Dílse ([info]_dilse) wrote,
@ 2004-12-25 00:09:00
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3.

January 16, 1922


The front door bells barely had time to jingle before there was a loud bark, and Bill found himself struggling against not only an armful of packages but an enthusiastic stumbling block running circles between his legs. The dog yelped out his greeting, tail thumping madly until Bill surrendered and set his load on the nearest table, squatting to return the welcome with two ruffling hands. From the kitchen he heard Bernard's voice and looked up just as he entered with a crate of glasses, scowling.

"Oi, Styb, shut your gob, we—oh it's you, Bill. I'm sorry for that cursed creature pawing at you."

"He's just doing his job, isn't that right Styb? Who's a good watchdog then?" Bill scritched the dog's ears and smiled as the tail-thumping increased.

"Did you find what you needed at the market?"

Bill patted Styb's belly and recalled his afternoon: mapping out the neighborhood in his mind, noting the relevant buildings and marking the police station and post boxes; eating an apple under an awning and scanning the passing crowds at the market; standing at the notice boards and bending an ear to every raised voice or gossipy whisper.

"Aye," he said, "I've got all I need here, I think."

He stood and collected his shopping. "Thank you again for the day's wages, Bernard. I took a look at the boards today and I'm sure I'll find something soon. I'll be out of your hair before you know it."

Bernard looked down at his hands. "I've been meaning to talk to you about that, lad."

"Oh?"

"Have you spoken to anyone about a job or lodgings yet?"

"Well, no, not in person. Not yet."

Bernard nodded. "I don't mean to be insulting you, Bill, but it's—you must know that it might be a hard time for you to...well, to find someone who..."

"Who would hire a Scot?" Bill smiled.

"Aye. You may not have picked the best time or place to start over, lad."

Bill nodded. He looked out the window at the people passing by on the pavement outside. So many people, so many faces, and not one of them familiar. Not one of them knowing why he was here, what it was he was trying to do. Or whom he was doing it for.

"I'm right where I want to be," he lied.

Bernard chuckled. "You're a scrappy young knacker, I'll give you that." He set his crate on the counter. "And I won't be lying, I've got a bit of a soft spot for scrappy young knackers." He waited for Bill's grin, and then crossed his arms and continued.

"See, it's like this. You've done such a wondrous job of cleaning up the place, and—well, if you can't find anything better...that is to say...I've got the spare room upstairs. It's not the grandest sight on earth but it's no tenement hole, that's for sure. I can't pay you enough to get your fancy flat but you're welcome to the room as part of your wages."

Bill froze, stunned. It couldn't possibly be this easy. He walked over to the bar and dropped his packages on a stool.

"You're offering me a place to stay? You've known me three days!"

Bernard's cheeks were even redder, if it were possible, and he dismissed Bill's words with a gruff noise. "Bollocks, what difference does that make? You need a room, I've got one wanting, it's simple as that. All I ask is that you help with the chores, and also that you not murder myself and my daughter in our beds." He looked down at the loud thumping coming from Bill's feet. "Besides, my dog fancies you, and Styb's the best judge of character I know, so he is."

They both laughed, and then the room grew quiet. Bill was standing with his head tilted to the left; he could see Bernard trying not to stare. Lord McKellen's assessment was proving to be more and more accurate, it would seem. Bill realized he did not like that idea very much. His grin faded.

"I don't know what to say."

Bernard clapped him on the back, all spirits again. "Say you'll start tomorrow night."

Bill smiled broadly, and hoisted his armful again.

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The quilt on the bed was red gingham, something Bill hadn't seen in a very long time. The sheets beneath were plain strong homespun, warm and familiar and smelling of the rosehip sachet that had met his fingers when he'd checked beneath the mattress. He sat cross-legged with his back against the wrought-iron frame, chewing his pencil and wiggling his toes inside his socks. His shoes peeked from beneath the bed, side by side and pointing out, the only remaining habit from his dormitory days. That, and the ability to spot a loose floorboard and know exactly how much would fit into the space beneath it.

The board in question now stood propped beside the nightstand. His small briefcase lay open on the floor in front of it. His initials were embossed into the leather: WB, a gift from his sister when he graduated Cambridge. She would be wanting a telegram soon, to know he'd arrived safely. He'd send her one with the next wire of money.

The papers strewn across the bed were covered equally in stark black type and his own scrawled handwriting. He'd thrown away the photographs before he ever left the Director's Office. There had only been two: a newspaper advert of Bernard at the door of the pub, and a grainy mugshot of a former triggerman, someone called Urban. Hill was the in and Urban was the checkmark, but neither were of real importance. Bill scanned down the list of names and information. Looked like the same drill as all the rest: mostly common workers, everyday men trading information and keeping the real conspirators from getting caught. Just doing their part. The more these men got comfortable with him, the better chance he had at getting close to his real targets—the leaders, or those who knew who the leaders were.

