ftm_boi ([info]ftm_boi) wrote in [info]narutoyaoi,
@ 2005-10-28 12:55:00
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[FIC] NC-17 like WHOA!
Title: "The Bath House"
Genre: PWP
Pairing: KakaIru
Rating: NC-17 like WHOA...  I kinda feel dirty after writing this...  teehee.
Warning: Slut!Iruka
Theme: #1, Anonymity
Author: ftm_boi
Dislaimer: I *totally* don't own Naruto... *sigh*



"The Bath House" was a place that few people in Konoha knew of, and even fewer frequented.  The entrance was located in a shady looking back alley, permeated by the stench of weeks old trash and mostly empty liquor bottles.  Umino Iruka found himself breathing through his mouth as he approached to keep from retching.  He wore only tattered bluejeans and a grey hooded sweatshirt, the hood pulled up over his head to keep himself from being recognized.  Just like every time he came here, a strange tingle of excitement and trepidation ran through him as he opened the door.

The grizzly looking middle-aged man at the counter took his money without a word, and he quickly moved on to the small locker room.  There, Iruka stripped and placed his clothes mechanically in an empty locker.  At first, he ignored the stack of towels on the way into the baths, but then stepped back and grabbed one, figuring he might need it to lay on since you couldn't be sure how clean the surfaces were here.

The steam inside the establishment was thick and heavy, making moisture bead out almost immediately on Iruka's tanned skin.  His eyes narrowed as he scanned the area for anyone interesting, but it seemed rather empty tonight...  Either that, or everyone was already "occupied".  He was a little disappointed, but decided to find an empty room and enjoy himself for the time being.

Sure, there were baths there, but "The Bath House" was more a collection of rooms for anonymous fucking.   As he walked down the hallway, Iruka peered discreetly into the rooms with open doors.  The first few were taken up by sweating, writhing couples, the sight of which had Iruka's flaccid cock twitching up in anticipation.  In the next room was a hulking man with entirely too much body hair, his face intense and red as he frantically pumped himself.  Iruka kept walking.

Finally, he came upon an empty room.  He walked in, but did not close the door behind him.  It was an invitation of sorts.  Each of the rooms had a small waterproof container in the corner that contained a large bottle of lube and a generous supply of condoms.  Iruka grabbed the bottle and spread out his towel on the long sauna-style bench along the side of the room.  As he sat down, he heard passionate, synchronous moaning and shouting from the hallway, his dick springing up, about half erect now.

Squeezing out a good amount of lube onto his hand, Iruka leaned back against the tile wall and languidly stroked himself to hardness, his free hand moving slowly up his chest to toy with a nipple.  Letting out a little gasp from the sensation, he arched his back, gripping his erection more firmly as his hand moved at its slow and steady pace.

After some time teasing himself, he felt himself getting close to orgasm.  However, Iruka had come here for something more, so he decided to hold off and see if anyone would accept his wordless offer.  He lay down on his stomach, not allowing himself to touch his length for the time being.  Spreading his legs slightly, he reached back and stroked at his opening, finger still moderately slick with the residual lube from jacking off.  He pressed the finger in just a little, wiggling it around to loosen the tight ring just at the entrance.  The pressure was wonderful, and he couldn't help but push his hips against the bench beneath him, moaning softly in pleasure.

It was then that Iruka registered the presence of another person in the room.  He heard the soft "pat pat" of their footfalls on the damp tile floor as they approached.  He moved to turn over, but felt a warm hand on the small of his back, halting him.  "Don't," the stranger instructed, his voice a deep, silky baritone.  Iruka had trouble keeping himself from shuddering just at that one word.  He resumed his position on the bench, understanding the man's wish for anonymity.

Another hand joined the one on Iruka's back, and they both made their way slowly up the expanse of skin to his shoulders, squeezing the taut muscles there.  He felt the anonymous man straddle the back of his thighs, then felt the hands on his shoulders drag down to firmly grasp the round globes of his ass, kneading them wantonly.

