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The Life of Reilly, Part 1 (airdate Mar. 09, 2005)

The Life of Reilly

Part 1

(August 05, 2005)

Written by: Masquerade

Teaser

EXT. BACK PARKING LOT - CHURCH OF THE MOST HOLY TRINITY - EVENING

PANNING - empty save for two run-down cars in the far corner. Connor stands slumped, staring out across the lot, his make-shift stake on the ground at his feet. Faith is just outside the back door of the church, propping up the sagging, wounded Slayer Julie. Julie has a dark stain on her shirt. She winces and inhales raggedly. Faith casts her a worried glance, then aims a glare at Connor.

FAITH
Connor!?

Connor glances back. CLOSE-UP on his face - a mixture of stunned shock, anguish, and acknowledging guilt. He says nothing.

FAITH
(disgusted)
I don't have time for this.

She starts walking a hobbling Julie forward.

Just then, HEADLIGHTS ARC into the parking lot.

CUT TO a CLOSE-UP looking through the front windshield of the car as it pulls into the lot. It's Faith's Impala. ANGEL is at the wheel.

Connor's eyes rise to the car.

The car comes to a halt. Angel jumps out, leaving the engine running, and helps Julie into the back seat. He gives Connor a puzzled glance.

ANGEL
Connor?

Connor turns and bolts out of the lot.

ANGEL
(to Faith, concerned)
What happened?

FAITH
(opening the driver's side door)
I don't know and I don't care.

She climbs inside.

Angel compresses his lips, then turns and walks quickly over to the edge of the parking lot.

His POV - looking downhill at the dim-lit RESIDENTIAL STREET. A CAR headed towards the church STOPS, its headlights beaming. In the bleed off the lights, we can see Connor's gangly silhouette. He opens the passenger side door and gets in.

Angel stands there a moment, his expression pensive. We hear the soft squeal of brakes and an idling engine.

FAITH
Yo, Angel! Are you coming?

Angel turns and heads over to Faith's car.

BLACK OUT.


END OF TEASER

Opening Credits
The theme song plays as we see images of


CONNOR REILLY walking to classes, killing a vampire

starring

Vincent Kartheiser

FAITH THE VAMPIRE SLAYER, fighting in the SLAYER TRAINING ROOM with
Connor

Eliza Dushku

and REPORTER AIDEN WALSH, pulling his CAMERA away from his face.

and

Sean Maher

Act One

with special guest stars

Jim Abele
Adrienne Brett
Emma Hunton
Andy Hallett
Megalyn Echikunwoke

and

James Marsters
Juliet Landau
David Boreanaz
Julie Benz


INT. FRONT HALLWAY - REILLY HOME - DAY ("FLASHBACK")

SUPER LEGEND: May, 2003

A nicely tiled foyer with rustic wood trim on the walls. The FRONT DOOR OPENS. The Reillys--a longer-haired Connor, Connor's aunt, Doreen, Colleen, and finally Lawrence--enter the house one by one, talking and laughing. Connor is dressed in nice slacks, a button-down shirt, and a tie. He has a BLUE ROBE slung over his arm and a square, tasseled GRADUATION CAP in his hand.

CONNOR
(to his aunt)
You're staying for dinner, right?

AUNT
(raising a wine bottle)
I wouldn't miss toasting my favorite nephew.

CONNOR
(with a chuckle)
I'm your only nephew.

DOREEN
(eyeing the wine bottle)
Do I get to have some of that?

AUNT
How was the big party last night?

Colleen's eyes flit over to her son.

COLLEEN
(in a mock-reprimanding tone)
I seem to recall hearing a door squeak at
three a.m.

Lawrence shuts the front door behind them.

INT. FAMILY ROOM/DEN - DAY

Brightly-lit and homey. The mahogany shelves are filled with books, trinkets, and family photographs--school portraits and framed snapshots of the family.

Connor's aunt sets her wine bottle on the coffee table and raises the camera slung around her neck.

AUNT
One more picture!

CONNOR
(with good humor)
Jeez, not another one. I want to change!

Doreen plops down on the large leather couch.

Connor sets his unframed diploma and cap down beside her, then slips his gown over his shoulders and pops on the cap. He picks up the diploma. Lawrence's hand settles on his shoulder.

LAWRENCE
(with a squeeze)
I'm proud of you.

CONNOR
It's just a high school diploma. Everyone has one.

LAWRENCE
Not everyone. And not everyone's going to Stanford.

CONNOR
I haven't definitely decided on Stanford yet.
I still have a month or two.

LAWRENCE
But you have choices, Connor.
And that's why I'm proud.

Connor smiles at his father, then sits down next to Doreen.

His aunt is on the other side of the coffee table. She waves Connor's parents over to the couch.

AUNT
C'mon. Squeeze in.

Colleen and Lawrence sit down next to their kids.

AUNT
Let's see that diploma.

VIEW THROUGH AUNT'S CAMERA - Dad, Mom, Connor, Doreen, squeezed together on the couch, smiling. Connor holds up his unframed diploma. The image FREEZES in the light of the flash.


Slowly, we PULL BACK to see that we are now looking at a FRAMED PHOTOGRAPH sitting on Connor's bookshelf.

INT. CONNOR'S APARTMENT - EVENING

PAN AROUND to the front door. Connor stands there with his hand on the light switch. His face is grim. He closes the door.

QUICK FLASH -
The church parking lot. Darla walks towards him, head tilted, smiling.
CONTINUOUS - Connor's GRIM EXPRESSION.

Finally he blinks, focusing in on the room.

PANNING - it's just as he left it--books and notebooks spread out on the kitchen table, his book bag limp on the couch. Shoes tipped over on the living room floor.

Connor crosses to the table almost mechanically. His eyes dip to his books.

QUICK-FLASH -
Darla's delicate features twist into the wrinkled forehead and fangs of a DEMON. She closes in on Connor, taunting him.
CLOSE-UP on Connor's hands, gripping the edge of the table. TREMBLING.

His face contorts with pain. He GRABS a textbook off the table and HEAVES it into the corner beside the stove.

CONNOR
Aauuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Then he HEAVES ANOTHER. Then he UPTURNS THE ENTIRE KITCHEN TABLE and KICKS IT, HARD. It SLAMS against the kitchen cabinet and SPLITS IN TWO.

Connor throws his head back, gasping.

His POV - the CEILING.

