The Infinite Improbability Drive ([info]weirdquark) wrote in [info]fuda_100,
@ 2004-11-08 21:59:00
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Secondhand Burns
First post.

I have this policy about fanfic. Namely I don't write it unless it writes itself. So here it is.

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Whenever he remembers the fire, he remembers patterns of intense light and dark. He remembers feeling helpless, and even though he saved them he knows it had nothing to do with him at all.

He stands in his office staring out at the past. He is not surprised when arms circle his waist and a golden tendril of hair falls over his shoulder. The harsh scent of chemicals pricks his nose, comforting in its familiarity and his iron control relaxes almost imperceptibly.

"If you ever put me through that," Watari hisses, "I'll kill you."

Tatsumi smiles. "I love you too."


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[info]wordsofastory
2004-11-08 07:33 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Oh, I love this. Very, very nice.

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-09 10:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]link621
2004-11-08 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yeah, Watari's reaction would be even more rash than Hisoka's, that's for sure. He's probably slap Tatsumi senseless. That said, this is nice. I like the line, "He stands in his office staring out at the past". That's just wonderful, right there.

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-09 10:08 am UTC (link)
I don't know about more rash, but definetely more irritated in that scared to death sort of way. Watari is the sort to make it clear he won't put up with that sort of thinking. And having said that would still probably walk into a burning laboratory to drag him out.

It might help that Watari might have a smidge of experience with burning laboratories.

Thanks. :)

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[info]mistressrenet
2004-11-09 04:33 am UTC (link)
I love that Watari knows exactly what he's angsting about. Sweet.

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-09 10:08 am UTC (link)
Watari is all observant. Comes from being a scientist.

Thanks. :)

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[info]jtriskell
2004-11-09 05:10 am UTC (link)
*happy*
ok, *insanely happy* TATARI!!!!!!! *coughs* yep, I'm slightly desperate for Tatari (happy Tatari) these days ;D. So, thanks for this lovely little piece.

"If you ever put me through that," Watari hisses, "I'll kill you."
Tatsumi smiles. "I love you too."

*squeals*

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-09 10:09 am UTC (link)
You're welcome.

Always glad to make fans squeal with glee. :)

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[info]toscas_kiss
2004-11-09 07:02 am UTC (link)
Delicious. :-)

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-09 10:09 am UTC (link)
Thank you. :)

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[info]aqua_eyes
2004-11-09 09:29 am UTC (link)
Brilliant.

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-09 10:09 am UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]kata_elf
2004-11-10 09:23 am UTC (link)
Wow, that was very nice, and so sweet too! Just what I needed right now. Loved the ending, too. Thanks ^_^

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-11 06:24 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome!

Glad you liked it.

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[info]threewalls
2004-11-14 03:47 am UTC (link)
*squee* Welcome to fuda_100 and tatari! I hope to see more from you... or I suppose, I hope more of your fic writes, um, soon.

And *squee*!!! This is beautiful. And so them.

(Can I rec this to [info]mc_recs? I collect Tatari fic I like there.

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[info]weirdquark
2004-11-14 10:15 am UTC (link)
Sure, rec away. Glad you liked it. :)

And, um, a few other things have decided to come into being in the meantime. They just haven't fit the challeges yet.

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[info]threewalls
2004-11-14 02:03 pm UTC (link)
Will do. I always get a kick out of a new author heading. :)

You can post to places like [info]yamifics or (dare I hope) [info]tatari, you know.

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