Iruka groaned, his cock throbbing between his stomach and the wooden bench.  He felt the stranger's weight shift, then gasped when he felt a hot mouth on his neck, sucking at first, then biting, the teeth raking over the junction of his neck and shoulder.  He let out a moan, writhing under the other man.

There was a short chuckle from man above him, then Iruka felt a wet tongue at the nape of his neck.  It trailed down slowly, between his shoulderblades, following the trench between the muscles in his back.  Then, a short pause at the small of his back, and the stranger's weight shifted again as Iruka felt himself being hauled up on all fours by strong hands on his hips.  Those hands gently caressed his ass before spreading the cheeks open, and then he felt a warm puff of air against his hole, making him whimper as a shudder ran down his spine.

The other man's tongue flicked out a few times, teasing Iruka's opening before finally swirling around the rim, making him moan loudly and push back against the delicious sensations.  His own hands clutched at the edge of the towel as the stranger's tongue began to press against his entrance.  With a sudden thrust, the tongue pushed in, wriggling and pulsing inside him.  Iruka cried out from the intensity of it, and subsequently felt the vibration from the other man's responding moan, which almost made him cum right there.

He knew he wouldn't last much longer like this, and after all, he'd come here for a reason.  He grabbed a condom and the lube bottle and held it behind him.  "Fuck me," he nearly ordered.

The other man pulled away with what Iruka thought was a soft gasp.  Then, wordlessly, the bottle and condom were pulled from his hand.  He reached down to stroke himself, listening to the rip of the condom package, the pop of the lube bottle cap.  Finally, he felt the stranger's hardness pressed against his opening, a hand braced on his hip.

There was a moment of hesitation from the man above him, so out of frustration and need, Iruka pushed back quickly, wincing slightly from the pain of a thick cock slipping past the tight ring muscle.  The stranger's hand clenched on his hip and he heard the man stifle a moan before pushing in slowly to the hilt.  Iruka's jaw clenched as he waited for himself to adjust to the feeling of fullness.

After a few moments, the other man began to move.  The thrusts were small and teasing at first, but soon the two fell into a rhythm, Iruka rocking forward until just the tip of the slick hardness was inside him, the other man pulling him back until he could feel sharp hipbones dig into his ass.  He reached back and grabbed a lean thigh, his breath quickening as he rolled his hips with the thrusts.

Their movements soon became faster, more urgent, and the anonymous man reached around him, pulling him up until his back made contact with a hard chest.  The man shifted so that Iruka was straddling his thighs, almost sitting in his lap.  Iruka lifted himself up and let himself come back down, letting out a sharp cry as the new angle allowed the dick inside him to brush against his prostate.  He heard a deep groan from behind him, then the voice was muffled against his shoulder.

A hand wrapped tightly around his dripping cock as he began bouncing up and down on the stranger's lap.  Their joined moans echoed off the walls along with the slapping of wet flesh.  Every thrust brought Iruka closer to the edge, and when the other man began pumping him roughly, he shouted out a string of expletives as he coated the stroking hand and the bench underneath him with thick white cum.  The man behind him thrust one last time, then yelled his release, his erection throbbing against Iruka's clenching insides.

They collapsed forward onto the bench, sweaty, panting, and utterly spent.  There was a moment of discomfort as the other man's softening length slipped out of him, then he felt hot lips press to his ear.  The man's deep voice spoke softly, sensually in his ear.  "Maybe we can do this again sometime."  Iruka shivered and decided he wouldn't be against that in the slightest, but the anonymity might become an issue.  How would he know who to look for if they were to meet?

But right now, he was too tired to think about it.  "I'd like that," he replied, leaving it to the other man to devise some means of meeting up.  The stranger nipped his earlobe, then licked around the rim of his ear, and Iruka felt his cock stir, excited at the prospect of more.