Bill read the blurry type, scowling in concentration. Now here was a young one. Father's whereabouts unknown, mother dead for some years. Older brother a munitions smuggler presumed dead after the Rising in '16. Worked on the docks, no criminal record. Seen with known faction members, including some suspected of smuggling cash from America. Bill nodded. A well-liked lad with a tragic past—definitely the sort needed for the heart, if not the brains, of a rebellion.

And what does that make me? he thought, and chuckled to himself.

The evidence was pretty circumstantial, but given the culture of the IRA it seemed a fair bet that this kid was involved more heavily than appearances let on. But more importantly than that, Bill's instincts prickled on the back of his neck the moment his eye caught on the name. This boy was one to watch, he knew it without question. He circled the name with broad gray strokes of his pencil. Monaghan.

A knock at the door and he nearly leapt off the bed. The papers were gone and the case snapped shut before he even heard the soft voice on the other side of the door. "Mr. Boyd?"

The floorboard clicked into place and he said, "Come in."

Miranda's gold hair caught the lamplight as she peeked around the door. Bill looked up at her from the bed, reading glasses on his nose and well-worn novel in his hands. She smiled.

"I brought you some water and another pillow, if you like. Sorry to be disturbing you."

"No Miss Hill, you're not disturbing me at all. Thank you for thinking of me."

She entered, tray in her hands and feather pillow tucked beneath one arm. She set the water on the nightstand and plumped the pillow a little before setting it at the end of the bed. Bill managed not to smile as he watched her take in the room with a sweep of her eyes: the suitcase sitting open on the chair; the wallet and watch on the nightstand; the shoes beneath the bed; the novel in his hands. Remembering herself, she looked back at him and clasped her hands together.

"Well, so, then, will you be needing anything else?"

"No, thanks very much, Miss Hill."

She grinned. "I've told you to call me Miranda."

He looked at her over the rim of his glasses and smiled. "Only if you'll call me Bill."

"It's a deal, then." She turned as if to go, and then paused. "Oh, yes, if you'd like, I could show you around a bit tomorrow, where the markets are and such. And the post, in case you were wanting to send word to your family."

He admired her tenacity, that was for certain. He decided it was time to give her something in return. "Actually I did want to telegram my sister, so that would be lovely, thanks."

"Oh, your sister? Does she stay back in Glasgow with your parents, then?"

"My parents are dead."

She gave a little "oh!" and covered her mouth with one hand. With the other she crossed herself quickly. "I am sorry for prying, Bill. I've no right to run on so."

He gave her a small smile. "Don't worry about it, lass. It happened a long time ago."

He leaned over and reached for the glass of water. He could feel her eyes on his throat as he moved. In the glow of lamplight the shadows would be deeper, the lines more vivid. He wondered what she would think if she could see the rest of him. Trying not to grin, he rubbed at his neck until she averted her eyes. When she looked back at him, her face had changed. Bill saw understanding there, and something else as well—empathy. Kinship. The impulse to grin disappeared. He swallowed the rest of the water, his throat gone suddenly dry.

"I'll just leave you then," she said, and moved towards the door.

"Miranda?"

She turned in the doorway. "Yes?"

"Thank you for showing me kindness."

"We must all do our part," she replied, and the door clicked softly behind her.




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[info]alysscarlet
2004-12-27 02:00 pm UTC (link)
Eeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'm the first person to comment!

Just finished reading the first three chapters. Very promising! I'm looking forward to the next instalments. I'm already very curious to learn more about Billy's story - where he got the scar etc. And I like the characterisations of Bernard and Miranda (although I find it hard to imagine the former with an Irish accent! Not your fault though.) I'm looking forward to meeting Dom and 'Urban', *g*. This promises to be an exciting yarn - you've picked an interesting time and place to set it!

One small thought, which you may have researched already, in which case forgive me, but did they have duvets in Ireland in the 1920s? We certainly didn't have duvets in England in my childhood - they came into common use in the late 1970s. I imagine they were around earlier in Scandinavia, which is where we got them from, but I would have thought in the 1920s it was just blankets and sheets!

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. How many have you written so far, and how many do you estimate in total? If you're posting one a week I just wanted to know how long I can look forward to this story!

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-28 12:34 am UTC (link)
I think I've just got a possible regional vocabulary snafu. Where I grew up, we used the words "duvet", "blanket" and "bedspread" pretty much interchangeably. Now granted, these are all different things. When I wrote "duvet", I meant something like a blankety type bedspread, not a big fluffy comforter. Possibly a poor word choice on my part! I'll have to see about changing it.

