is an edited and slightly updated version of Silky, released in preparation for the never-before-released second and third books in the series.  I've been editing and writing, and enjoying the work. The third Silky book brought an unexpected surprise in the story line, and one that I'm having a great deal of fun exploring.  The notes are starting to get a bit messy and I may have to sort them out before I go much farther in the story.  I love the surprises like this one.  

And that reminds me of something.  I often see people say that outlines kill their creativity.  For me, it's just the opposite, especially with a 'light' outline (a line or two per chapter or scene).  Once I have the basics of the story down and I no longer have to worry about how the big pieces fit together, I find that my mind opens for all the extra things that make a story so interesting.

In the world of real life -- whatever that might be -- the weather has gotten better (as long as we ignore that mention of snowflakes possible next Friday). I'm waiting for it to hit 60 again before I go out and mow the lawn, though. It's just too cold still, and I've been fighting miserable colds all winter, so I'm not going to take a chance at getting another one.  Two of my cats have colds.  It's been that kind of spring.

April 22nd, 2008

Ah, this isn't Monday

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I missed Monday. No, really -- I missed Monday. I slept through a good part of it, and it wasn't until a few minutes ago that I realized it's Tuesday and I needed to get the trash out. Ah, the life without ties -- it's so easy to lose track of days!
Okay, so I was never very calendar-conscious at the best of times. Still, it's a good excuse.
I have turned Silky over to the publisher. Today I wrote a very short blurb for it and sent that on as well. It should have been done on Monday but... well, you know. I have finished the major pass through Silky 2, but I saw some points where I need to expand, explain, and improve again. I'm letting it sit for a few days. Then I'll be back to work on it and we'll see how it goes!
Right now I'm working on major notes and worldbuilding for Draw the Line, an sf novel I hope to write later this year. Much of it is falling together well, and I think it's going to be an intricate, interesting world when I finally lay it all out. I spent a good amount of today sorting out notes and getting some more of them typed into SuperNotecard. The program works great for me. 
Creating a complex world takes time and effort, and attention to details. I know that sounds obvious, but sometimes people really don't think about it. They get the  wouldn't this be neat idea and run with it for a while -- without really contemplating the full implications of what the idea means to the rest of the world around the character and you sit there thinking but, but -- if he did that then THIS should hold true for everything else! Luckily, this is usually caught in professionally published books -- but not always. There have been some really interesting 'work arounds' for big problems. 
I see the problem quite often the kind of first draft stuff, mine included. I'll read along and suddenly realize that if (for instance) the nobility are limited in the number of children they can have, then the fact that this child was born to a slave is a really big deal and it's time to rethink that part as something more than giving one of the characters an interesting background. It has ramifications in other areas, including who is heir to his father's estate.
And if an heir is disinherited, the noble has to find someone else to take that place, especially since such an occasion would probably come late in life when the heir proves to be incapable of doing the work needed. Since, in this world, magic is an essential part of the nobility, and since magic is virtually unknown out side the noble lines, that means the person would have to adopt from one of the other noble families. But if they are limited in the number of children as well, are they going to want to give up one of their own? Would you adopt a current lord's sister's child? A child farther out along the line -- the uncle of the current lord had two children, and one of them has two children, so you adopt one of them?
And this does not take into account politics, which is a big dividing line in the book.
But that's a relatively simple problem to deal with, of course.  Something obvious. It doesn't even take much thought. However, lately I've been seeing even this kind of simple stuff slipping by some of the stories I'm reading online. I sometimes wish people would take a little more time, rather than just jot something off and shove it up somewhere.    A little more time people -- really, take your time and write something and go over it, and get it right. It doesn't matter how you are publishing it -- don't be in such a hurry. You'll only hurt your reputation as a good storyteller if you get in too big a hurry. If you want readers, give them the best you can create, not the fastest.
And sometimes that means doing some background work and finding the problems before you are halfway through a novel and then, rather than going back and reworking things, creating a 'work around' that makes the story weaker. This doesn't mean that any of us are ever going to catch everything, but it does mean you are more likely to catch some of the problems before you're asked by a reader 'If Sally goes crazy at the sight of yellow, then how can she drive down the road or have eggs for breakfast without going into berserk mode?'
So there's my lecture. (Laughs)
And now, back to notes on Draw the Line.

