Dílse ([info]_dilse) wrote,
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4.

January 17, 1922


When Bill was fourteen he had worked a summer in his uncle's pub in Glasgow. His father had said it would be a good learning experience—both to see what it was to earn your pay, and to see what fools men could be when they were in their cups. By the end of that summer his father was dead, and the money had bought Bill a new suit of clothes and a train ticket to London. But he had already learned both lessons well.

The Helm and Hammer was filled to capacity, noisy and smoky and practically swaying with the rollicking of its occupants. They sat round every table, laughing and whispering into lasses' ears; and elbowed each other at the bar, sloshing their pints and hollering to be heard. In one corner two lads were going full-force at the fiddle and bodhrán, and the tables had been pushed back to clear out a dancing space. It swirled now in a blur of clapping hands and twirling skirts as a group of young ones stomped and swung through a frantic, sweaty version of "Scarce O' Tatties". The surrounding patrons whistled and catcalled and praised the attributes of the most enthusiastic skirt-twirlers.

Bill watched the scene from the kitchen door. He was still amazed at his unbelievable luck. He'd already heard several familiar names in the course of all the shouted greetings, and this was only the third hour of the first night. Bernard was going full steam, handing out pint after pint and pouring the whisky as well, laughing as heartily as the tipsiest of his clients. Bill smiled and went back to wiping out the next set of clean glasses. He'd found that "fetch and carry" meant "fetch more whisky" and "carry out the empty pints", and he'd already been downstairs twice to change the barrel. Not much was different since the last time he'd been on this side of the bar.

Miranda passed him in a rush, her arms full of dirty towels. She smiled as he held the door open for her.

"Quite a crowd," he said above the din.

"Aye, it's Saturday," she replied. "They've all got to make sure they've something to confess tomorrow or the week's not worth it." She winked at his laugh and hurried into the kitchen, her braid flying out behind her.

The song ended as abruptly as it had begun and the room broke into applause. The dancers fanned themselves and gulped down their drinks, and a fresh wave of flushed faces bellied up to the bar. Bill took a breath, tugged at his apron, and joined Bernard behind the counter. The man was distributing pints as fast as the tap would fill them, pressing glasses into waiting hands and plucking the coins without even turning his head. Bill approached him as he dropped a jingling handful into the box.

"Do you need some help?" he asked.

"What's that?" Bernard said without looking.

"I said do you need some help?" Bill shouted. Several heads turned in his direction.

"Oh, that would be grand, lad," said Bernard. "Can you run a tap?"

Bill slipped in beside Bernard with a smile, forming a two-man pint assembly line. The men at the bar looked at each other over their drinks.

"Who's this then, Bernie?" said one, a brown-haired young man perched rather precariously on the farthest stool. He gave Bill an evaluating look. "Hired new help, have you?"

"Sure I had to, didn't I, to keep up with you drunkards?" replied Bernard. "This is Bill, lads, and make him welcome."

Bill smiled and handed the young man a pint, dropping his coin into the box. "Bill Boyd, nice to know you."

The man's eyebrows shot up. "Jesus, it's a bleedin Prod!"

"Watch your tongue, boy," said Bernard. "This man is a guest under my roof."

At that, several of the men chuckled. "Taken in another stray, have you Bernard?" called one.

"He's helped all the wayward souls in Dublin, so he has, and now he's recruitin from Edinburgh!" said another, to general laughter.

Bill slid them both fresh glasses and picked up their coins. "Glasgow, actually," he said pleasantly.

That sent a few murmurs through the crowd. "Well then, Glasgow," said the first lad, "Tell me something. What brings a fucking Scotch Prod into the center of Dublin?"

The noise at the bar dropped a notch. Several more drinkers craned their necks to get a better look. Bernard glanced at Bill, but Bill was still smiling that small, genial smile. He stuck a glass beneath the tap and poured.

"Why, the warm Irish hospitality, of course."

