oceansportrait ([info]oceansportrait) wrote in [info]hot_gimmick,
@ 2005-04-18 07:37:00
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Hot Gimmick Chapter 46
Here's the LAST chapter in volume 10. Don't want to comment too much on it because I might reveal spoilers otherwise, so I'll just post the translations behind a link. Enjoy!


Chapter 46

Page 1
Hatsumi: (The person I ended up liking)
Hatsumi: (was someone who was impossible for me.)

Page 2:
Hatsumi: (It was like I was being told by God Himself)
Hatsumi: (that I should give up Tachibana-kun.)

Page 3:
Mariko: Narita-sama!
Mariko: I’m so relieved. You really were here!
Mariko: Everyone’s very worried. Your mother, your brother, and your sister…
Mariko: I’m so relieved—I’m so glad you were here!
Mariko: What about Ryoki-sama? Is he in his room?
Mariko: Right now, the car over there—
//pecori// [half bow]
Mariko: Eh…?

Page 4:
Mariko: U-um…
Mariko: Narita-sama…
Mariko: --Could it..
Mariko: be…

Page 5:
Man: Miss? U-um should I bring a veh—
Man: Ah….please take care…
Hatsumi: (I was thinking)
Hatsumi: (how I wanted to be by his side.)

Page 6:
Hatsumi: (That’s why I tried so hard.)
//ga// [fall]

Page 7:
Hatsumi: (I)

Page 8:
Hatsumi: (can’t be by his side anymore.)
Hatsumi: uuu….[crying]
Shinogu: ah…

Page 9:
Hatsumi: uuu… [continuing crying]
Shinogu: What’s wrong?

Page 10:
Hatsumi: ..w-why…
Hatsumi: are you…
Shinogu: …I was looking for you. I was really shocked when I heard mom saying how you didn’t come home.
Shinogu: Everyone at Tachibana-san’s house were in a panic too, but Ryoki-kun’s father let us know where you were.
Hatsumi: I-it wasn’t…our…dad….
Hatsumi: The person…who had the affair with Azusa’s mom…it wasn’t our dad…
Shinogu: Hatsumi…
Hatsumi: …I heard from Tachibana-kun just now…

Page 11:
Hatsumi: Tachibana-kun’s father
Hatsumi: used our father as a cover—
Hatsumi: the real person Azusa’s mother had the affair with was Tachibana-kun’s father—

Page 12:
Mariko: I’m sorry…
Mariko: to barge in on you like this…
//fu// [half-laugh]
Ryoki: So it’s you, Mariko-san.
Ryoki: I was thinking how if she came back in the next ten minutes, I’d let what happened slide,
Ryoki: and I could let her be an apprentice again. [he’s referring to the position Hatsumi had before she was his girlfriend ^^]

Page 13:
Ryoki: That stupid woman.
Ryoki: If she can’t be mine—
Ryoki: she should just die.

Page 14:
[sign says “Narita”]

Page 15:
Hatsumi: --I’m sorry I was the reason for such a fuss.
Hatsumi: I’m truly sorry I made you worry all night…
Akane: Hatsumi-chan…
//pon// [light hand on the shoulder]
Mother: …You’re tired, aren’t you?
Mother: We can talk later.
Mother: You should get some sleep.
Mother: Shinogu, Azusa-kun. Thank you for your hard work.
Hatsumi: …mom…

Page 16:
Hatsumi: I won’t
Hatsumi: go out with
Hatsumi: Tachibana-kun anymore.
Akane: Hatsumi-chan!
Hatsumi: --That’s why I don’t think Tachibana-san will bother us about our family anymore—
Akane: W-wait, Hatsumi-chan?!
Akane: What are you saying?!