April 14th, 2008

Marking Things off the List

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There's something rewarding about scratching out lines on a long list and knowing you have at least that much done.  I've had about three days like that, just working through list after list of things.  I write a new list each night before I go to bed, moving over anything from the previous day's list that didn't quite get finished and adding in whatever new things have popped up.  Some days I do well, and some days -- like yesterday -- it seems like I don't get anything done at all, even when I mark a couple things off.  But even so, it's good to mark any of them.

My life is ruled by what I call The Neverending List from Hell.  Sometimes I print out week long lists of things that need to be done, but they start looking too overwhelming, so I generally go with a few scratched notes on paper each day.  Today's list started with nine items and is down to four.  That doesn't count any writing, which is at about 200 words right now, so I need to get back to that soon.  However, since I've been pretty good about work today, I thought I'd stop and write up my journal. 

I have finally sent off the edits and cover art for Silky.  I admit it -- I was just messing around with both the book and the art by the end, and for some reason was having a hard time letting go.  I don't know why.  It's not as though I'm never going to work with the characters again, after all.  In fact, my main work right now is the sequel to the book.  I don't know why I kept lingering over the first book.

But it's done, and I'm feeling much better about that right now. 

The rest of today's work will mostly be more Vision stuff.  I finally got the Interview off to the author and the copies of articles off to the copyeditor.  Next up is the contracts, which really won't take long at all.  The great thing is that I have enough articles for almost two full issues.  I can't remember the last time I had so many great articles!

After that, I will go back to writing for the rest of the night.  It's early, by my standards, and I should have a good run at it tonight since I'm getting all the rest of this stuff done early.  Writing, of course, is the thing by which I measure my days.  I don't keep an Excel sheet listing number of items marked off of lists, after all.  But I have kept Excel sheets since 1998 listing how many words I've written each day.  I have some handwritten journals going back farther, too. 

There is no excuse not to write, at least in my world.  Worldbuilding, outlining or writing the actual story -- there is always something to do.  It's a good thing I love this work.

And now I'm off to celebrate finishing all the work on Silky!

April 7th, 2008

The Joy of Being a Writer

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First the really good news -- Darwin A. Garrison accepted my short story, Professional Choice, for Darwin's Evolutions.  I've returned the contract and he's already paid me.  I can't wait to see the ezine come out, and not just because of my story.  I think he's going to do an excellent job of pulling this together and creating an interesting collection of stories to read.

Professional Choice is a fun little story, really.  Writing it -- and having it accepted for publication -- reminds me of why I really enjoy what I'm doing.  Stories that you love to tell (not just 'fun' stories, but any story that gives you a rush of feeling while you write) make writing worthwhile.  Not all stories can be that way -- but sometimes you have to write the lesser ones with the more powerful one, because you need to see what works.  Writing is an art and takes practice, just like everything else.  Not everything will be something you'll want the public to read, but you can learn from everything you write -- as long as you're willing to learn, of course.  It makes being a writer kind of an odd combination of creativity and good work habits.

I did fine at real world jobs, from taking care of kids, to factory work to running bookstores for years and years.  I kept at writing all through those years, too, and finally reached the point where I could write full time and not have to go to work.  I love it.  And do you know what the best part is?

This isn't a 9 to 5 job.  I write every day and have for decades -- when I had an outside job and not.  But I know that my creativity isn't tied to the mundane world of business hours, and once I escaped them, I felt creativity expand to fill the time.  I don't believe in the 'my muse has to come to me first' school of writing -- however, I will never, never let this become just another job where I have to sit at the computer because it's required of me, rather than because this is where I want to be.  Even with contracts, I work to my own schedule.  I give my mind time to work on inspiration, and to process ideas into stories, so that I'm not just sitting down and pounding out words to fill some quota.