Several men laughed, and the talk round the bar resumed its former pitch. Bernard poked at the young man's shoulder. "Now you mind your manners, Sean, and don't go besmirching our cultural reputation any further," he said. "Bill's left Glasgow for good, and we of all men know that the past is a man's own and none of our affair." Bill caught the look that was given him, and saw it mirrored in several faces around the bar. He took the cue and dropped his eyes, waiting for the whispers he knew would follow.

"So it is," said the young man, "So it is." He smiled and stuck out a hand. "Sean Astin's my name. Welcome to our side of the Sea."

Bill shook his hand, returning the smile. With his free hand he picked a stray shot of whisky off the bar. "Sláinte," he said, and tossed it back.

The crowd cheered and raised their glasses, shouting a slurred chorus of "Sláinte!" before draining their drinks. The fiddler was plucking at his strings, rosining up for the next tune, and the room settled into a racket of chatter and laughter. Bill saw more than a few glances in his direction, but all were cursory and short-lived. All but one—a dark-haired, dark-eyed man sat in the back corner, drinking straight from a bottle and staring at Bill with hooded eyes. Bill recognized him instantly—it was the triggerman, Urban. Bill noted the man noting him and then turned his attention back to the bar.

He was pouring the box of coin into the drawer when the doorbells clanged violently and the room erupted into shouts of greeting. Bill's knuckles flexed on the wood when he recognized the name they were calling.

"Dom! Dominic!"

"Good evening to all in this house," said a clear voice.

"Dom, ya skiver, you're late as usual!" shouted a drunken reply.

"What kept you, Monaghan?" called another.

"More like who kept him, and where is she now," yelled a third.

More laughter and shouts of welcome, and Bill looked up toward the door. Pushing through the crowd was a bright-eyed young man, several years younger than himself, with his cap cocked too far in one direction and his jaw cocked too far in the other. He was fresh-faced and well-dressed, pale brown hair curling out beneath his cap and clear skin glowing in the smoky light. Several hands clapped him on the back as he approached the bar, and he smiled at each face in turn and dipped his head in greeting. It wasn't until he elbowed himself in next to Sean and looked at Bill with curious and still-sober gray eyes that Bill realized he had stopped moving. The boy looked at him for a moment, smiling politely, and then Sean shoved at him and broke his attention.

"Monaghan, you bastard, you owe me a pint. Pay up, and add another for interest."

"So I do, Sean, so I do," said the boy. "Bernard, a pint for this thirsty gentleman and another for myself, if you please." He pulled a wad of notes from his pocket and dropped one onto the bar.

"Jesus!" cried the man to his right. "You should be buyin us all pints and dinner besides!"

"Well then I wouldn't have any left to donate to the Holy Church, now would I?" replied the boy. The notes disappeared into his pocket.

"Alright, enough of your showing off, you young dosser," said Bernard. They looked at each other across the counter with blatant affection, and the smiles on both their faces grew larger.

At length the boy turned back to Bill. "I don't believe we've met, sir."

Bernard, softened both by the boy's arrival and the amount of whisky he had consumed, grasped Bill around the shoulders and pulled him forward. "This is Bill, Dom. He'll be helping Mandy and me round here from now on. Bill, this is young Dominic Monaghan, a friend of my family since birth."

There was a pause, and then Bill remembered to put out his hand. "Bill Boyd," he said. "Pleasure to meet you, Dominic." The boy's eyes widened in surprise.

"He's a Prod," Sean offered helpfully.

The boy glanced at him, one eyebrow raised, and then turned back to Bill and shook his hand. "Well then he'll not be taking up your time in the confessional tomorrow, will he? Call me Dom, by the way."

Bill smiled back. "Dom it is."

Down the bar someone shouted, "Oi, Glasgow! Can we get a refill down here?"

"Right there," replied Bill, and gave a final nod before he turned away.

From the corner there was a squeak of the fiddle and a voice yelled, "Right, let's have another!"

"What'll you have, then?" called the fiddler, tucking his chin with bow poised. An excited ripple ran through the room. There was a scraping sound as chairs were pushed back and dancing partners selected for the next round. Various requests were shouted one over the other for a second or two, until suddenly a high female voice rose out above the rest.

