Lady With A Spinning Head ([info]fairy_tale_echo) wrote,
@ 2005-11-22 22:05:00
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"Time" (HP fic: Pucker Up Challenge)
[info]scribblinlenore issued a lovely mini-challenge all about kissing: Pucker Up: The Multifandom Mini-Challenge. And what's better than kissing, I ask you? So, I couldn't resist a too long-snippet with a first kiss I'm just dying to see. Un-betaed, it most likely totally sucks. Proceed at your own risk.

Title: Time
Rating: PG
Fandom: Harry Potter
Spoilers: Takes place *immediately* after Half Blood Prince and is thus SPOILERTASTIC!
A/N: Just playing, JKR owns. Ron/Hermione: My Het OTP.




She was standing on the banks of the lake, staring out at the slow crest of the waves along the lake surface.

She thought of the day before third year when Professor McGonagall and Professor Dumbledore had looked at her with their serious, adult eyes. She could still clearly see McGonagall opening the small, wooden box and holding out the Time Turner to her. It had felt ancient in her hands, the way nothing else in the magical world had, and a quiet shock of power raced under her skin.

"Miss Granger," McGonagall's voice had been razor sharp "I cannot stress what a responsibility you now hold in your hands. You must not take this lightly. We are giving you, in essence, the power to control time."

She'd felt suddenly sick and considered handing McGonagall the box back, telling her there was simply no way she was ready for this. That was when Dumbledore had broken in. "But of course, Miss Granger, no one can actually control time. Think, instead, that we are giving you the means to try to better manage this beautiful, chaotic world of ours."

He had smiled kindly at her then and Hermione had felt reassured. Certainly, if Dumbledore thought she could manage, it would all be all right, she could do this.

Time. She thought of Dumbledore's grave, white in the distance, and she imagined grains of sand slipping through the Time Turner. Time.

Hermione felt like nothing would ever be all right again.

She knew she must have looked forlorn, standing there by the lake, and the thought was confirmed when she heard Ron's voice from behind her. "Hey, are you OK?"

To make Ron's voice so low and gentle, she must be quite the sight. She didn't want to think about how she'd just been in his arms, sobbing unabashedly. It wasn't that she was ashamed of her grief, or even that Ron had been witness to it. It was the thousand unanswered questions that started throbbing behind her eyes if she paused too long to consider it.

She turned to face him and looked up at his lean face. It seemed that he lost some weight, or maybe he was just looking pinched around the edges in the way she'd noticed everyone around her was lately. It did not stop his face from being so sweetly familiar to her, though. She liked the unguarded moments like this best: when in the privacy of her own mind, for the briefest of seconds, she could allow herself to feel so tender and attached and devoted to Ron.

"I'm feeling a little better, thanks. Where's Harry gone off to?"

Ron glanced down at his feet. "Dunno, guess he and Ginny have taken off somewhere. Think he probably wants to spend a last bit of time with her before. . ." Ron trailed off here, shrugging.

"Before the three of us go off on some wild, scavenger hunt for pieces of the soul of the darkest wizard to ever live." Hermione finished the sentence, the unthinkable sentence, in her mind.

Out-loud she blurted, "But of course, no one can actually control time."

Ron looked up, meeting her eyes, confused. "Come again?"

"I'm so tired, Ron."

His face grew soft and sympathetic. "Yeah, well. I can walk you up to the castle maybe you can get some,"

Hermione knew then, in a way she never had before, that she loved Ron Weasley. She loved him for holding her when she cried and for being jealous of Viktor Krum and for the look on his face the day he received his Prefect badge. She loved him for being such prat sometimes and teasing her about studying and fighting with her as if she was the most interesting person on the globe.

She loved Ron Weasley as grains of sand slipped through the Time Turner, which was locked securely in some ancient box. She loved Ron Weasley as Dumbledore's white tomb sat in the distance. She loved him as this beautiful, chaotic world of theirs went on all around them.

Without giving it another thought, Hermione threw herself into Ron's arms, flinging her arms around his neck.