And that means that some days I work better than others.  Today, so far, has been a good day.  I have major work done on two different projects, plus a bit of art work thrown in and some housekeeping.  I'm trying to create a 'housekeeping as art' attitude, and maybe it's even sinking in a little.  Housework has never been my strong point. 

I am also not a morning person and never have been.  I work best late at night, when the rest of the world has quieted and the distractions of sounds and sights outside my office window have mostly disappeared.  I love working at night, but the only reason I can is because this isn't a 9 to 5 job and I don't have to worry about when I'm getting up the next day.

Now I'm dealing with another big change -- Russ going to New York to work.  I now have absolutely no ties to time or even day for that matter.  Creatively, I can't say that it's made a big improvement because I generally work the same as I did before.  Lifestyle-wise, it has certainly added some interesting moments as I try to figure out 'when' I am.  And it has made remembering to update this on Mondays a real challenge.  But here I am anyway.  I may be getting the knack of this time and date stuff finally!

I love the dawn and I see quite a few of them, but that comes from still being up rather than getting up.  Sunsets have always been my favorites, though, and you can tell that from my photography.  I love night storms and hope we get some nice ones this year, and that I get luck with the camera again.  It is mostly luck, because where I live makes it difficult to get a clear view.

So in many respects, I've got things pretty good.  I would prefer to have Russ working closer to home, and we both think that's going to happen soon.  And then will I have a better connection to the day?  Probably not. (grin)  It wasn't as though I was very good at it before he took this job.

It's a good life in many ways.  I'm lucky.  And I'm having fun.  You can't ask for much more than that out of life.

March 31st, 2008

Things are looking good!

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First, the good news that I've been hoping to post for quite a while!  The last two books of the Dark Staff series are finally published and available at Double Dragon!

Book Seven: Gathering http://www.double-dragon-ebooks.com/single.php?ISBN=1-55404-559-2

Book Eight: Hope in Hell  http://www.double-dragon-ebooks.com/single.php?ISBN=1-55404-560-6

This series has taken me a long time to complete -- so much so, that I can see a change and improvement in my writing from book one to book eight -- but then, I suspect that happens to anyone who is willing to keep learning and who has a long term project of this sort.  I'm quite happy with the last two books, and thrilled to have the entire series finished.  If I hadn't gotten so bogged down with work on Dragon Tooth Fantasy Books and Forward Motion, I probably would have had the series done a couple years ago -- but there it is, finally. 

I also had the opportunity to do the cover art for these last two books, which proved to be really fun and demanding.  I've done other cover art, but not much for my own work, and certainly nothing lately.  I don't get to do art like that very often.  Here is a picture of the original art, without the lettering:

http://artzone.daz3d.com/index.php?mode=photo_album&act=view&pho_id=140256&p_id=885

I also received a contract from a British publisher, Studymates, to do a print book on writing science fiction for them.  I apparently do well at writing books about writing. (grin)  This one is going to be a nice challenge and I'm already about 6k into the book of around 60k or so.  It will be slower going than writing fiction, of course, but I have done enough nonfiction writing books that I have something of a feel for them.  This one is due to the publisher in the first week of September, so I need to stay focused on it.  Having fulfilled my contract to DDP means I have less to draw my 'this has to be done now!' attention, though.  I do have three other books still due to another publisher, but one of those is pretty much done and I'm half way through the second.

I have turned in my chapter on contemporary fantasy, too.  Another thing off the list!

So things are looking pretty good, really.  I have a few things to get set up for the next month at FM, but other than that, I think things are looking good from the writing point of view.  Now if it would just warm up and stay there, rather than getting now every other day, I would be really happy!

March 24th, 2008

Oh yes, I am busy....