Slowly, he circles around, face crumpling, and sinks to the floor.


FADE TO -

CLOSE-UP of a TRANSPARENT PANE OF GLASS. We see Faith's dim reflection in it. Her expression is solemn.

Then the FOCUS SHIFTS so we can see THROUGH THE GLASS at what she's looking at. It's JULIE, lying in a bed, hooked up to an I.V. line and machines monitoring her vital signs.

INT. HOSPITAL INTENSIVE CARE UNIT - EVENING

LONG SHOT of the CORRIDOR - Faith stands gazing through a window. Beyond her are more rooms with critical patients in them, also set behind glass. A nurse bustles down the corridor passing Angel, who strolls towards Faith carrying two cups of coffee.

He halts at Faith's side and hands a cup to her.

ANGEL
(looking in)
How's she doing?

FAITH
It wasn't deep. It cut into her breast bone,
but no, you know, vital...stuff.

Faith takes a sip of her coffee and lowers the cup. Her jaw stiffens with anger and determination.

FAITH
Angel, I want you to tell me everything
you know about Drusilla. And I mean everything--
(her head snaps towards him)
what she wants, how she thinks
--if that's even possible--
and what the hell it's going to take to
bring her down.

Angel's brow knits.

ANGEL
Faith, you can't blame yourself for--

FAITH
(angrily)
She killed two of my girls--almost
three--just because they got in her way!
(her jaw stiffens again)
And I've stood around hoping Spike, and then
you, would take care of her.

CUT TO Angel, frowning, but listening.

FAITH (cont.)
Well, now she's got Spike.
She's got the Amulet and the orb....
And there's a really good chance she'll get you, too.

There is silence between them for a beat.

ANGEL
Then you already know what she wants.

A nurse walking by throws them a reprimanding glare.

FAITH
(low)
Let's go for a walk.

CUT TO - EXT. CEDARS SINAI MEDICAL CENTER - EVENING - STOCK - ESTABLISHING

Traffic passes under the large glass main building.

EXT. TERRACE - CEDARS SINAI MEDICAL CENTER

Angel and Faith stroll past empty benches clutching their coffee cups.

FAITH
Angel, I should be the one to get
the Amulet and the orb, not you.

ANGEL
I can get immunity to the orb.
I know a shaman who deals in these kinds of things.

Faith stops and stares Angel down, bringing him to a halt.

FAITH
Yeah, and what if you can't?

Angel gazes at her levelly. Faith throws out her hands.

FAITH
All I'm saying is, this is my fight as much
as it is yours. So why take that chance?

Angel frowns thoughtfully.

Faith brings her cup up close to her lips. She looks uncomfortable.

FAITH
It's because you don't trust me.

Angel gives her a quizzical stare.

ANGEL
Of course I trust you.
What makes you think I don't trust you?

FAITH
(eyeing him)
The Syndicate. Drusilla.
All the other crap going on in this town.
You think I can't handle it.

ANGEL
(baffled)
When did I say that?

FAITH
You didn't have to.
You don't think I can handle it.

ANGEL
(scoffing)
Of course I think you can handle it!
You've been handling it.
(long reflective pause)
It's just...now I'm here to help.

Faith looks away. She takes a sullen sip of coffee.

ANGEL
(reassuringly)
Faith, I'm not trying to step on your toes.
I realize you've spent the last year
establishing the Council in L.A.,
but I spent five years before that getting
to know this town pretty well.

Faith's face is expressionless.

ANGEL
We're on the same side here.
You have the Slayers you've trained,
I'll have my friends back soon.
Then we'll take on whatever this town
throws at us. Together.
(he smiles wryly)
I do have some expertise in bringing
down multi-billion dollar criminal organizations.
And an in with the police officer in charge
of the Syndicate investigation.
(his smile fades)
And no one knows Drusilla better than I do.

Faith's eyes finally rise back up to him. She wanders over to a trash can and tosses her coffee cup away, then pivots around.

FAITH
All right. You can start by telling why she
has such a big Jones for Connor.

ANGEL
(uncomfortably)
I can't tell you that.

Faith scoffs at him.

ANGEL
(defensively)
Not because I don't know. And not because
I don't think you should know.
(an awkward pause)
It's just...personal.

FAITH
(not impressed)
Oh, it's personal!

Angel shifts on his feet.

ANGEL
What I mean is, you're going to have to ask Connor.
It's not my place to tell you.

Faith chuckles. She lets out a long, slow sigh.

FAITH
Fine.
Then tell me about Drusilla.
(she looks him in the eye)
What's she going to do next?


INT. CONNOR'S KITCHEN - EVENING

Connor sits where we left him. He has his knees drawn up; his arms rest across them. He stares across the room stonily.

CLOSE-UP on HIS FACE, which then BLEND/FADES INTO -


The face of DARLA.

Her expression is wary and lost.

EXT. A BRIGHTLY-LIT PEDESTRIAL MALL - EVENING

WIDE SHOT - families, teenagers, singles, and couples stroll past boutiques or sit chatting on benches. The air is filled with their voices and laughter and the soft thud music from the nearby Planet Hollywood. Darla wanders the thoroughfare, hands clutching her elbows, still dressed in her long white gown. A large woman bustles up behind her and jostles her shoulder. A greasy-haired MAN in a leather jacket gives Darla an appreciative once-over, his gaze ending at -

CUT TO - Darla's BARE FEET.

Darla passes him, casting one discreet, aloof glance back.

The man turns to a friend standing beside him and nods towards the receding Darla. The second man smirks and scratches his beard stubble. He shoves his hands in the pockets of his plaid coat. The two them start forward.

Their POV - Darla moves through the crowd ahead of them. After a moment, she glances back again, her expression wary and puzzled.

The men continue their stroll.

Darla picks up her pace, looking around apprehensively. People wander by, shopping and talking. With one last quick glance behind her, Darla cuts down a SIDE STREET that crosses the pedestrian mall.

A moment later, the men reach the intersection, turn onto the side street, and SLOW.

EXT. SIDE STREET - EVENING

Their POV - not as well-lit and deserted. An asphalt road and office buildings. There is no sign of Darla.

SECOND MAN
(whispering)
Where'd she go?

FIRST MAN
She's slippery.

The second man guffaws.

They walk in silence for a moment, then -

CUT TO - a RECEDED BUILDING ENTRANCE ahead of them. Darla peeks out from it cautiously.