There was a soft chuckle, then a moment of silence.  "Allright, then.  I know where to find you...  Iruka-sensei."

Iruka's eyes shot open, and he turned to find the man gone.  He jumped up, moving quickly to the doorway to look out into the hallway.  He caught a fleeting glimpse of a leg disappearing into the locker room, and ran after, ignoring the slight pain in his rear end.

As he rounded the corner, he saw a flash, then a puff of white smoke where the man had been.  But just before, he could've sworn he caught a glimpse of messy silver hair...



x-posted at  [info]30_lemons




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[info]trollmia
2005-10-28 05:23 pm UTC (link)
Ohhh, slutty, slutty Iruka... Now that was something that was fairly new to me. Never read anything quite like it before... *squeeeals* Really nice.... *off to roll around in the cold grass outside...*

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[info]hotarutenshi
2005-10-28 07:35 pm UTC (link)
KakaIru is one of my favorite pairings... *le sigh of a happy fangirl* You did a awesome job!

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[info]demondreams
2008-07-25 02:50 am UTC (link)
icon love!
cord-chan

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[info]alleyb
2005-10-28 07:53 pm UTC (link)
Ohh.. slutty Iruka, I love it. I personally think he's not as innocent as he seems. ^_~ Good job.

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[info]ftm_boi
2005-10-28 10:52 pm UTC (link)
Thanks a lot ^_^ I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, I agree with you, Iruka can't possibly be as innocent as he seems. I kind of liked the idea of making him a closet slut, so I ran with it, and this is the result... This is THE smuttiest thing I've ever written, lol.

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[info]alana2x1
2005-10-28 10:44 pm UTC (link)
*Applauds* That was awesome! I could just imagine Iruka's shock when his anoymous partner for the night said his name. Just like Kakashi to disappear lightning fast straight after, haha. Great stuff! ^__^

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[info]serenia
2005-10-28 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Mmm, that was hot beyond belief! Is that your first for [info]30_lemons?

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[info]ftm_boi
2005-10-29 01:29 am UTC (link)
Yeah, actually, it was your Neji/Shika fics that got me interested. (I've been meaning to comment on them, but I always seem to get sidetracked *puppy dog eyes* sowwy...) So I clicked the link for that community, and it looked like a nice challenge, so I joined up ^_^

Actually, now that I think about it, that was my first yaoi lemon! Then again, I've got *ahem* experience... in that area... so it wasn't all that hard ^_^;
But I'm glad everyone likes it!

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]xsakurablossomx
2005-10-29 03:54 am UTC (link)
rawr, absolut smexiness ^_~ KakaIru always makes me smile :D


(et plus, I LOVE YOUR ICON! KATAMARI DAMACY!)

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[info]ftm_boi
2005-10-29 09:36 am UTC (link)
We appreciate your comment about the Royal Icon. It makes us happy to see another Katamari fan who also likes KakaIru ^_^

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[info]mija711
2005-10-29 08:39 am UTC (link)
ooh wow that was totally hot..Ive read what I could find on Iruka/Kakashi fics and most of them have Iruka being all emotional and girly sort of, not that I dont like the fics, they are good, but very few have them with Iruka being aggressive and sexy as all get out, I for one cant see Iruka being all girly like, since he is a ninja, and he looks scary when hes mad and yells, then he often smirks like when Naruto asked for a real Ninja mission and Hokage laughed and Iruka smirked, he was definitly not girly, hehe ok I went on a tangent sorry, really wonderful fic I soo loved it, will this remain a one shot or will you add to it? cause I would love to read more along this line..ty for that awsome read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

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[info]ftm_boi
2005-10-29 09:47 am UTC (link)
Yeah, as a gay man, sometimes I get a little frustrated with yaoi (of any pairing), since the uke tends to get thrown into this really girly out-of-character mode. Take it from me--even if you're a bottom, you can still be more masculine than a top (just ask my boyfriend!). My point: Iruka is a man... A sexy ninja MAN... And he deserves to fuck like one! ^_^