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Edits, rewrites, updates -- various publishers asking for various things.  It's been a busy few weeks and I think it's going to get worse at least until April and probably for a long time afterwards.  I don't mind busy, of course.  At least most of the time.

What I do mind are people who just straight out waste my time.  I offer to help anyone who is interested in the world of publication, and I often point them to other people who know more than I do.  I've been having an ongoing email conversation with an old friend about the publishing world and that's been a lot of fun.  But yesterday I had a round of emails from someone who was not only clueless, but rude.  'But (person I will not name) told me that publishers are all evil and stealing work and money.  Why should I trust them?

Because, child, if that was really true there wouldn't be a publisher in business today.   Do you really think something like that would be kept quiet?  Do you think a publisher who did something like that would still be in business?  Get a clue.

If you don't trust publishers then go self-publish.  It's the only way you'll be happy.  But stop bothering me with your stupid paranoia and 'but (person) said that we shouldn't do this.'  If you want to listen to someone else, then go plague that person.  If you really aren't looking for answers and alternative suggestions, don't come to me.

Oh, and one more clue.  If you are going to tell me that copyeditors will ruin your book, make certain that you at least know the difference between there and their, it's and its, and how to write a sentences with actual periods in place.  Just a suggestion, of course.  (Why is it so often the people who really do need help who have this attitude?)

I spend a lot of time offering whatever little help I can to other writers, but there are days when I have to shake my head and wonder what some of these people really expect.  Thinking back on the entire exchange, I have to admit that it was kind of funny.  Maybe that's it.  Maybe I need to remember the humor in some of this.  It is amusing sometimes.  The paranoia level ought to be good for a few laughs, right?  I mean I'm not paranoid about anything, after all.

Not as funny as Zaphod falling into the sink of dishes a couple minutes ago, of course, but still funny.  And look, now he's dripping water all over my desk and notes.  Isn't that cute?  (Ack.)

So there you have it -- my Monday.  I have a ton more things to get done tonight, so I think I'll just go leap into that work now.  Better to get some of it done yet tonight than face it in the morning.

Must remember to let the water out of the sink, too.

 

March 17th, 2008

Learning new things for a changing age

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We all know the publishing business is changing -- just as it has changed in the past and will change in the future.  When paperbacks hit the stands, people cried out in horror at the loss of the elite right to own books -- because books were hardbound and expensive.  Writing books for the plebs -- how awful!

And, of course, we are going through the same thing with the Internet Age of Publishing.  People still turn up their noses at ebooks, as though stories somehow change from the computer to paper.  I do have a preference for printed books, just like many people, but I have never judged any story by anything other than the writing -- and yes, that includes self-published books.  The problems I have with self-published work fall into a couple different categories:

1.        Too many people who go this route have no clue what they are doing and don't even understand that their books will not be in stores and that they will have to sell each book themselves.  (Sometimes the posts at NaNo are just painful to read.)   Added to this is the problem that too many have not learned  to write well before they throw themselves into the publishing world, which only diminishes the chances of either selling their current work or drawing readers back for later publications.

Remember, when you self-publish there is no one between you and any really stupid mistakes you make in your book.  You can't count on any spellchecker or grammar checker to do all the work -- they are only programs in a computer, and they will fail you at the worst time.  If you get someone else to read the story first, make certain that person has more of a clue than you do.  Getting the best friend who hasn't spelled an entire sentence right -- let alone written a full, real sentence -- in any email is not the person you want. 

Cultivate the friendship of people who write well, as long as they aren't snobs about it.  If they aren't willing to help, or if they lecture rather than help, find someone else.  This is where writing communities can be a real help.  You can peruse the sites without even posting anything, and quite often you will still learn a thing or two.  And if you have a question, the people are there specifically to help.