Her POV - the MEN.

Her eyes widen. She lowers her head quickly and starts up the sidewalk, keeping a brisk but unpanicked pace.

The men stride forward until they are within a few feet of her.

FIRST MAN
(making kissing sounds)
Hey, baby.

Darla doesn't look back. She keeps walking, passing an alley. As she does, the first man LUNGES AT HER, grabbing her arm and SWINGING HER AROUND into the mouth of the alley. Darla GASPS.

FIRST MAN
(voice low and playful)
Why are you being so unfriendly?

Darla wrenches away from him and steps back. She stares between the two men.

DARLA
(voice shaking)
I--I have mace.

FIRST MAN
(frowning comically)
Now that's definitely unfriendly.
(to the second man)
Don't you think that's unfriendly?

The second man nods matter-of-factly. His eyes slide over Darla.

His POV, PANNING DOWN - a tiny woman with no purse and no pockets.

With a high-pitched grunt, Darla TRIES TO PUSH THROUGH THEM. They block her way, laughing. The second man seizes her arms and holds her in place. Darla struggles. The first man PULLS A KNIFE. He brings it up to her throat. Darla raises her chin and FREEZES. Her eyes sink towards the blade.

FIRST MAN
That's better.
(he traces her throat with the blade)
Now...which one of us would you like to get
to know first?

Darla's eyes rise to him. She smiles wryly.

Her FACE GOES VAMP.

DARLA
Oh, I don't know...I kind of like
the quiet ones myself.

The men gape at her in horror.

Darla reaches out for the first man and THROWS HIM HARD AGAINST THE WALL. He HITS it head-first and slumps to the ground. Then she GRABS the second man by the hair and YANKS his head to one side, exposing his throat. She pauses and looks back down at the first man.

DARLA
(voice low and sultry)
But don't worry. You'll get your chance.
I'm real friendly that way.


EXT. CONNOR'S APARTMENT BUILDING - NIGHT

Connor's LIVING ROOM WINDOW glows behind closed blinds, the BEDROOM WINDOW, behind curtains. We are looking at them from over the shoulder of a DARK FIGURE.

CUT TO - ANGEL, leaning against a tree that stands near the curb in front of Connor's building. His hands are deep in his coat pockets. He looks undecided.

CLOSE-UP - the lights from the building reflect on his face. Then the reflection dims just a little.

His POV - Connor's living room window has gone DARK. A moment later, the bedroom light goes off as well.

Angel stands tall. He gazes at the building for another few seconds, then pivots and starts down the sidewalk. We see the building in the background behind him as he passes out of the frame. HOLD on the building, then -

TIME FADE into MORNING. The sky beyond the apartment building grows lighter and lighter, but not bright. The morning is overcast and gray.

The front door OPENS. Connor steps out, his book bag slung over his shoulder. He starts down the front walk with a downcast gaze.


Arid's slow, haunting "All Will Wait" starts as we FADE-CUT TO a MONTAGE OF SCENES -

INT. HOSPITAL ICU - MORNING

A weary-looking Faith sits in a chair watching Julie sleep. She glances at her watch, pushes her hair out of her face, and slowly rises to her feet.

CUT TO - INT. FAITH'S APARTMENT - LATE MORNING

Faith throws her denim jacket onto the bed and starts around to her wardrobe. Then she pauses as something CATCHES HER EYE -

The blinking ANSWERING MACHINE.

She walks over to it, hits play, and crosses around her bed again, pulling her shirt off. She is just about to yank a fresh shirt out of the wardrobe when the answering machine draws her attention again. She SCOWLS at it. Still in her sports bra, she stalks over to the kitchen counter and snatches up the phone. She stands holding it, her finger frozen over the buttons. Then she TOSSES THE PHONE AWAY.

FAITH
(inaudibly)
Fuck!

It skitters across the counter and SMASHES against the wall several meters away.

She KICKS the counter cabinet. The cheap wood CAVES under the force of her foot, leaving a GAPING, SPLINTERED HOLE.

Faith whirls around and throws herself down on her bed. She pulls her cell phone out of her jacket pocket and starts jabbing buttons.


FADE TO -

EXT. A HALFWAY HOUSE - WESTLAKE DISTRICT - NOON

A once-affluent 1920's era home, later subdivided into apartments and now another run-down building in a run-down neighborhood. A prematurely aging thirty-something WOMAN in a waitressing uniform trudges towards the front steps. She looks up to see someone approaching the steps from the other side.

Her POV - AIDEN, a book bag slung over his shoulder. He gives her a sympathetic smile.

CUT TO - INT. BEDROOM - HALFWAY HOUSE

Two single beds with an end table between them topped with a cheap lamp. The woman is sitting on one of the beds. Aiden is in an old plaid armchair. The woman gestures at the back of her hand with a finger. Aiden scrutinizes it curiously, then sketches something into his reporter's notebook.

INSERT - the SYMBOL he's drawn on the lined page -

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The woman's face crumples with grief. She buries her face in her hand.


FADE TO -

A CLOSE-UP of eight-year-old ANTHONY, his face cherubic and serious.

EXT/INT. CHURCH OF THE MOST HOLY TRINITY - AFTERNOON

A SERIES OF QUICK CUTS -
a dead demon in the nave; a dead demon in the side yard; a dead demon in the back room
INT. CHURCH BASEMENT

WIDE SHOT - Anthony stands beside the Kailiff demon Mach, soberly taking in the sight of two dead Grappler demons. He kneels down and pinches up some vampire dust in his fingers. Then he stands and fires an order at another thug-like demon behind him. The demon nods and starts quickly up the back steps.


FADE TO -

In CLOSE-UP - the AXIS OF PYTHIA, an ornately-carved METAL ARCH set in a cylindrical base. The interior of the arch is GLOWING, but the glow begins to fade as we look at it, until we see nothing within the arch but the edge of a wooden desk across the room.

INT. SPECIAL COLLECTIONS OFFICE - L.A. MUSEUM OF CULTURAL HISTORY - AFTERNOON

WIDE SHOT - MISTRESS MEERNA sits in front of the Axis, talking as Angel paces behind her. He skirts the patch of sunlight pouring through the high windows, a curled finger raised to his lips. Meerna finishes what she is saying and turns to look at him. Angel's expression is DARK AND FRUSTRATED.