He muttered something that sounded like "Ooof!" but still wrapped his arms around her waist. "Hey, thought you said you were,"

She kissed him, lifting her face to his, she kissed him.

There wasn't even a split-second of hesitation, he pressed his mouth on hers instantly, just like she'd always imagined he would. He knew. She didn't want to open her mouth, not at first, because she wanted this memory, this second of the press of their lips, and nothing more. She wanted that memory always, this one second when everything pivoted because of his lips on hers. Heavy and warm, oh, Ron's lips. She'd been wanting this since she was 13 years old, maybe even before that.

She felt the tip of his tongue along her lower lip. It shouldn't be so exciting, really, to know that Ron Weasley wanted her to open her mouth under his, but it was, it really was, and her heart was pounding so loudly she was sure he could hear it. And once she opened her mouth to him, Hermione knew that everything would change. Finally.

It happened naturally, not the lightest hint of teeth or the smallest bit of too much saliva. Ron sucked on her bottom lip for the shortest second and then moved his mouth up a fraction of an inch. She tilted her head and their mouths met full on. Open mouths, breath on breath, Ron's wet, warm mouth. They moved in perfect time.

Ron was pulling her closer, holding her tightly against his chest. She heard him make a rumbling noise in the back of his throat, almost like a growl. Growling. She'd made Ron Weasley growl. Standing up on her tip-toes, she pressed herself even closer to him.

Time, it wasn't moving anymore, time. There was nothing besides their mouths together, the press of their lips, and his tongue along her teeth and tracing lazy swirls along the roof of her mouth. Something had to go wrong soon, because this synchronicity couldn't be right and the humming feeling along her skin, it was all too much.

She couldn't breathe, she couldn't focus, and she didn't want to stop. But Ron pulled away and rested his forehead against hers. "Oi, what's all this, then?" He breathed into her ear.

There was only one answer, in this beautiful, chaotic world of theirs. She smiled softly. "It's time, Ron. It's time."

He laughed, the sound a reassuring heartbeat telling her everything really was going to be all right. And then he leaned his head down and started kissing her again.



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[info]scribblinlenore
2005-11-23 04:13 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful! I love how you use Hermione's thoughts and experiences of time to add impact to the kiss. You really feel just how long she's waited, and, indeed, it *is* time.

Thanks so much for taking part in the challenge, doll!

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-23 08:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, I didn't want the "time" thing to seem trite!

This was a great challenge! Thanks for coming up with it. I think everyone needed a few good kisses! :)

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[info]musesfool
2005-11-23 07:42 pm UTC (link)
Oh, lovely! Lovely! So very Hermione.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-23 08:36 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! It's my first time writing the pairing but I've been kicking this around since the end of HBP, the image of her thinking about the Time Turner. (I, personally, would be obsessed with it at this point in the narrative.) So, this challenge was the perfect time to kick this out.

I'm glad you thought she was in character. It's high praise! :D

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[info]terredancer
2005-11-23 07:56 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this is just gorgeous.

I can easily see it happening just this way.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-23 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much!!

I can easily see it happening just this way.

I just...She's not the kind of character to let this keep happening, at least not to me. And FINE, I get they have to have UST but c'mon, we're all dying here! ;)

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[info]_charlita
2005-11-23 08:01 pm UTC (link)
Hermione knew then, in a way she never had before, that she loved Ron Weasley. She loved him for holding her when she cried and for being jealous of Viktor Krum and for the look on his face the day he received his Prefect badge. She loved him for being such prat sometimes and teasing her about studying and fighting with her as if she was the most interesting person on the globe.

I'm in love with that passage *o*
Very well done! I really like your fic :)

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-23 08:39 pm UTC (link)
Heeehee! Thank you so much! ::blushes::

I had to cut that paragraph because I just kept rambling about all of the lovely Ron-ness. What can I say? I wuv Won-Won!