I've got 20 chapters written as of right now, with the rest outlined. It looks like it will come out to about 30 chapters. I'm posting one a week to give myself plenty of buffer until I finish all 30 -- after that I'll probably speed it up. I want everybody to read it too. *dork*

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[info]alysscarlet
2004-12-28 10:55 am UTC (link)
Ah yes, I thought you would have looked into it! In England, I think the word 'duvet' has always referred to the big fluffy things from Scandanavia that you have to put into a cover, rather than a bedspread/quilt type thing. Don't know how it was used in Ireland.

Excellent! Should keep us going til Easter!

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[info]krystalshay
2004-12-27 07:20 pm UTC (link)
Wow, what a promising and intriguing start... can't wait to read more chapters... *friends*

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2004-12-28 12:35 am UTC (link)
Yay! I hope you enjoy it! :D :D

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[info]scieppan
2005-01-06 03:58 am UTC (link)
I really enjoyed the small details woven in - the sachet and the homespun, etc. You have a knack for those kinds of details (wriggling toes in socks - I love it) that give your characters and descriptions weight.

I also think this is a lovely para: Bill patted Styb’s belly and recalled his afternoon: mapping out the neighborhood in his mind, noting the relevant buildings and marking the police station and post boxes; eating an apple under an awning and scanning the passing crowds at the market; standing at the notice boards and bending an ear to every raised voice or gossipy whisper. It packs a lot of good information into an efficient space. Well done.

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[info]scieppan
2005-01-06 03:58 am UTC (link)
You sure you don't want to join our group? ;-)

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-06 12:20 pm UTC (link)
This was going to be my zinefic, and I was using that tight, sparse style that I ended up using for my actual zinefic, because I was trying to keep it short. After things changed, I found that I didn't like going back and messing up the flow of those early chapters. So, these first few are short and pack a lot into a little. I've tried to keep that going throughout, but I think around Chapter 14 we're back to my old style of wordy longwindedness. Yay! :D

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[info]hephaestion32
2005-01-07 08:16 am UTC (link)
I really want to know more about this scar. I am intrigued. :)

I'm hooked. I can't wait until he meets Dom.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-01-08 01:52 pm UTC (link)
Hooray! Thank you! :)

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[info]tenar
2005-02-01 02:17 am UTC (link)
eeeee!!!

i am so falling for this. i can see the conflict, i can see where it's going, and it doesn't matter if i'm right or if there are twists because i already trust that you'll write it excellently enough to make it work. LOVE the miranda and billy scene in the bedroom there. love love love.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-02 11:23 pm UTC (link)
because i already trust

Scary and wonderful and encouraging and loff. <3333333333

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[info]kinkthatwinked
2005-02-04 03:20 am UTC (link)
Damn. Just the power of reading Monaghan's name on a sheet of paper got that reaction? I know it's more of a gut-instinct-for-the-case reaction, but we're allowed to imagine it's something more, hmm? A sixth sense even Bill isn't aware of, maybe?

Hmmmm, just how many scars are there? Where did they come from? Inquiring minds want to know... preferably through graphic descriptions of Billy's nakedness in future chapters.

I don't think I mentioned this before, but I like the little ways you show Billy's discontent with his job situation. Disquieted by McKellen's description of Hill, depressed in the knowledge that the people around him have no idea who's side he's on and will judge him purely by his accent. Can't wait to see how Dominic will break through Bill's shields and get to this side of our agent; sounds like he desperately needs a friend.

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2005-02-06 10:08 pm UTC (link)
Inquiring minds want to know... preferably through graphic descriptions of Billy's nakedness in future chapters.

Hee!

Bill *is* quite discontent with the way his professional life has turned out. Just how discontent, he hasn't realized yet, but it's becoming more and more evident with each assignment.

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[info]oddlove
2005-04-05 02:32 pm UTC (link)
I love the way you alternate between Billy and Billy's Job - his obligations don't bleed into his personality; it's not like he scoffs at how easy it is to infiltrate the factions because Bernard's a good person. In fact, he doesn't like it. He doesn't want to take advantage of anybody, and he appreciates the kindness offered him without agenda. I think I like this Billy very much. Excellent, excellent characterization. :)

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[info]perfect_oasis
2006-02-10 03:45 am UTC (link)
Eee! The first mention of Dommie, yesh? ;) Yay!

Their voices are all so... right. I love it! *hurries off for the next part*

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[info]sophinisba
2007-07-09 05:27 am UTC (link)
I've just read the first three chapters of this and I'm enjoying it so much. I like the way you keep the story moving forward while revealing little bits of information and background. All very subtle and makes for lots of curiosity and the need to keep reading. I really like the characters we've seen so far and can't wait to meet this universe's Dom. :)

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[info]strawberryelfsp
2007-07-09 01:16 pm UTC (link)
Aw, thanks! I hope you like him once you meet him. :D

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