FADE TO -

EXT. BRUIN WALK - UCLA - AFTERNOON

The WIDE PATHWAY that cuts across campus is scattered with people. Among them, we can see Connor's friend Dave, Dave's girlfriend Amy, and another girl engaged in avid conversation. Connor plods along beside them, gazing around himself, lost in his own thoughts.

His POV - a gray sky, campus buildings, the gnarled branches of trees. Faculty and students with bags and books MOVE IN SLOW MOTION - reading, talking, and passing in both directions on their way to class.

END SLO-MO - Connor's friends break into laughter. He glances up at them briefly, then goes back to brooding.

BLACK OUT.


END OF ACT ONE

Act Two

EXT. A STEEP WOODED SLOPE - DAY ("FLASHBACK")

Four nine- and ten-year old boys RACE DOWN a rocky leaf-and-gravel-covered slope under a canopy of oaks and redwoods, slipping, skidding, and laughing.

BOY
(with a giddy grin)
Go, go, go!

In the middle of the pack is a ten-year-old CONNOR, his backwards Dodgers baseball cap slightly askew and his face, knees, and arms smudged with DUST. He throws an anxious glance back, then continues down with the others, breaking into a grin.

INT. REILLY HOME - DAY

The grandfather clock ticks in the foyer. The front door opens. Young Connor peeks his head in, then slips in the door and shuts it behind himself. He exits into the back hallway and starts up the stairs.

COLLEEN (O.S.)
Connor. Please come in here.

Connor pauses on the steps. He brushes dusty hands on his pants.

CUT TO - INT. LIVING ROOM

Soft indirect sunlight filters through sheer white curtains. A youngish Colleen Reilly is standing in front of the couch.

Connor enters the room.

CONNOR
What's up, Mom?

Colleen sits down next to Connor's father.

Connor looks between the two of them. He shoves his hands into his pants pockets and fidgets, shifting his weight from one foot to the other.

COLLEEN
(gesturing)
Sit down.

CUT TO - the ARMCHAIR across the coffee table from her.

Connor twists around and looks at it. He pulls his hands from his pockets, saunters over to it, and sinks down.

LAWRENCE
Mr. Crawford called. He said he heard what
sounded like firecrackers up by his house.
Do you know anything about that?

CONNOR
No.

LAWRENCE
(with strained patience)
Connor, I went into the garage.
Some of the fireworks we bought for
the Fourth of July are missing.
Do you know anything about that?

Connor grips the arms of the chair. His eyes dip away.

CONNOR
Some of the kids....

LAWRENCE
Yes?

CONNOR
Some of the kids...wanted to set some off.

Lawrence draws in his chin and exhales.

LAWRENCE
Connor, we bought those fireworks to take to
your grandparents' house. We told you specifically
that they weren't supposed to be set off here
at home. Can you remember why?

CONNOR
(eyes on his shoes)
'Cause there's too many trees and bushes and
stuff that can catch fire.

LAWRENCE
That's right. That's why they're illegal
in the mountains.

Colleen leans forward, setting her elbows on her thighs. Her voice is gentle, but firm.

COLLEEN
Not only was it dangerous, Connor,
and against fire regulations, but it was stealing.

Connor's eyes rise, his head still tilted down.

CONNOR
The guys, they just--

COLLEEN
Yes, but you went along with them.

LAWRENCE
(also gentle, but firm)
Connor, you're going to know a lot of people
in your life. Good and bad.
And you know how you'll know the good ones?
The people who are worth being friends with?
(Connor nods quickly)
They won't ask you to do things that make you
uncomfortable. They won't ask you to do things
you know are wrong.

Lawrence rises to his feet.

LAWRENCE
I'm leaving the rest of the fireworks in the
garage. And I know that they'll be there when
we're ready to go to Grandpa and Grandma's
next week. You know how I know that?
(Connor's eyes dip again)
Because I trust you, Connor.
And I know you're not going to want to spend
the rest of your allowance replacing them.
Are you?

Connor shakes his head.

Lawrence walks over and comes to a halt by the armchair. He squeezes his son's shoulder reassuringly.


INT. UNDERGROUND - SOMEWHERE IN LOS ANGELES - LATE AFTERNOON

STEADY CAM - LONG SHOT down a narrow basement hallway - a concrete floor and drywall. DARLA enters the frame, her back to us, and turns into an open doorway. We follow her into a CLUTTERED BASEMENT ROOM. She winds her way past wood shelves, an old television, wicker baskets, and teetering piles of books.

At the far end of the room is SPIKE, seated in a threadbare armchair, reading the newspaper. He doesn't look up.

SPIKE
She rises.

Darla gazes around and frowns.

DARLA
(dryly)
Well, as usual you have us hiding in a sewer.

Spike ignores her.

Darla picks up a pair of smudged white slip-on shoes from a nearby vanity table and flips them over, inspecting the soles. She sets them back down.

DARLA
Tell Dru I'll be in a suite at the Four Seasons.
After I find something decent to wear.

SPIKE
(glancing up)
You might want to rethink that. That Syndicate
outfit tried to kill us last night, if you recall.

DARLA
(breezily)
Tried to kill you, you mean.
If they wanted me dead, I wouldn't be here
at all, would I? Wasn't it one of those
"Syndicate" witches that brought me back?

SPIKE
(snapping his newspaper uncomfortably)
Yeah, well, er...not sure about that one.

Darla circles around, a grimace on her face, and starts to make her way back through the clutter.

DRUSILLA (O.S.)
But Grandmother!

She turns around again.

DRUSILLA stands behind Spike's chair, pouting.

DRUSILLA
If you go now, you'll miss the party.

Drusilla gives Spike an affectionate caress on the cheek, then passes behind the chair and over to a small table. On the table is the faintly glowing ORB OF ÃTMA sitting in a chipped ceramic cereal bowl. Drusilla kneels down behind it and reaches out to it with long fingers.

DRUSILLA
I have special party favor for Angel.
(her eyes rise to Darla)
Pssst, pssst....
Your baby boy's invited, too.

She rises up on her knees, then pauses, frozen, gazing into space.

DRUSILLA
I think I shall call him "uncle" now....

Darla chuckles derisively and saunters towards her.

DARLA
If you mean that parasite Angel knocked me up with,
I've seen him. He's a pathetic shadow of his pathetic father.
Why you'd want to turn that into a vampire....