Page 17:
Akane: That’s so stupid! Why are you doing something like this?!
Akane: You should just ignore what that hag says! You’ll be fine!
Hatsumi: It’s okay.
Hatsumi: …It’s okay Aka-chin…I’ve already decided…
Hatsumi: It’s okay….
Akane: Hatsumi-chan!
//fuuu// [exhale]

Page 18:
Azusa: …to think…
Azusa: something like this would happen….
Shinogu: …Azusa.
Shinogu: About the night before, mom phoned dad about it, and he’ll be coming back here to Osaka tomorrow.
Shinogu: Let’s confirm what Hatsumi was saying.
Shinogu: …There should be nothing for him to hide anymore.
Shinogu: Everything about the truth—
Azusa: …Hey, Shinogu-san.

Page 19:
Azusa: Putting that aside, if I were you
Azusa: I’d go to her side right away and embrace her.
Shinogu: Azu…
Azusa: I’m fine. From here on I’ll investigate by myself.
Azusa: Hatsumi,
Azusa: was holding back her tears the whole time in the car while we were coming back here.
Azusa: If you don’t go right now,
Azusa: I’m going to go?

Page 20:
Shinogu: …Tomorrow! I’ll phone you tomorrow!
Azusa: Okay, okay. I got it. Go, go.
//ta ta ta// [footsteps]
[remembers back to TF saying:
TF:--And you’re
TF: Odagiri Azusa-kun.]
Azusa: It’s no wonder…
Azusa: he knew my name.

Page 21:
Azusa: Ryoki’s…
Azusa: father…
TM: Ryoki-san! I’m so glad you’re safe—
TM: I was terribly worried about you.
TM: But I know.
TM: You were tempted by her, weren’t you? By that Narita-san’s Hatsumi-san.
TM: Because you aren’t the kind of person who would cause us such unnecessary concern, are you?
TM: Right, Ryoki-san?

Page 22:
TM: Even if it is me, this time, my patience has run short.
TM: If families like Narita-san’s stay here,
TM: the apartment’s reputation will go down.
Ryoki: …Reputation?
Ryoki: What could you be possibly referring to Mother?
TM: Ryo—
Ryoki: Trash talking those who you aren’t pleased with,
Ryoki: On top of that, you go search into their family issues.
Ryoki: You threaten them and try to get them to do as you say.
Ryoki: Is that something a person of dignity would try to do?

Page 23:
Ryoki: Not to mention,
Ryoki: You don’t even know you’re in debt to those people.
Ryoki: You look re—ally foolish to me, mother.
Mariko: Ryoki-sama!
Ryoki: It’s okay if I tell her, right, father?
Ryoki: If I spill everything?
Ryoki: Mother, since a long time ago, you always complained whenever something happened, didn’t you?
Ryoki: We were naturally members of the Toubishi management’s group, but we left the house.
Ryoki: You were complaining about why we had to move to this apartment.
Ryoki: You were upset towards father.

Page 24:
Ryoki: This apartment,
Ryoki: was where the family of the woman who father had been seeing before you two were married was living.
TM: Wh…
TM: What…?
Ryoki: The name’s Odagiri Miho.
Ryoki: She’s Odagiri Azusa’s mother.

Page 25:
TM: Eh…?
TM: B-but…
TM: that was….
Ryoki: It was a huge rumor, wasn’t it? Around eight years ago at this apartment.
Ryoki: How Odagiri-san’s wife had an affair and she was divorced by her husband.
Ryoki: You were making a big fuss at that time too.
Mariko: R-Ryoki-sama…you shouldn’t…
Ryoki: I could just laugh.
Ryoki: The person she had an affair with
Ryoki: was your own husband.

Page 26:
Mariko: Ryoki-sama…
Ryoki: You’re someone with a lot of pride,
Ryoki: so you couldn’t investigate about the women he was seeing even though he hardly ever showed up here, could you?
Ryoki: That was a bit of a miss.
Ryoki: He was seeing Azusa’s mother during that time.
Ryoki: And he even had a perfect decoy set up…so even if people found out, the decoy would carry his sins.
Ryoki: He made Narita Hatsumi’s father as decoy.
TM: …d-do not talk…
TM: of such lies…
TF: No, it’s the truth.