Thanks so much for reading and the lovely compliment! :)

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[info]_charlita
2005-11-23 08:53 pm UTC (link)
^^ You're welcome, I like to tell when I like a fic ^^'

Glad to see someone who likes that dear Wonwon, he's great and he's ofter used in a weird way in fics >.< He's (one of) my fav character :)

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 01:39 am UTC (link)
Feedback is shiny and delicious! :)

Yes, Ron probably isn't my MOST favorite character but ... damn close. I loves him so much. And I haaaate when he gets bashed in fic/fandom thought. He's just so damn -- good, you know? And he can be immature and silly and dumb and ...

Anyhow, right before HBP came out I made lists about why I loved each character. Here's Ron's! :)

Why I Love Ron Weasley:
-because he's the heart.
-because he's not mad at all when Hermione and Harry miss one of the greatest moments of his life.
-because he's not afraid (or ashamed) to admit he hates being poor.
-because something in him is drawn to the bossy, abrasive, pushy wonder that is Hermione Granger, a good sign that he will grow into a very wise man.
-because he's completely fearless and loyal and brave; like all the best sidekicks are.

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[info]gilmoregal24
2005-11-23 08:53 pm UTC (link)
i am IN LOVE with this fanfic....wowzers....hee hee..that made my day...i really liked the use of "time" in different ways..great vehicle for the story...thank you for the little present!

~Jamie

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 01:43 am UTC (link)
Yay! Thanks so much for the lovely feedback, it made MY day! ;)

I am glad the "time" element worked and wasn't like a hammer hitting you over the head or anything.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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[info]nellie_darlin
2005-11-23 10:19 pm UTC (link)
Vair nice... Sweet and heavy with time. And Ron and Hermione are lovely and different - although still IC, just another facet.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 01:46 am UTC (link)
Sweet and heavy with time.

I think I like that description better than any line in my story! ;)

Glad they were still in character, I was nervous about that since this is my first HP fic using either of them!

Thanks for reading and the awesome feedback! :)

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[info]robin777
2005-11-23 11:46 pm UTC (link)
There wasn't even a split-second of hesitation, he pressed his mouth on hers instantly, just like she'd always imagined he would. He knew. She didn't want to open her mouth, not at first, because she wanted this memory, this second of the press of their lips, and nothing more. She wanted that memory always, this one second when everything pivoted because of his lips on hers. Heavy and warm, oh, Ron's lips. She'd been wanting this since she was 13 years old, maybe even before that.

I really loved this. It captures for me what I think their first kiss would be like.


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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 01:50 am UTC (link)
I am going to cry real tears if we get cheated totally out of their first kiss! :) I mean, I don't need a whole chapter but...C'MON she's killing us!

Thanks so much for the comment, I'm glad my idea matched your idea. Great minds! ;)

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[info]for_a_fantasy
2005-11-24 01:17 am UTC (link)
Aw. Giving my friends the link.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 01:51 am UTC (link)
Thanks for reading, hoorah!

And sending the link to other people? YAY!! That's the best compliment ever! :D

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[info]__dittany
2005-11-24 02:30 am UTC (link)
Wow... just... wow...

*dies from happiness*

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 06:40 pm UTC (link)
Awww! Thanks! I am glad it made you happy--don't you think that's what the characters deserve the most themselves? Maybe I'm just a sucker! ;)

Anyhow, thanks for reading and commenting and...ICON LOVE!

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[info]__dittany
2005-11-27 08:52 pm UTC (link)
Most definitely... yes. I'm such a sucker too!

AND BBM ROCKS!

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[info]wickedprincess3
2005-11-24 06:11 am UTC (link)
and fighting with her as if she was the most interesting person on the globe.
This? This is one of the reasons that I <3 Ron and Hermione and all their bickering. They fight with one another because... it's matters to them, it's that this person is so important and the tug and push they can only really get from the other.

This was just adorable and I loved how very Hermione it was.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-24 06:46 pm UTC (link)
Yes, exactly! And they fight because the other person and their opinion is so important to them. It is CRITICAL to them that this person see their point of view. I just...not that I am all 12 years old "Fighting=passion=TRUEWUV4EVA!!1" but it does make up an undeniable *spark* of their relationship so much more vital and alive. Besides, they both seem to me like characters who do not usually engage in such behavior...except with one another it just...yeah.