Drusilla stands, her dark eyes on Darla.

DRUSILLA
But the beast's already there, inside.

She CLAWS at the air with TALON-SHARP NAILS.

DARLA
(condescendingly)
Dru. Honey.
I know you're all excited about this
little family project of yours,
but believe me, no one else cares.

Darla pauses and peers into a cardboard box. She pulls a tanned leather HANDBAG.

DARLA (cont.)
Spike's only going along with it because he's
never learned to stand up to you--
(Spike throws her a frown)
--and Angel, despite all evidence to the contrary,
isn't stupid enough to fall into your trap.
(she sighs and sets the bag down on a crate)
And I--

Drusilla wanders over to her.

DRUSILLA
(voice sultry and sing-songy)
Can't wait to see if I pull it off....

Drusilla picks up the handbag and circles around with it.

Darla scoffs.

DARLA
And spend any more time in this rat-hole?
I don't think so.

Drusilla picks up a heavy silver hairbrush from the vanity.

DRUSILLA
(examining it)
Your heart burns with curiosity....
And hope.

She slips it inside the handbag.

Darla grimaces and presses her fingertips to her chest.

DARLA
That's the greasy low-lifes I had to eat
for breakfast.
(she plucks the bag out of Drusilla hands)
I'm off to order room service now.

And with that, she pivots and exits the room.

Spike flips a page in his newspaper.

SPIKE
Well, that settles that.

Drusilla gazes after Darla.

DRUSILLA
Not in the least.

She drifts towards the door and stops.

DRUSILLA
(murmuring)
Say what you must, Grandmother.
You forget your own words.

STEADY CAM - our view moves away from Drusilla, out the door and down the austere hallway. As it does, we hear Drusilla's voice drifting with us -

DRUSILLA (VOICE OVER)
"What we once were will inform all that we have become...".

At the end of the hall is an open door, and beyond it, murky shadows. We hear the soft clang, clang of metal.

DRUSILLA (V.O.)
"The same love will infect our hearts....
...even if they no longer beat."

Drusilla wanders back to Spike and circles slowly around him, her fingertips caressing his chair.

Distantly, we hear Darla's voice echo through the sewer.

DARLA (O.S.)
(irritably)
I never said that.

CUT TO Spike, who lowers his paper.

SPIKE
Should I go after her?

DRUSILLA
She'll be back.

She pouts down at him.

DRUSILLA
But you don't want her here.
Or Angelus.

Spike looks back and up at her with guarded curiosity.

His POV - her dark eyes bore into his.

DRUSILLA
I know.

She leans down and kisses his cheek.

DRUSILLA
(murmuring against it)
But you'll see, my sweet.
This time...it will be different.


EXT. FAITH'S APARTMENT BUILDING - LATE AFTERNOON

Connor's car pulls up to the curb. He stares over at the building.

The Slayers Kelly and Isabel are out on the sidewalk, sparring. A few neighborhood boys watch their kicks, punches, and blocks with coy interest. Connor exits his car.

CUT TO - INT. BASEMENT HALLWAY

OVER THE SHOULDER CAM - he heads down the stairs and through the basement hallway towards Faith's OPEN APARTMENT DOOR. We can hear voices and a steady squeaking thudding. Connor stops just short of the doorway.

CLOSE-UP - he eyes it warily.

Then he proceeds forward.

INT. FAITH'S APARTMENT

PAN THE ROOM - Faith's bed is gone, clearing out an open area of floor now occupied by SEVERAL MORE SLAYERS. They are milling about--standing, leaning against the desk, sitting on the floor--chatting amongst themselves. At the kitchen counter is the witch VAUGHNE. She opens a lap top computer and sets it down. AIDEN is on the barstool next to her, pulling his notebook out of his book bag.

AIDEN
Anthony's mom said he had some kind of tattoo
on his hand the last time she saw him.
(he shows Vaughne his sketch from Act 1)
We can cross-reference it with possessing entities.

Vaughne nods.

At the far end of the room is FAITH. Her MATTRESS AND BOX SPRINGS are propped up against the wall beside the bathroom door. She THROWS A FIST at the mattress with an irritable scowl on her face. Then she stops and turns towards Aiden and Vaughne.

FAITH
Whoa. What are you guys doing?

AIDEN
(glancing at her)
Just surfing some paranormal websites,
searching for information on the--

Faith reaches out for the computer and snaps it closed. Her eyes dart to the assembled Slayers.

FAITH
(furtively)
Not here, O.K.? Not right now.

Then she notices that Aiden isn't looking at her. She turns around.

CUT TO Connor, gazing at her from the doorway, hands deep in his jacket pockets.

CONNOR
I need to talk to you.

Faith frowns and turns back to the mattress.

FAITH
Not the best time, chump.

She takes another swing at it, and another.

FAITH (cont.)
(scowling)
The fucking Council--
(thud)
--won't let me send my newbies back out into
the field until they pass a
"(thud) Field (thud) Certification Test."

She circles around and eyes him coolly.

FAITH
I really don't have time for someone who has
a problem killing vampires.

Connor's arms and shoulders tense.

CONNOR
I don't....
(pause)
It's important.

With a sigh, Faith reaches behind Vaughne's computer and grabs a towel off the counter. She dabs the back of her neck with it and looks at him.

FAITH
So talk.

Connor gazes around at the others with discomfort.

CONNOR
Alone.

Faith waves her towel at the door.

Aiden and Vaughne watch as Connor and Faith file out into the hallway.

INT. HALLWAY - LATE AFTERNOON

Connor wanders down the hall and starts up the stairs to the first floor landing. Faith trails after him, rolling her eyes.

LONG SHOT up the stairs - as Connor and Faith ascend, Isabel and Kelly appear at the top of the stairs and start down. Just after they pass, Kelly pauses and stares back up after them, her hand sliding towards a small leather sheath attached to her belt. There is a DAGGER there.

CLOSE-UP on her face - her eyes glow gold briefly.

CUT TO - Connor paces the foyer.

CONNOR
(murmuring)
It's about that vampire from last night.

FAITH
(eyebrows raised)
You mean the one that's out there right now
having a party on somebody's neck?

Connor looks down and nods. After a beat, his eyes slowly rise.

CONNOR
It was Darla.

Faith's slack posture visibly tenses. She gazes at Connor uncertainly, then brings up her towel clenched in both hands.