"'The Limerick Rake'!"

The call was met with instant approval, and the crowd began to whistle and rap their knuckles on the tables. There was a commotion at the end of the bar and Bill turned to see a dozen hands tugging at Dom's shoulders and arms, trying to drag him from his stool.

"Go on then, go on!" they shouted.

Dom clutched his glass, protesting with grand theatrics. "I've not even had my second pint yet! Can a man not drink in peace anymore?"

"Then your pipes are still fresh and untainted," someone yelled. "Now get your arse over there and sing!"

"Sing! Sing!" chanted a score of voices, until Dom drained half his pint in a single swallow and set the glass down in defeat. There were calls of encouragement as he made his way over to the corner where the fiddler stood. Passing the source of the request, he leaned down to the dark-haired girl and said with a threatening gleam, "I'll have my vengeance for this, Hannah Wood."

The girl's blue eyes were sharp and snapping. "I'm counting on it, Dom Monaghan."

He was smiling ear to ear as he found a spot between a table and a post. The crowd jostled in their places for a better view and Bill found himself leaning on the bar to watch. There was a sharp tap-tap-tap from the bodhrán, the fiddler struck his bow, and Dom cleared his throat and began to sing.

I am a young fellow that's easy and bold,
In Castletown Conners I'm very well known,
In Newcastle West I spent many a note
With Kitty and Judy and Mary.
Me parents rebuked me for being a rake
And spending me time in such frolicsome ways,
But I ne'er can forget the good nature of Jane,
Agus fagaimid siud mar ata se.


The crowd whooped with raucous delight, clapping in time and laughing at the occasional shouted suggestion of names to add to the list. Dom soaked up the noise and drew in another breath, planting his thumbs behind his braces and lifting his chin for the second verse.

If I chance for to go to the town of Rathkeal,
All the girls all around me do flock on the square,
Some give me a bottle and others sweet cake
To treat me unknown to their parents.
There's one from Askeaton and one from the pike,
Another from Arda, me heart has beguiled,
Tho' being from the mountains her stockings are white,
Agus fagaimid siud mar ata se.


Bill watched in silent amazement. If he had had any doubts after the display at the bar, they disappeared when Dom seized the bodhrán and leapt up onto the table to beat out the bridge. There could no mistake about it. This was his money-runner. He'd found him on the very first night.

Dom gained his balance on the table as the room rocked with whistles and claps. The music swelled louder, the pulse of the song beating in the tap of his foot and the heave of his chest. He hammered the bodhrán in a perfect frenzy and sang until his face flushed darker than the drunkest man in the room, and Bill forgot his inner congratulations and could only watch him with everyone else.

Now there's some say I'm foolish and more say I'm wise,
To be fond of the women I think is no crime,
For the son of King David had ten thousand wives,
And his wisdom was highly regarded.
I'll take a good garden and live at my ease,
And each woman and child can partake of the same,
If there's war in the cabin, themselves they can blame,
Agus fagaimid siud mar ata se.

And now for the future I mean to be wise,
And I'll marry the women who acted so kind,
I'll marry them all in the morrow by and by,
If the clergy agree to the bargain.
And when I'm on me back and me soul is at peace,
Those women will crowd for to cry at me wake,
And their sons and their daughters will offer a prayer,
To the Lord for the soul of their father.


The pub exploded into cheers. Dom beamed, his eyes shining to blue as he wiped his brow with the back of one hand. He grinned down at the crowd and gave them a grandiose, if somewhat wobbly, bow. Someone took the bodhrán from Dom's hands and replaced it with a fresh pint. His eye fell on Bill, still watching from behind the bar. Dom smiled and raised the glass, licking his lips before tilting his head back to drain it dry. Bill froze in mid-pour.

"Oi Glasgow," said the man in front of him, "Can I have my whisky or what?"

Bill watched as Dom grabbed the girl Hannah for a breathless kiss. He finished filling the tumbler to the brim, and then picked it up and emptied it in one swallow.