Page 27:
TF: It’s as Ryoki said.
TM: A-anata…
TM: W-why, until now—
TF: You haven’t particularly
TF: wanted to know until now, have you?
TM: That is not what I asked you!
TF: …You don’t have to raise your voice to such heights. I can hear you.
TM: How can you…talk so casually…
TM: This…can’t be…
TM: You’re horrible!
//fuu// [exhale]
TF: //sigh//
TM: Explain properly! Depending on the story, I’ll be contacting my lawyer!

Page 28:
Mariko: Please wait!
Mariko: Ryoki-sama!
Mariko: No matter what the circumstances, this was too much. To say it like this—
Ryoki: But it’s the truth, isn’t it?
Mariko: Ah…
Mariko: (W-what an expression…)
Ryoki: …I wonder what’s so good about it.
Ryoki: A “family” can be broken this easily.
Ryoki: …even then…
Ryoki: how can she think of her family as something important…

Page 29:
Ryoki: Even with my superior mind,
Ryoki: I can’t understand it.
Ryoki: It’s impossible…
Akane: Shinogu-kun!
Akane: Have you seen Hatsumi-chan?!

Page 30:
Shinogu: She isn’t here?!
Akane: She was just in her room a second ago—
Shinogu: What about mom?
Akane: S-she doesn’t know yet. She was tired so she went to lie down with Hii-kun.
Akane: It’s my fault—! I kept on bugging her about Ryoki-kun!
Shinogu: It’s okay, I’ll find her! Don’t tell mom yet.
//batan// [door closes]
Shinogu: (I was in the elevator hall with Azusa.)
Shinogu: (If she was to move…)
Shinogu: (maybe it’s the stairs!)

Page 31:
Shinogu: ….Hatsumi…
Hatsumi: Onii-chan…

Page 32:
Shinogu: Well that’s a relief. You were here.
Hatsumi: eh…?!
Hatsumi: I’m sorry! Did you come here worried about me?!
Hatsumi: I just…wanted to get some fresh air.
Hatsumi: I left my room, came here, and everything was okay.
Shinogu: …oh…
Hatsumi: But, I remembered…how…
Hatsumi: up here was…Tachibana-kun’s…favorite place…
Hatsumi: Then…
Hatsumi: there was no where…
Hatsumi: I could go…

Page 33:
Hatsumi: …If I go…I might see him…
Hatsumi: If I see him…I can’t stay by his side…
Hatsumi: Here,
Hatsumi: the elevator hall,
Hatsumi: downstairs,
Hatsumi: the garden,
Hatsumi: everywhere.

Page 34:
Hatsumi: If I stay here…
Hatsumi: I’ll see him.
Hatsumi: fuu [crying]
Hatsumi: hikku….[crying]
Shinogu: …Okay, I got it.
Shinogu: I’ll take you away.

Page 35:
Shinogu: It’ll be okay if you go to a place where Ryoki-kun isn’t there.
Shinogu: Come to my house, Hatsumi.
Shinogu: Let’s live together.



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OH WOW
[info]eyeamvindicated
2005-04-18 03:55 pm UTC (link)
You are such an awesome amazing person and I'm forever indebted to you!! You made my sleep-deprived day SO MUCH BETTER!

And wow, Ryouki going off on his mom... a little cold hearted but a little satisfying! Fills in alot of gaps. arigatou gozaimasu!

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Re: OH WOW
[info]eyeamvindicated
2005-04-18 03:57 pm UTC (link)
oh yeah, and how Ryouki was willing to take her back if she'd come back to the room... it kind of proves that underneathe the bravado and bad-attitude, he really does need her and he's even *gasp* forgiving? b/c I don't think I'd be willing to ignore someone breaking up with me...