FAITH
"Darla"? As in Angel's sire, Darla?
(her brows knit)
Are you saying Drusilla--

CUT TO - INT. FAITH'S APARTMENT

Kelly and Isabel enter the room. Aiden gets up off the bar stool and slips past them out the door.

CUT BACK TO - INT. FOYER

CLOSE-UP on Connor. He stares forward, his blue eyes troubled.

CONNOR
She looked just like her picture.

Faith twists her towel into a knot anxiously.

FAITH
Fuck.
(she lets out a shuddering breath)
Three down, one to go.

She says nothing for a moment as she takes it in. When she finally looks up at Connor, her challenging expression has returned.

FAITH
That doesn't explain why you just let her
run off, Connor.

Connor crosses his arms and turns away from her.

FAITH (cont.)
(voice rising)
You had a straight shot.
There's no way you could have missed.
But you didn't even try!

CLOSE-UP on Connor. There is a glimmer of moisture in his eyes.

CONNOR
(quietly)
I know.
(then, voice rising with anxiety)
I know I should have. I just couldn't.

FAITH
Why not!?
(she jabs the air with a finger)
If you knew who she was and how dangerous she is,
why the hell didn't you kill her on the spot!?

Connor's face contorts with pain. He whirls around at her.

CONNOR
Because she's my mother!

Faith's angry expression dissolves into a slow, dumbfounded blink.

FAITH
Huh?

CUT TO - INT. HALLWAY

The STEADY MURMUR of the waiting Slayers drops to dead SILENCE.

Aiden's lips compress. His gaze drops to the floor.

CUT BACK TO - INT. FOYER

Connor gapes at Faith, his wide eyes wild and shimmering.

CONNOR
You've wanted to know what I was since you met me!
Why I have powers? Well, that's why!
(his voice drops to a murmur again)
My parents are vampires.
Demons.
(pause)
Darla is my mother...and....

He gives her a furtive, tight-lipped look. His eyes fall away.

Faith stares at him, thrown.

FAITH
Angel's your father.
(she exhales)
Jesus. How is that--?

Just then, the door opens. The Slayer Misha appears. She looks between Connor and Faith, realizing she's walked into something personal.

FAITH
(to Misha, pointing)
Downstairs.

Misha slips past them and down the stairs.

Faith stands staring after Misha for a moment, arms crossed. Finally, she turns back to Connor, chuckling softly. She raises her shoulders and shoves her hands in her pants pockets.

FAITH
(with a bewildered frown)
O.K., still trying to wrap my brain around
all of this.
But...what I really don't get it is...
why wouldn't you just tell me?
And why didn't Angel ever tell me?
I mean, the two of us have been friends for....

She trails off. Connor says nothing.

FAITH
You were worried, weren't you.
That I'd freak or something.

CONNOR
(shaking his head)
No.
(he shrugs)
I don't know.
(he stares down pensively)
It's complicated.

FAITH
(chuckling)
Yeah, just a little.

CONNOR
No, I mean the reason I didn't tell you
is complicated.

Then he smiles a wry smile. He stares down at the floor.

CONNOR
(softly)
I just didn't want to...make a thing.
(beat)
Just wanted the past in the past.

He looks up across the foyer, gazing at something unseen, the smile still on the edge of his lips.

CONNOR (cont.)
Everything was going to be normal...
college, friends, my family.
(he chuckles)
I was just going to be "Connor Reilly."

With a sigh, Connor slumps against the wall.

Faith scrutinizes him, looking even more confused. She strolls over and leans in beside him.

FAITH
O.K.... I know I don't have the whole story.
(she grins)
But dude, if you really just wanted things
to be "normal", why the hell'd you
start hanging with me?

Another wry sideways smile from Connor. They stand in silence for a beat.

FAITH
I do know something about having a past
you don't want to think about, though.
(she smiles mischievously)
So...you know...if you show me yours,
I'll show you mine.

Connor grins bashfully.

FAITH
What I mean is, you can talk to me about it
if you want. It won't get back to your...
to Angel.

Connor nods non-committally.

Faith's gaze shifts to the stairs. She clasps Connor on the shoulder.

FAITH
Listen, I've gotta go take care of the spazzes.

She heaves herself up from the wall and turns to face him, her hand still on his shoulder.

FAITH
But we'll talk later, O.K.?

Connor glances at her hand reflexively. Then he meets her eyes and smiles.

CONNOR
O.K.

FAITH
(grinning)
Cool.

She turns and starts down the stairs. Connor's smile lingers as his eyes follow her descent.

When she is finally gone, he tilts back his head and lets out a shaky breath.

BLACK OUT.


END OF ACT TWO

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[info]ironed_orchid
2005-08-06 07:46 am UTC (link)
OMG!! Way to go Faith.

Still loving Darla.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-06 08:01 am UTC (link)
Way to go in which scene? She's having a day, she is.

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[info]ironed_orchid
2005-08-06 08:07 am UTC (link)
Duh! I meant at the end: discovering Connor's parentage and being cool about it.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-06 08:17 am UTC (link)
Well, what's she supposed to do, say, "I like Angel just fine but u suk 'coz your parents are vampires?"

; ) ; )

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[info]ironed_orchid
2005-08-06 08:19 am UTC (link)
Heh. Well she could feel she was allowed to be a little annoyed at being lied to for many episodes.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-06 08:22 am UTC (link)
I think she's still processing the whole thing. And then, you know, things got busy.

; )

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-12 09:39 pm UTC (link)
absolutely adored the scene with Dru/Spike/Darla. And Connor finally fessing up to Faith, great stuff.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-12 09:44 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked the Fanged Three scene! They are tough cookies to write, because everyone has their ideas of how they should act. Played in low-key with Spike this time. Just had him reading the paper the whole time, LOL.

Yeah...Connor's confession, that's a scene that's been coming all season, I wanted it to be a bit dramatic. I thought having it come out by being forced to admit who his *mother* was after Darla's appearance was a good opportunity.

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-12 09:57 pm UTC (link)
I think taking Spike to the sideline was a good idea. There is always inherent drama between Darla and Dru. Darla's never had much time for Spike.

And the way Connor was forced into a confession really worked for me. I mean we knew it was coming eventuallyand this had enough drama without being over the top.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-12 10:01 pm UTC (link)
He pretty much realized he had to. He couldn't *not* tell Faith that Darla was back and running around loose. And he knew she would ask him why he hesitated killing her.