In other words, in case I haven't told you lately, I looooove you.

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[info]tta
2005-11-24 10:24 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful And it really is finally time they got together! The kiss was so great, it made me swoon. :)

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-25 11:05 pm UTC (link)
WAY past time! ;) I am still bitter that we're *still* stuck with UST going into the last book!

Thanks so much for reading and feedbacking, swooning is super-high praise, I appreciate it! :)

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[info]kalakelso
2005-11-24 10:59 pm UTC (link)
Very sweet, I liked it.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-25 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thank you! :) I'm glad it wasn't TOO sweet, I wanted it to be a little sad at the same time!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

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[info]verogeller
2005-11-25 01:56 am UTC (link)
this is really wonderful... amazing, I love it... I'm saving it into my memories ;)

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2005-11-25 11:06 pm UTC (link)
Icon Love! :)

Adding to your memories? Whoah, that's pretty cool! I'm beyond excited you liked it that much!

Thanks so much for the high praise and for reading!!

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[info]verogeller
2005-11-25 11:59 pm UTC (link)
of course!! it was a really wonderful fic :), I'm trying to save the links of all the fics I like to make a fanfic recomendation post soon... and this one was amazingly sweet ♥... gotta love the R/Hr love

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(Anonymous)
2005-12-31 07:51 pm UTC (link)
I LOVED THIS! a friend sent it to me and i, quite obviously, read it! keep writing, as im sure you go far!

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2006-02-20 09:33 am UTC (link)
Whoah, thanks ... dunno if you'll ever see this, sorry it's taken me so long to reply, I didn't know this was here! Anyway, thanks so much for reading it, I'm flattered it was reccomended and that you gave it a shot! :) Who knows when the HP muse will strike me again? Hopefully soon! :) Thanks again for reading and leaving nice feedback!

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[info]thmbls_n_brmstx
2006-01-12 05:26 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is so beautiful. A friend of mine recommended it, and I'm so glad I read it. Very realistic and very, very lovely.

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2006-02-20 09:34 am UTC (link)
Awww! Thank you. Like I said above, dunno if you'll ever see this, and I'm sorry it's taken me some time to reply but...thanks so much! I'm glad you thought it sounded realistic and true to tone, it was my first time writing Hermione and I wanted her to come off all right! :) Thanks so much for reading and for leaving me a note about it, even it did take me some time to see it! :)

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Really good
[info]cokieisme
2006-04-28 04:37 am UTC (link)
I found this on ronandhermione.net, its really great. I don't think I've come across a post-HBP ficlet where Hermione kisses Ron.

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[info]randhr_manips
2006-05-12 11:09 pm UTC (link)
gah. I need a kleenex =]

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2006-05-14 05:01 am UTC (link)
From the happy, right? ;) Thanks for reading and being moved, it's the bestest compliment!

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Re: Really good
[info]fairy_tale_echo
2006-05-14 05:00 am UTC (link)
Hey thanks! :) Didn't know this was linked somewhere else (not that it's a problem, I just always like to know!) but I'm glad you found it!

Don't you think Hermione would just lean over and DO IT ALREADY? I mean, she's that kinda girl! ;)

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(Anonymous)
2008-01-30 09:27 pm UTC (link)
That was absolutely perfect =]

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[info]fairy_tale_echo
2008-02-03 09:50 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much, dear anonymous! I am glad you liked it and you took the time to leave feedback even though you don't have an LJ!! :) (you should get one, though, because now they're free and it's way super-easy to keep track of authors and stories that way. And I am *sure* you need another way to waste your time, right? ;))

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that was soo sweet
[info]loverlyangel2
2008-05-05 06:40 pm UTC (link)
i luv that saying.. "its time, ron , its time" that is soo cute.

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Re: that was soo sweet
[info]fairy_tale_echo
2008-05-08 03:37 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks so much. I couldn't stop thinking about the Time Turner so, ta-dah, a whole theme about time, hence that line! ;) Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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