atra ([info]atrata) wrote,
@ 2005-09-08 20:02:00
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Entry tags:fic : hp : gen

Ficlet: Rotten. Hermione gen.
Title: Rotten
Characters: Hermione
Rating: Uh, PG?
Summary: She doesn't like horror movies.
Notes: Another [info]tangleofthorns prompt. She is to blame for this.

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She'd always had a bad feeling about this place, even though she'd never seen it, only heard about it from Harry. It sounded like one of the houses in those awful films her mum likes. Hermione had always rolled her eyes and scoffed and complained that they don't make any sense, but the truth is she'd crept downstairs one night when she was seven just in time to see the man with the bladed fingers rip all the veins out of someone's body and use them as puppet strings.

Hermione hadn't slept for a week.

Now she doesn't like horror movies, and she doesn't like houses that belong in horror movies, and every time she thinks about the Dark Arts, she hopes no one's figured out a spell to tear the veins from someone's arms.

Regardless, Harry thinks the last Horcrux is here, so here she is. It's barely even a house anymore; it's decrepit and so overgrown with vines and weeds that Hermione can't see how anything could be here at all, let alone any kind of elaborately ridiculous magical protection device Voldemort had come up with back when he was sane. Or less insane, at any rate.

Everything about the Gaunt house smells rotten—rotten wood, rotten vegetation, and she imagines the Dark Arts once practiced here left the stench of decay lingering in the air. It's ridiculous, she knows; magic doesn't smell like anything, but there's something in the wind she can't identify, and it makes her nervous.

Maybe she shouldn't have told Harry and Ron she'd scout ahead on her own.

She creeps a little closer, trainers loud as they move over fallen leaves, over broken glass and shattered stones. What's left of the door hangs off one rusty hinge, and the inside of the house is unnaturally dark. There's barely a roof, and it's full daylight, and she really ought to be able to see inside.

She's just put one foot through the door when she hears it, when someone comes crashing through the underbrush, running, breathing heavily.

"Hermione!" Ron yells, but Hermione's already put her foot down, and something tells her it's too late. "HERMIONE, WAIT!"


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[info]tipgardner
2005-09-08 06:31 pm UTC (link)
Oh! Great stuff! Thank you for writing. May I offer a prompt?

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[info]atrata
2005-09-08 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Go for it. :)

(And thanks. *grin* It's nice to be writing again.)

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[info]tipgardner
2005-09-08 06:42 pm UTC (link)
Viktor is a cross dressing dom. Ron is obssessed.

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[info]happiestwhen
2005-09-08 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Eee, that last line!! :O

Excellent.

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[info]atrata
2005-09-08 06:33 pm UTC (link)
Heh, thanks. The prompt was, 'write the paragraph before a dead body is discovered.' I wasn't quite sure how to do it, but I think it went all right. :)

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[info]tenar
2005-09-08 07:01 pm UTC (link)
oh. now i know what happens next.

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[info]atrata
2005-09-08 07:04 pm UTC (link)
i need to stop ruining my stories in the comments. sigh.

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[info]tenar
2005-09-08 07:27 pm UTC (link)
well, i mean, i FIGURED that's what had happened. but still.

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[info]tenar
2005-09-08 07:01 pm UTC (link)
oh, fuck. now i really want to know and i really don't want to know what happens next.

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[info]reddwarfer
2005-09-08 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Nice cliffy. :D

I am now more curious than I should be.

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[info]atrata
2005-09-08 08:24 pm UTC (link)
Glad you liked it. ;)

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[info]cordelia_v
2005-09-08 08:18 pm UTC (link)
Oh. Well, thank God you gave it away in your comments, because that was one very evil cliffhanger, lady. Very fine job of a build up. And yes, very IC Hermione.

You know, I'm not that fond of Hermione. I'd like to see something happen to her that would shake her worldview apart, a bit.

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[info]atrata
2005-09-08 08:23 pm UTC (link)
Well, a nasty death oughta do it. *grin*

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[info]aubrem
2005-09-08 09:38 pm UTC (link)
Nice. Very nice indeed.

I'm bummed she's just going to discover a dead body. I thought she was about to BECOME a dead body.

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[info]atrata
2005-09-08 09:41 pm UTC (link)
She is! Ron's going to discover the dead body.

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[info]aubrem
2005-09-08 09:43 pm UTC (link)
Well, that's alright then.

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[info]rantipole_
2005-09-09 08:18 am UTC (link)
Yes! (um. just what I was hoping for. *facepalm* oh, I'm Evil...)

... and I loved this, of course:
she knows; magic doesn't smell like anything, but ... it makes her nervous
I mean her instinct, and also her reasoning it Away (yes!)

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[info]atrata
2005-09-09 09:34 pm UTC (link)
That's our girl! Pesky instincts. *grin*

Glad you liked it.

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[info]goodopinion
2005-09-08 10:02 pm UTC (link)
I know its done but I want to know what happens next! I have a love/hate relationship with horror movies. I have to go see them but I always have my hood pulled down over my eyes. weird, I know.

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[info]atrata
2005-09-09 09:36 pm UTC (link)
I actually have Hermione's attitude about horror movies. I mock and scoff and wonder wtf is the point, and you know, this really makes NO SENSE AT ALL. Like, there are plot holes I could drive a semi through. The difference is I never had any kind of traumatic experience when I was a kid. I actually had to call a friend to get an appropriate scene to scare her with. :)

As for what happens next, I didn't actually plot it out. She dies, but that's about all I've got. *grin*

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[info]gattava
2005-09-09 04:10 am UTC (link)
Woot! I understood it on the first read. And I cringed. You're a tad too effective, maybe. *hugs self to keep arm veins safe*

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[info]atrata
2005-09-09 09:38 pm UTC (link)
I even left out the part about the legs! Apparently in the scene in question, he started in the shoulders and ripped them out to the wrists, and then started with the thighs and ripped to the ankles. Then, puppetry!

Ew, is what I have to say about that.

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