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!!!!
(Anonymous)
2005-04-18 04:58 pm UTC (link)
This chapter was amazing! Will you be posting the rest of chapter 11? I'm dying to know what happens next! Thanks so much!!!!!

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Re: !!!!
[info]sxylilwitch
2005-04-18 07:42 pm UTC (link)
[info]oceansportrait translated them in the past, you can find the links to the tranlations as well as the scans at [info]tricianna's website here :D

Chapter 51 is the only one not linked, but if you scroll back a day or 2 in the community entries you should find it, I'm a little lazy to find it myself XD

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Re: !!!!
[info]oceansportrait
2005-04-18 09:56 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for letting the person know about the links XD when I first read the anonymous poster's comment ("will you be posting the rest of chapter 11?") I was thinking how I never translated Chapter 11 XD

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Re: !!!!
[info]sxylilwitch
2005-04-18 10:19 pm UTC (link)
No problem :D

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-04-18 07:34 pm UTC (link)
poor Ryoki!

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-04-18 09:52 pm UTC (link)
also!!!!!!!! thankyou so much again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thanks again!
[info]sxylilwitch
2005-04-18 07:37 pm UTC (link)
This chapter showed how messed up poor Ryoki is. Poor kid, he doesn't even understand family love and bonds. No wonder he's so attached to Hatsumi. I hope things get better for them in 52!

Then again, a little Shinogu and Azusa drama would be nice XD

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[info]wistful_nana_o
2005-04-18 07:40 pm UTC (link)
ohmigosh! You are amazing! Thanks for the translation ^_^ please post the next chapter soon, if you can. Once again,thank you!

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...Hmm....
[info]lillthrose
2005-04-18 07:53 pm UTC (link)
Comment to page 19:
Azusa: Hatsumi,
Azusa: was holding back her tears the whole time in the car while we were coming back here.
Azusa: If you don’t go right now,
Azusa: I’m going to go.
-Is Azusa showing that he cares? I really hope so because in the end I hope it will be Azusa and Hatsumi... Azusa was her childhood best friend and he's still looking out for her (in his own way)after he hurt her but he was hurt too!! Sad, Two sided sword! I'm glad Ryoki is changing for the better.. I'm glad he talked back to his mom! YAY! That lady makes me mad!! Shinogu... I wish for the best and hopefully nothing happened with him and hatsumi in chapter 51 but if something did happen... It would be interesting to see what's next.

Chapter 11 scans and translations:

http://www.tokyojupiter.com/hotgimmick/

Thank you, Oceansportrait! I look forward to everything you post! You're really Amazing...all the effort you put into translating every chapter. You're very nice to be thinking of others. Cus we all know you don't have to translate anything for us but you do! THANKs! I look forward to Chapter 52 coming out!! Can't wait such suspense!

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Re: ...Hmm....
[info]oceansportrait
2005-04-18 09:59 pm UTC (link)
No problem, I'm glad to be of help to Hot Gimmick fans XD As for what Azusa said, I think judging from the scene he was just saying that to get Shinogu to go to Hatsumi. His mind's still very much on the just-revealed information about who his mother had the affair with.

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[info]baka_ruby
2005-04-18 08:36 pm UTC (link)
Aw... That's so sweet of Shinogu! "Let's live together".
<3

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wow ... such drama!
[info]anime_heart
2005-04-19 12:33 am UTC (link)
I love it! with this and the next 5 chapters it seems that Ryoki-kun is maybe growing up a little. It will be interesting to see how the twin dramas (the present-day one and the historic one involving the older generation) will play themselves out, because obviously there's still a lot left unresolved. Tachibana-san didn't know about her husband's affair, apparently Odagiri-san didn't know either ... how much did Narita-san know? It's kind of confusing.

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Re: OMG ^_^!!
(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 10:37 pm UTC (link)
Hatsumi living with Shinogu!? >< Its a dream come true! My favorite couple! >< Drama! Mystery!...and er more Drama!! xD Yay!!

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