para ([info]alternatefallen) wrote,
@ 2003-12-19 23:33:00
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More Random Wordsmithing.
...damn, this powerswap thing is too damn addictive! But anyways, let's all be short and to the point. *ahem* I now present my second tale for the powerswap:



tyger, tyger, burning bright

Rating: G

Summary: “He needs this,” she remembers the Professor saying, oh so many years ago...

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Tyger Tyger burning bright,
In the forests of the night;
What immortal hand or eye,
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

-William Blake

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It’s that special time of the day, when colours burn so bright it hurts his eyes and every whisper is worth a few explosions; when every heartbeat is a pounding hammer and every vapour trace in the air sets the insides of his throat on fire.

It’s that special time of the day, when he gets to stagger through the hallways like a drunk – he is drunk, he supposes, drunk and drowning in sights and sounds and fragrances that fade into the background for the other blessed mortals, but not so for him, never so for him.

It's dead night, but the few yellow glows lighting the way through his dark condemned passage are still hurting his eyes. The dull static of late night tv does precious little to calm him, either, and he’s not even halfway through before a stifling urge to rip something apart bit by pitiful bit almost takes over. He manages to stifle the urge before it stifles him; the low, throaty growl leaving his lips moments later bears witness that he probably won’t be as unwelcoming to the urge were it to return.

Einstein’s theory of relativity comes into play, and it’s a good few centuries before he reaches his objective: the other end of the corridor, the blessed, holy door – passageway to his sanctuary, his salvation. Exhaling, he reaches for the doorknob, gingerly unlatches the locks, pulls the door open almost reverently.

A woman with fiery red hair watches him from the other end of the corridor, arms folded loosely across her stomach, green catseyes sad and unwavering.

He knows where she is, but he doesn’t turn back to look. He won’t allow himself to; that she is watching is sorrow enough, for both him and her, but to levy her with a final glance before the beast asserts its claim over his body will be an intolerable cruelty.

His eyes flicker as he eyes the night stretching out in all her majesty beyond the open door; he crouches now, stepping forward slowly, very slowly, savouring the sensation of crossing from one world to another. From the light to the shadow, in more ways than one.

Where there were five fingers, five bleak claws gleam dully, and when he licks his lips his tongue slides over a fresh set of fangs.

He doesn’t look back as he presses forward, becoming one with the darkness.

A pair of green catseyes watch the empty doorway still, and their owner blinks a tear away before she returns to the cold comfort of home sweet home.

“He needs this,” she remembers the Professor saying, oh so many years ago. “He IS a Feral, after all, and you know from your research how well hyperattenuated senses and primal metabolisms mix…”

Words, words, just words.

She doesn’t want words, she doesn’t need words; she is flesh and blood and she needs flesh and blood to be whole.

When she finally goes to sleep, alone, she dreams impossible dreams of a night when he won’t have to escape into the darkness to save everything he holds dear from the beast within.

She dreams of an impossible Scott, and at least in her dreams, she finds solace.

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Tyger Tyger burning bright,
In the forests of the night:
What immortal hand or eye,
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?


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(A/n: I'm not entirely sure how this tale came to life, LOL. Most probably from what Min said in the title page comments for the Powerswap - I quote: "That means don't give Scott Jean's telepathy or Logan's healing factor. Give him, oh, Magneto's powers, or Jubilee's, or Bobby's, or Sabretooth's." Well, I tried to give him Sabretooth's feral mutation, with the brain damage making control loss a very regular issue. I confess, though, as far as the actual powerswap goes, this tale is a tad ambiguous; atmosphere was given preference to accuracy here, and if the latter suffers, I apologise. For those who might be wondering what Jean's power is in this verse, well, I'm not telling. :p If I get inspired to do another fic for this verse, maybe then I'll let y'all know firsthand. ;)

Anyway, one last thing to say. Enjoy :))




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[info]minisinoo
2003-12-21 09:04 am UTC (link)
Oh, I like this one, too, for atmosphere. And actually, here, I think the vagueness works. I wasn't entirely sure what kind of feral mutation Scott had, but I assumed something catlike (given the title).

And actually, the problems he has remind me a bit of some problems associated with a certain level of hearing loss. I mentioned before that I suffered some when younger, and one of the really weird things that you lose is the ability to *modulate* really loud noise. Most people's ears just DO that and you don't realize it's even happening, but damage to the ears can make you lose that ability, sometimes permanently. Even today, if a really loud siren goes right by me, I have to put my fingers in my ears or it HURTS. (It was hell, when I used to work in in ER, although the sirens of arriving ambulances were usually far enough away it wasn't a big problem.) Car alarms, beepers, even the *tornado siren* ... all those things bug the hell out of you. (g) And my hearing loss is mostly fixed. But the damage is still there. I can only imagine what it would be like if it affected ALL the senses and was more accute!

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[info]alternatefallen
2003-12-21 07:29 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I like this one, too, for atmosphere. And actually, here, I think the vagueness works. I wasn't entirely sure what kind of feral mutation Scott had, but I assumed something catlike (given the title).

Much Thanks :)

Oh, and about the title, well, what can I say? Blunt (and occasionally cheesy) literary references are FUN. And I couldn't give this short fic a standard title; a story with this much emphasis on atmosphere would need a title just as "atmospheric", I told myself(:p).

"marie, Marie, quite contrary"''s title came about for pretty much the same reason, besides which, it was a subtle (:P) way of pointing out that she was different, a) in terms of powers, in that hers weren't swapped, and b) in terms of state of being, i.e., insane.

And actually, the problems he has remind me a bit of some problems associated with a certain level of hearing loss. I mentioned before that I suffered some when younger, and one of the really weird things that you lose is the ability to *modulate* really loud noise. Most people's ears just DO that and you don't realize it's even happening, but damage to the ears can make you lose that ability, sometimes permanently. Even today, if a really loud siren goes right by me, I have to put my fingers in my ears or it HURTS. (It was hell, when I used to work in in ER, although the sirens of arriving ambulances were usually far enough away it wasn't a big problem.) Car alarms, beepers, even the *tornado siren* ... all those things bug the hell out of you. (g) And my hearing loss is mostly fixed. But the damage is still there. I can only imagine what it would be like if it affected ALL the senses and was more accute!

Ah, the beloved tornado siren. Gotta love the tornado siren (:P). By the way, that bit you mentioned about the automatically modulating sound levels - it works pretty nicely as a way to explain what happens to this version of Scottie: maybe he -can- modulate and keep his instincts/senses in check normally, but has to "let go", as it were, for a period of time, because the modulation isn't a 24/7 thing.

And frankly, it scared me to think of ALL the senses on "hyper"; which was partly why I didn't go into much detail - left half the work to the reader's (hopefully) fertile imagination. (consummate slacker, what can I say? :P)

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[info]directormll
2003-12-23 03:39 pm UTC (link)
I like this one also, paradigm. I like the way that you have left a lot ot the reader's imagination. I think it suits the style of both pieces.

Do write the one on Jean. It has piqued my curiosity.

Linda

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