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[info]msilverstar
2004-12-30 01:18 am UTC (link)
So much going on here, layers and time and place and Billy's scar, omg. I am very very much enjoying this.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 11:51 am UTC (link)
I'm in love with this 'verse. I'm so happy that other people are liking it too! :)

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[info]gypsyjolie
2004-12-30 01:39 am UTC (link)
Just found this - and this chapter is the best of the lot so far! Love the song - did you find it while researching? And what does the chorus line "Agus fagaimid siud mar ata se" mean?

Can't wait for the next chapter - you're only doling them out once a week?? *clutches*

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[info]laerwen
2004-12-30 03:52 am UTC (link)
Agus fagaimid siud mar ata se

On Google, I've found a few sites that say the translation is "we'll leave it as it is", or "the less said, the better". Hmm.

I love Gaelic languages. :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 11:49 am UTC (link)
Did you find an online translator? *excited* I've been using dictionaries and a couple of online glossaries and phrasebooks, but I never could find an Irish translator. So even I didn't know what that phrase meant! \o/

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[info]laerwen
2004-12-30 05:46 pm UTC (link)
I actually just said "ok, let's shoot from the hip" since I couldn't find a translator. >_< So, I just plugged the phrase into Google and that was the translation that came up in the hits over and over. It helped, but it might not be exact. I think it makes sense in context at least. :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 09:33 pm UTC (link)
Awesome. I think it's an excellent translation. :D

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[info]cathgon54
2004-12-30 03:11 am UTC (link)
It seems Bill is as taken with young Dominic as I am with this story.

I have always been a fan of your writing but I think this story is about to bring me to the level of worshipper. I am in awe of the way this story flows - the texture and characters are extremely vibrant. This particular chapter simply pulsed with life.

I am thrilled you decided to share this and I eagerly look forward to the succeeding chapters.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 11:55 am UTC (link)
This will definitely not be like any assignment dear Bill has had so far. :D

These first few chapters just kind of flowed out of me on their own. I was amazed. I just hope that the later chapters, written after I got over my block, can keep up the pace.

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[info]pardiana
2004-12-30 03:42 am UTC (link)
Well I'm hooked. :)

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 11:55 am UTC (link)
Hooray! :D

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[info]laerwen
2004-12-30 03:56 am UTC (link)
I really love the complexity you're building here. I am really intrigued about all of these people and what their true significance is. I actually gasped when Bill was called a "bloody Scotch Prod". X_X... How Scots have been discriminated against (the Irish as well) has always been fascinating to me, and this illustrates it really well. He's so well educated and intelligent that it makes it all the more bitter, I suppose.
The images are also so vivid--the thought of Dom singing like that never occurred to me. The unexpected quality of it makes it even better.

This is just great. Keep 'em coming! :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 11:59 am UTC (link)
I spent an entire afternoon researching derogatory terms for Scots. :D That was the only one that was clearly defined as being used specifically by Irish against Scottish. I've always found it fascinating too that the two groups could have animosity when they've historically spent so long against a common enemy. But I guess it's just human nature.

I'm glad you're enjoying this! Eee!

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[info]blondiusmaximus
2004-12-30 04:11 am UTC (link)
I am quite addicted to this universe of yours, thank you very much. XD

So many layers! And ooh, it's so interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes. :D :D :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 11:59 am UTC (link)
*wiggles* Thank you so much! More will be coming soon. :)

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[info]krystalshay
2004-12-30 12:32 pm UTC (link)
Wow, I can't belive there is going to be such a good, looong AU fic being posted regularly. You have no idea how happy this makes me! And beautifully written... but what else to expect from you, m'dear?

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 09:34 pm UTC (link)
Aw, what a sweet thing to say! Well, if things go as planned, this should last a good few months at least. \o/

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[info]krystalshay
2004-12-30 10:17 pm UTC (link)
Really? That long? ::does a little dance of fic-joy::

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[info]finduilas_clln
2004-12-30 09:22 pm UTC (link)
I am so in glee over this. :) I can't wait to read more. Awesome, Berry. Just like I always knew it'd be.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-30 09:35 pm UTC (link)
people like my story koekje omg yay!!!