2.       The other problem revolves around those who really have worked hard and written excellent work, but are afraid to approach traditional publishers for fear they will be rejected.  They won't be rejected, but the story might.  This is something that is a normal part of the publishing world and nothing extraordinary, though it can be annoying --  but for fear of it happening, they will give up any dreams they've had of seeing their books on the shelves of stores by their other favorite authors, and of sharing those works with the widest possible audience.

 

I have spent ten years at Forward Motion helping people to reach a goal of being traditionally published.  Some people make it and some do not, but Forward Motion will always focus on helping to reach that goal.  That was why Holly Lisle created the site, and it is something she and I both share as a vision for Forward Motion.

 

But neither of us is stupid, and we both know there are other opportunities out there, if you want to take the chance and if you know what you are doing.  There are more than a few people at FM who self-publish, and who have learned a few things at the site that have helped them write the best that they can which should be the most important part of any writer's life, no matter where he or she goes with the work later.  However, FM has a specific purpose, and it will continue to maintain that focus.

 

And that brings us, finally, to Lulu.com.

 

A few years ago, my husband published a book through Lulu for a very specific audience.  The workmanship was wonderful.  I was very impressed.  Since then, I know of some of the small press publishers who have started ordering print runs though Lulu.com.  Some order on a book-by-book case, and some take advantage of the bulk rates and order quite a few copies at once.  I have rarely heard any complaints from anyone about Lulu's quality.

 

And the best part of all, of course, is that they are not a vanity press.  In a vanity press, you have to pay the publisher to produce the work.  Lulu takes their cut straight out of the sale of each book.  You set the price of the work above what they get per book.  The amount probably looks high at first glance, but it is a reasonable amount for the work that is put into producing each book -- and it is the best way to get your product out there in the market without any cost to you, unless you take one of their distribution plans.

 

I have books at Lulu.com through a couple different publishers.  I will have more soon, it appears.  Right now I'm trying to learn their cover art strictures so that I can turn in the proper material for a couple different publishers.  I am starting to think that the wrap-around cover is going to be way too much trouble.

 

Looking at the site, I see that they are doing picture books now.  I'm really tempted to do something with some of my animal photography, just for fun. 

 

I am really fascinated by how Lulu works.  I have always tried new things, and Lulu looks as though there could be some fun aspects to it, especially in the reprint and art areas.

 

Of course, I need the time to do that kind of stuff.  Right now I still have several more contracted books to get finished, although one more is in the very last nit-picking phase that I go through before I send something off.

 

But it's always fun to learn something new, to try new things and to look at possibilities in the changes the world has brought us -- at least if you do so with an open mind and clue about what you're doing and why.

March 10th, 2008

Working on Silky

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I'm about 100 pages into the edit/rewrite of Silky.  There is more reworking than I expected to find, but that's all right -- it's been fun and a wonderful learning experience.  If I can concentrate on it, I shouldn't have much trouble getting through the book.  I think I might go straight into book 2 after I'm done and while everything is still fresh.  That book will take far more reworking.

And I started book 3.  I wasn't going to, but I always start a novel on my birthday, and it was the only one that really called to me.  I'm taking it very slowly for me -- only a few hundred words a day so far -- while I get through the rest of Silky 1, at least.

In case you can't tell, I'm really enjoying the work.  The other work in my life has momentarily eased up -- or maybe I'm just getting used to it.  It probably helps that spring has arrived (39f!  Yay!), and I can sit in my office without freezing.  I really will have to do something about that before next winter.  (Yes, I say that every year.)

I've written over 100k words so far this year, which is down from my usual word count, but since I'm doing far more editing than usual, that's not a surprise.  I wrote a short story this weekend, but I'm not particularly happy with it.  I think, in fact, that it needs to be reworked into a myth and reworked into the canon for a larger work.  That might be fun -- writing myths for a larger world, and then incorporating the myths into the stories.  That looks like a long term project!  But I could do a few more short pieces every now and then.  Might make a nice writing exercise.  Maybe try to keep each myth down to about 1000 words.

Not that I actually need more to write.

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