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-12 10:04 pm UTC (link)
yes but now to tell Angel and to tell him she's not the soft cuddly one who tried to keep him from murdering that girl with Cordelia

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-12 10:06 pm UTC (link)
Yes, although Angel never knew Connor "met" Darla in Inside Out (which I'm watching right now, by coincidence, that very scene with D/C).

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 07:43 am UTC (link)
so true. In fact, Angel as far as I know, has no idea Connor was visited by Darla. That should come as a complete shock. See if you can tell me since you're watching it, while father and son fight, is that dead body just lying there or does it disappear as Jasmine's born?

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 07:45 am UTC (link)
They don't show the dead girl after Angel arrives. One assumes Connor dumped the body before Angel got there...or something.

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 07:50 am UTC (link)
i would have thought there was no time for that. I haven't seen it more than once but didn't it go Cordy kills and goes lays on her magical markings. Connor hand dips in blood and paints her. She screams and before Jasmine even comes (Connor is still at Cordy's side) Angel bursts in. It seemed rather quick to me. I always assumed a) Angel saw the body or b) somehow missed seeing/smelling etc etc or c) Jasmine gobbled her up as a first meal and made Angel forget it.

Which would then get me started on that theory of mine (which not every Connor fan agrees with) that Connor WAS fully under Jasmine's power (regardless that he could see her) because what father kneels to his child, then acts like a a pod person until the blood is smeared on him and then he starts having doubts.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 07:54 am UTC (link)
Connor was totally under Jasmine's power after she was born. The fact that he stayed with her after being infected by Cordelia's blood just has to do with the fact that he had nothing else in his life, or felt he had nothing else. Jasmine gave him meaning he'd been floundering for all season.

Connor would not of his own volition knelt to Jasmine in that very first moment, nor have suddenly gotten along all-smiles with Angel for weeks, and *certainly* would not have sung a duet with Angel unless he were a pod person like the rest.

I'm going to rewatch that scene now (end of IO, beg of SHP)

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 08:02 am UTC (link)
see you and I agree on that. I'm surprised to find others don't. That goes into the villification of Connor I suppose which prompted me to write one of the few BtVS/AtS essays I've ever written

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 08:10 am UTC (link)
Mutant Enemy had Connor say in "Peace Out" that he was not made serene by Jasmine, and in "Sacrifice" he admits he always saw Jasmine's true appearance. This is a bit of a ret-con on the part of ME to make Connor look more far gone than he otherwise would have been to make his melt-down in "Home" more convincing. But I wasn't convinced. For one thing, I'm looking at how Connor acts in SHP and Magic Bullet, and he's totally not himself. He's acting like everyone else--kneeling, smiling, serene, blah, blah. He's not THAT good an actor. He only becomes himself again (questioning, hostile, angsting) after he is cut at the very end of "Magic Bullet". He's still loyal to Jasmine, but if you know anything about Connor as a character--his need for a place in the world, his need for family, his need for love, that makes complete sense.

We've had this discussion before, you and me. ; )

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 08:13 am UTC (link)
yes we have and I still agree with you totally this is what happens when WB assumes all their audience are vapid 14 year old girls and they won't notice the ret-conning

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 08:19 am UTC (link)
Well, you notice it if you *care* and you blow it off if you *don't* care. It's like all those debates about whether Spike actually went to Africa to get a soul or not. At the time, at the end of "Seeing Red" and in the subsequent episodes, it looked to me and a lot of audience members like Spike went to get himself de-chipped so he could be the vampire he used to be and kill Buffy.

But then a few ME writers say, "Oh, no, that's not what he really meant deep inside!" But Spike's alleged motives are not part of any canon until way in the middle of Season 7 or something when Spike claims he went there to get a soul or something.

Some fans want to pay attention to what seems evident on the screen, others run around waving Mutant Enemy behind-the-scenes interviews.

You ever notice everyone harps on "authorial intent" until the writer says something that supports *their* POV, and then suddenly, it's "the Author Said It, it Must Be Right"?

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 08:29 am UTC (link)
again zero argument from me. And I was in the Spike went to Africa to get dechipped and kill Buffy camp (it would have been far more interesting at any rate)

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 08:03 am UTC (link)
OK, here's the scoop. The body is still lying there when Angel arrives. Jasmine isn't born yet, Cordelia is awake and pregnant on the floor. Connor almost instantly attacks Angel, forcing him to fight. Angel knocks aside Connor, then raises his sword over Cordelia, who suddenly gives birth. Jasmine appears, Angel is about to attack her, then falls down to his knees. Connor does so immediately after Angel. IO ends

SHP begins father and son are still kneeling. Jasmine looks down at Cordelia. No one has moved the body which one presumes is lying a yard or two away from her, but they don't show it.

Then they cut to the credits and the Hyperion where Angel and Connor arrive with Cordelia.

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 08:08 am UTC (link)
that's what I thought. In other words they forgot about it...or it ended up on the cutting room floor. She never had a name did she?

and thanks

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 08:12 am UTC (link)
I heard she had a name in the shooting script. Somebody told me what it was, but it's probably deep in the comments of one of the TD episodes, I don't know which one.

And since Connor and Angel were under the influence of Jasmine, they probably smiled and serenely dumped the body before they gathered up Cordelia and went back to the hotel.

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 08:14 am UTC (link)
you're probably right or like I said, maybe freshly dead was on Jasmine's menu. I suspect they didn't call her the Devourer for nothing

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-08-13 08:20 am UTC (link)
Would she eat dead people? Or just live ones?

*burp*

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[info]cornerofmadness
2005-08-13 08:26 am UTC (link)
That I don't know. I suppose it would depend on how she draws nutrients from them.

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[info]its_art
2005-10-25 03:31 pm UTC (link)
Coming late to the party... But it was Anna. I know 'cause I looked it up for an ep of TNP.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-25 03:58 pm UTC (link)
And you were probably the one who told me in the first place!

Interesting that ME gave her a name, even though Connor and Evil!Cordelia probably never knew that name.

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[info]its_art
2005-10-25 04:07 pm UTC (link)
Probably.