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[info]finduilas_clln
2004-12-30 09:36 pm UTC (link)
That's 'cause it's really really good! You are such a talented Koekje. :)

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[info]fitofpique
2004-12-30 11:26 pm UTC (link)
oh berreh, i am so the smitten kitten right now! i just read all four chapters and i am enchanted with, enthralled by, and all aflutter at the universe you've created.

you kick so much ass!

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! i'm so excited about this!

*tackleglomps you*

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-31 02:04 am UTC (link)
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

*swings you round the dance floor*

♥ ♥ ♥

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[info]lindz04
2004-12-31 01:22 am UTC (link)
It's really good so far. Yay. :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-31 02:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I hope you like it as it goes on! Yay!

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[info]bungee
2005-01-02 12:07 am UTC (link)
This is really lovely. I've just sat down and caught up on all four chapters so far, and I can't wait to read more. I find it all the more interesting because I've just discovered The Boondock Saints, and have thus been doing some research on the Irish (and the IRA, in particular). So it's rather exciting to see one of my long-time interests mingling with one of my emerging interests. :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-02 03:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I've had a good time researching this as well. That, and imagining everyone with Irish accents. *alskjfsldfjdj* \o/

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[info]alysscarlet
2005-01-04 12:21 pm UTC (link)
This is building really nicely! I look forward to this over the next few months!

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-06 12:21 pm UTC (link)
I'm fighting the urge to post more quickly, since people are reacting so positively. It is so true that feedback becomes both an inspiration and an addiction. But I don't want to spend all my buffer before I've made some progress on the last eight chapters. Hopefully I'll have the next one this weekend! <3

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[info]scieppan
2005-01-06 05:03 am UTC (link)
Dom really shines as a unique character in this chapter. Very cool stuff.

his cap cocked too far in one direction and his jaw cocked too far in the other. Love it - perfect description.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-06 12:22 pm UTC (link)
I'm so, so glad someone liked that line. It is my absolute favorite and it still strikes me when I read over the chapter. (Does that sound conceited?) When I wrote it I was just like, "Yes, yes, thank you, prose gods." :p

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[info]hephaestion32
2005-01-07 08:35 am UTC (link)
“Aye, it’s Saturday,” she replied. “They’ve all got to make sure they’ve something to confess tomorrow or the week’s not worth it.” She winked at his laugh and hurried into the kitchen, her braid flying out behind her.

I love that line. :)


The weird thing is that I could picture this whole scene in my head. I could practically see the bar, the busy rush, the beer flowing, Dom singing, and Bill staring like a smitten kitten.

I didn't think about it until you mentioned it in a comment, but I never hear too much about the animosity between the Scots and the Irish. I like the fact that you bring it up in the story. It adds another interesting layer to it, in my opinion.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-08 01:52 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I love it when someone picks out a line that's also one of my favorites. *glee*

It is interesting to me, how the different groups in that area have related to each other over the course of the centuries. You always hear about Irish/English and Scottish/English, but you don't hear as much about Irish/Scottish. Maybe I should have thrown a Welshman in there to make it complete. :D

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[info]hephaestion32
2005-01-09 05:53 am UTC (link)
haha :D I will have to read more about this part of history.

Since you are a history major, what books about Scottish or Irish history do you enjoy? I need to find one for my beside table reading. :)
Plus, I am in the process of finding some information about my Irish ancestors (My great grandfather came from there), so I would love to know more about the country. :D

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-13 03:57 pm UTC (link)
Hmm. Now that I'm trying to think of a list, of course not a single book is coming to mind. Remind me again in a few days and I'll see what Trish and I can come up with. :D

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[info]hephaestion32
2005-01-19 10:22 pm UTC (link)
LOL It happens. :)

By the way, sorry it took me so long to see this!

Just let me know if you find anything. I have been looking at a lot of Scottish books but none seem to pique my interest. I always see the one called "How the Scots invented the Modern World". Have you read that one?

