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  • Dec. 7th, 2005 at 12:30 AM
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my neighbor builds theremins in his basement.

he is convinced
that god planted the idea for the theremin
in its inventor's head
to ensure that someday
we would all find it easier to believe in aliens.

he almost has me convinced as well.

tony, he says, i'm glad you're here.
the world is a darker place
without good neighbors. that frost, he
got it all wrong. no fences, no boundaries,
forget all that long history of division.

i don't believe in division either, i tell him.

we get along well, my neighbor and i.
he builds and plays and i listen. oh, and he flies too;
i see him flying over our houses sometimes
and i am surprised i can't hear any music then,
he moves so gracefully. but i don't think anybody hears any music.
in fact, i'm not sure anyone else sees him flying.

of course, i'm sure they don't see me when i fly.

one day, i have a moment of clarity.
if there are aliens, i tell him,
we might never know them. they might
be among us now. and they might not know themselves
until a theremin started to whistle.

now you're catching on, he says.


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[info]mstegosaurus wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 06:18 am (UTC)
I like that a lot; it kind of has a Tony Hoagland sort of feel to me.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 06:31 am (UTC)
high praise. i was somewhere over memphis tonight when i wrote it.
[info]callingyourname wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 07:57 am (UTC)
1. i really like it.
2. theremins are freaking amazing. weirdest/coolest instrument ever.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 8th, 2005 04:22 am (UTC)
they do rock, don't they? i keep meaning to get one; they're all over eBay.
[info]valis429 wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 08:01 am (UTC)
Feeling like an alien myself tonight. This helps.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 8th, 2005 04:23 am (UTC)
glad to be of service, sir.
[info]just_jeff wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 01:16 pm (UTC)
love it! it will be bumping aound my head all day.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 8th, 2005 04:24 am (UTC)
thank you!
i aim for the bumping thing wherever i can.
[info]kaphine wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 04:39 pm (UTC)
That's so cool. You're so cool.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 8th, 2005 04:24 am (UTC)
No, you are!
[info]mplsfish wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2005 10:58 pm (UTC)
Friend of freeimprov...
...also thinks this is pretty good.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 8th, 2005 04:25 am (UTC)
Re: Friend of freeimprov...
Thank you! Feel free to join the merry crowd anytime!
[info]thereminworld wrote:
Dec. 9th, 2005 03:43 am (UTC)
great poem!
Thanks for the poem! We posted a link to it on the ThereminWorld.com homepage today. Cheers!
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 9th, 2005 04:12 am (UTC)
Re: great poem!
Holy shit!!!! Thanks!!!
[info]upendedurn wrote:
Dec. 9th, 2005 04:04 pm (UTC)
Very, very nice.
[info]radioactiveart wrote:
Dec. 9th, 2005 04:16 pm (UTC)
Per usual, it means a lot to me when you like something.