I've noticed ME tends to give almost everyone who has lines a name, even if its never mentioned. Joss mentioned once, somewhere, that he can't write if he doesn't know people's names (I don't know where I read that, but I'm positive I did). That might be part of it. I'm like that, I tend to name everyone. I think the only time someone who was not just a random demon didn't get named was in TNP 1x01 when I called the vampire who pretended to be Cordelia "Faux-Delia", but I think that's just 'cause I liked that moniker better than any real name.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-25 04:27 pm UTC (link)
I sometimes have characters who don't have names. Like people who are in a certain role and that the viewers will only know through that role. In the latest TD, there's a MUSEUM EMPLOYEE who doesn't have a name.

Now, if she returns a second time and starts being integral the the plot in anyway, I'll give her a name. But if I give her a name now, I'll feel obligated to bring her back. It's an intimacy thing.

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[info]its_art
2005-10-25 04:41 pm UTC (link)
Understandable. There's only like one or two characters I named in TNP that didn't turn up again. I'm big on bringing people back.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-25 04:46 pm UTC (link)
If I start giving characters names and bringing them back, then I feel obligated to find a real-life actor to "play" them and put them in the credits. Casting is not a fun job if they're a minor character.

Plus, used to be a time when I used IE to post my stories to LJ and it limited the size of a post and hence the size of an episode. I tried to avoid adding names to the credits if I could help it.

; ) ; )

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[info]its_art
2005-10-25 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Yeah... Usually I only cast characters if they're going to come back. Heck, a couple of times I actually had a character come back just because I like the person playing him. Pretty much the only people that got actors cast that didn't come back died during the course of the ep (and even then, not a guarantee they won't come back. Heh... There are a couple of characters who didn't even appear for the first time until they were dead)

I've been having a yen to cast Jonathan M. Woodward in a season 2 ep. I really feel like I have to have him be a seemingly nice guy and who turns out to be evil then kill him.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-25 06:28 pm UTC (link)
I have to become really attached to a bit-part character to bring him/her back. I'm nervous about adding too many original characters to my fan fic. To me they are such obvious extensions of the writer into the story, even if they're not much like me.

Interestingly, I like getting bit-part characters from the original shows themselves, like Vaughne, who was in The Killer in Me on BtVS.

As for original characters, I'm attached to Aiden, of course, and my ne'er-do-well Raleigh Mathers, and a few of those Evil!Syndicate types, like the wicked witch, Miranda.

But there's a few regular guest stars I've never casted, 'cause I think I don't care that much. I'll probably end up killing them in the end.

; D ; D

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[info]its_art
2005-10-25 06:38 pm UTC (link)
This is where you and I differ. I like putting in the new characters because it really makes it feel like it's a new series. I mean, Angel was always somewhat connected to Buffy, but it did create a complex mythos all its own. When I'm doing TNP, that's what I'm trying to do. I feel like if I put too many characters from Buffy/Angel, then I'm being to reliant on the previously established. But hey... We gotta differ somewhere, or else we'd be writing the same series, right?

I think all of the characters-- even the canon ones-- are an extension of the writer, so I don't sweat the OC thing too much. To be honest, Salome, Jamie and Oni are as precious to me now as Andrew, Wes, Lorne and Connor. Well... Okay... NOT Connor. No one beats him. But its close. And I do like my Jonathan-substitute Gord and Magdalen, 'cause she's just the sweetest old lady ever.

A couple of times, I've actually cast actors AFTER the episode the character was in, if only because later on I found the perfect actor to portray them.

I don't blame you for bringing Vaughne back. Rawr....

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-25 07:06 pm UTC (link)
One of the reasons I have so many characters from the shows instead of OC's is that this is maybe the third fan fic I've ever worked on? I'm still enjoying the challenge of seeing if I can write the characters from the shows and get them believable.

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[info]its_art
2005-10-25 10:54 pm UTC (link)
Very valid reason. The movie I'm struggling on is pretty much my attempt to see how many characters I can get believe. In TNP proper, I like 'em in small doses... Thought S2 is already shaping up to be more guest-starry. S1 was all about forcing Connor to stand on his own. So now that he's done that I can allow him to have more help. I'm just horrid to him.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-26 03:55 am UTC (link)
I wrote season 1 of TD imagining that there would be only one season. Which means I wanted to get to the core of Connor's issues as I saw them in Season 5 of AtS, and end the season either with him finally able to move ahead in life as a more or less integrated person, OR, alternatively, as a fucked-up mess again (I couldn't decided which). But this season is going as I planned--basically a magical mystery tour through Connor's past, through his vampiric heritage, through his personal issues, etc.

It leaves me open to do a season two where the challenges are more external as well as internal, or to finish the TD project all together.

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[info]its_art
2005-10-26 10:39 am UTC (link)
I think you're doing a very good job with that mission statement. When it comes to VSes, one season at a time is a really good way to take it. Most people don't even get through one. They're very hard to do.

I do joke that I have ideas for season five of TNP... Which is the honest to God TRUTH, I do have ideas that I could use if I ever got to that point. But right now, I'm writing S2 like it's the last season. While season one was spent getting Connor to grips with who he is, S2 is going to dealing with his past. I didn't get to touch on that too much, because Connor was not at a point where he would deal with it, since he was in denial of it.

Either way you decide to go, you're doing a hell of a job. If TD ends after one season, I'll miss it terribly because it's so good, but you're covering the points that need to be covered.

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[info]masqthephlsphr
2005-10-26 11:01 am UTC (link)
I'm rather attached to TD. And my readers. It's like a drug! People reading my writing! And liking it!

So, chances are, I'll write a season 2. 'Cause of course I'm still big with the Connor lurv, and season 1 won't even scratch the surface of his potential, his future.

I'll need a break, though. I pretty much dive into a new episode the minute I finish the current one, and my weekends have been taken over by TD, TD, TD. I think I need to find a more relaxed pace so I can have a life.

; )

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[info]its_art
2005-10-26 12:14 pm UTC (link)
Connor has infinite possibilities. Boy's got a BIG future.

I can understand needing a break. When you're working solo on a VS, you've really got to just dive into the next episode right after finishing the last one. I've had times when as soon as I've finished coding an ep of TNP, then I've had to immediately start work on the next episode. Of course, I kinda like the pressure of it. I am taking Nov off to work on my NaNoWriMo book, so that'll be my hiatus.

I know some people get tetchy when we take too long with episodes, but I think we've actually got it harder than the actual series writers! There's MANY of them. We're but one person. And we've gotta be more detailed, since we don't have the luxury of *actual* actors and visuals.

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