"Culture Shock! Scotland" is good but it kind of makes me feel like I am reading cliff-notes on Scotland or something. :D

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[info]tenar
2005-02-01 02:39 am UTC (link)
um. i am so very very wide-eyed and dead right now.

wide eyed
dead
m-o-o-n, that spells ded.

yep. falling head over heels with this story. and this dom. i could *see* him. nggggah.

i hope you don't mind these comment as i go type comments. damn, my dinner's ready. fuck. no dinner. story!

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-02 11:29 pm UTC (link)
I don't mind them at all. I eat them with a spoon like delicious and crunchy cereal. With marshmallows in it.

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[info]elvinborn
2005-02-04 12:23 am UTC (link)
I think I'm in love

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-06 10:09 pm UTC (link)
<3333333333333333

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[info]kinkthatwinked
2005-02-04 03:49 am UTC (link)
I see why this chapter had an explosion of feedback now; there's so much going on, yet it's not much longer than the previous ones. That's a real gift, to be able to keep the chapters compact yet detailed.

Karl Urban, Sean Astin, Hannah Wood(!) and of course Dominic all introduced in one chapter. And of course Dominic stole the fucking story the moment he walked into the bar! I love that!

I like how you can't quite tell if Dominic's notice of Billy is attraction, an attempt to make the 'Prod' feel welcome, or a combination of both. I wonder does Billy realize his reaction to Dom may be more than excitement at getting a lock on his target? I mean, everyone's obviously entertained by / enamored of Dom, but Billy was downright mesmerized.

Think I've had enough for tonight, but I'll be back in Dublin tomorrow!

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-06 10:11 pm UTC (link)
*happy dance*

I am completely stoked that Bill and Dom's first meeting worked out like it did. I didn't want to do something cheesy (their eyes met, their hearts fluttered...), but then again, it needs to be a singular, effective event. You know? So I'm wiggling with glee right about now. \o/

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[info]kit_a_licious
2005-02-22 02:10 am UTC (link)
Though it may be impossible to pay you any compliments that others haven't already paid much more eloquently, I'll do my best, because it is deserved. Almost as a rule, I never read fanfiction (I don't know why, but it generally makes me itch), but I love this story, it's fascinating and very well-researched, and the characters are truly enjoyable. I love the way you approach everything, particularly in this chapter with the much-anticipated meeting of your two players, the explosive, bombastic Dominic personality, and the way that Bill still seems to have work on his mind, stoutly convincing himself that it's all for the sake of research. The best part, to me, is that you never come out and say it directly, but the reader just knows by the way you present it all.

I wish I hadn't come into this so late... I feel like I'm left out of a particularly awesome club. ;) Truly, a swingin' job, madam, and I've no doubt I'll be further amazed the more I read.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-22 11:53 pm UTC (link)
Wow. That is some seriously powerful feedback. I'm honored that you gave my story a chance, and stoked that it ended up working for you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it -- and don't worry, you're not excluded from anything. I'm only a third of the way through posting. \o/

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[info]kit_a_licious
2005-02-23 12:25 am UTC (link)
I'm looking forward to it greatly. Oh, and I hope I didn't sound like a snob when I said I rarely read fanfiction -- it's not cause I'm a snob, just cause I'm a nerd. ;)

Thankd for this, and I'm looking forward to the rest!

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-23 12:29 am UTC (link)
No way, I didn't think it sounded snobby at all. Fanfic, especially slash, especially slash about real people, is a tricky thing. I sometimes forget that in the grand scheme of things, this isn't a terribly normal hobby. :p Lots of people aren't into it, which is totally OK. It makes it all the more awesome that you gave it a shot and liked it!

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[info]oddlove
2005-04-05 02:44 pm UTC (link)
I'm not sure if it's the easy flow of banter and festivities in the pub, or Dom's appearance and predictable display (not to mention how his mere presence is met with TREMENDOUS affection). Probably both. & this chapter has made me extremely happy. :D

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[info]perfect_oasis
2006-02-14 12:08 am UTC (link)
Ooooh! How exciting. Shite, I still absolutely love this story. It's written so well and it's fun and... hee. I just love it. :)

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