As for whether this will remain a one-shot... I'm not sure, actually. Since I'm writing this for the 30_lemons challenge, there will be 29 more fics along the same lines (hot ninja sex between these two characters), but I'm not sure whether the fics will be linked somehow, or whether they'll just stand on their own. I'll let you all know once I figure it out ^_^

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[info]propertyofgaara
2005-10-30 12:37 am UTC (link)
OH NO! MY INNOCENT 12- YEAR-OLD MIND HAS BEEN SCARRED!
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Pfft...
That was freakin' awesome, dude. Really.

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[info]sephysarkon
2005-10-30 04:03 am UTC (link)
Omg slutty!Iruka's hot :3 That was awesomely pervy, thanx!!

*grin*

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[info]tear_venus
2005-10-31 05:36 pm UTC (link)
That was dirty, but it was dirty in a very GOOD way. One of my favorite lemons now. Thank you so much. *hee's*

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[info]measuringlife
2005-10-31 07:29 pm UTC (link)
Whoa, excellent lemon *_*, v. hot and much love towards a realistic characterization.


♥ I'll have to watch out for your updates now ~

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[info]futago_02
2005-11-02 04:20 am UTC (link)
hahahah.... hotness... must read more soon.

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[info]ogod
2005-11-02 09:56 pm UTC (link)
yum

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[info]melakenzu
2005-11-07 03:41 pm UTC (link)
Whoa...nice lil slutty Iruka...never know what the sweet teacher's doing on his naughty little weekends..being screwed by an 'anonymous' stranger...nice job Kakashi-sensei...I wonder if Iruka was mortified that it was someone he knew...or maybe it turned him on even more...

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Awsome
[info]shadowelemen
2007-01-13 04:44 am UTC (link)
Its a great fanfic and I am always a sucker for a good Iruka kakashi fanfic and i think you should post more. I just posted a shikisasu fic but it isnt that great

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Re: Awsome
[info]melakenzu
2007-01-16 09:07 pm UTC (link)
I'm still curious to see it though.

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[info]cdkobasiuk
2007-03-03 02:41 am UTC (link)
Great writing of the setting. Lots of fun.

cdk

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[info]filleyice
2007-10-17 11:47 am UTC (link)
I'm running around looking at old posts, and I just had to stop and say this is awesome....I'm gonna go see if you wrote more.^^

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[info]yoruteikan
2008-07-09 11:14 pm UTC (link)
wow... that was amazing. You're a very good writer.

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[info]sakura27
2008-07-09 11:52 pm UTC (link)
Oh My God
This was hot beyond belief...

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[info]demondreams
2008-07-25 02:49 am UTC (link)
you owe me a new keyboard, they really should make these things more drool resistant.
the anonymus sex was jsut so damend kinky, Kakashi knowing its Iruka but Iruka having no clue. a non-virginal, blushy Iruka is a personal fav as well and that certainly delivered.
I like how Kakashi almost seems amused at first by Iruka's responsiveness only to be the one one the verge of looking his cool when Iruka demands to be fucked.
I would love to see a continuation of this. Iruka wondering and wondering who it could possibly be until for some reason Kakashi come s up behind him to tell him something, then maybe nips his ear before disapearing letting Iruka know for sure. and then the confrontation that really doesn't go anywhere because they end up fucjking each others bains out again....maybe against a wall....with Iruka blindfolded by his own hite-ate.... and the very end of the fic, the epilog as it were, has Kakashi at the bathhouse laying face down on a bench bu it's a reserved room and then in walks Iruka..

::eyes glazed:: I"m sorry what were we talking about? oh yea! please write moooooooore!

cord-chan who has been ru off with by her imagination

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[info]siriuscanid
2008-08-22 04:07 am UTC (link)
So nice. Please write a sequel.

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