the Mary Ell-en Carter ([info]shrieking_ell) wrote in [info]batslash,
@ 2005-10-18 00:25:00
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Part V of Nine Hours of Sweet Torture
Allrighty then. It's time for me to post my small part in Bruce's nine hours of delicious torment. Sorry for the delay, I was away all weekend getting bruised and broken myself (luckily only a toe this time…) Enjoy! (All 731 words of it)

Part I - [info]kyrre
here
Part II - [info]walksbyherself
here
Part III - [info]phurie_dae
here
Part IV - [info]meletor_et_al
here

And just in case you forgot, Tem-ve started it!.

([info]imadra_blue, I believe the ball is in your court…)



He did choke for a moment, sputtered out a sloppy cough, as with swift alarm he realized that things were swirling and narrowing and he wasn't sure that he still had legs.

Suddenly the cock was gone from his mouth and he felt Ducard's fingers digging hard into his jaw. He tried to take a breath, couldn't. Ducard's face was the only thing he could see, black and wavering at the edges. He stared at him, mouth still hanging uselessly open. Ducard's mouth was moving. It was nearly too much effort to decipher the words.

"You will not pass out on me, Bruce. Do you hear me? You will stay with me here."

He couldn't even nod.

He felt Ducard shift down swiftly and felt the razor edge of the dagger against his chest. The rope binding him parted like gossamer threads and finally, finally, he could expand his chest again and suck life back into himself. It was then, with the surfeit of oxygen flooding through him that stars appeared against the swirling black field before his eyes and he did lose his tenuous connection with the room and with Ducard.

When he opened his eyes again, Ducard was crouched over him, taking the cut lengths of rope and doing something with his arms. His wrists were still secured firmly to the headboard and he craned his neck to see what the man was doing to him now.

"Hold still."

He pulled hard at the ropes but before he could twist and roll into a position less helpless than flat on his back, Ducard had a knee against his throat. He pushed, harder than was strictly necessary. Bruce coughed. Ducard looked warningly at him. He subsided.

Ducard pulled the last strands of the net he had woven about Bruce's arms and they drew inexorably together, bound tightly from wrist to elbow and above as if encased in one of Ducard's lace-up gloves.

Ducard moved down and straddled his thighs, using more of the pale rope to tie his legs similarly. Bruce was still diamond-hard and realized that he was no longer wearing a stitch of clothing. He struggled against the utter helplessness of his position when Ducard stepped back to admire his handiwork.

"Yes, you are beautiful like this. Now roll over."

"No." His defiance was far outstripping his endurance once again.

"Now."

"I can't, not tied like this."

"Yes, you can. Do it."

"No." He struggled again. To no avail.

"Fine. If you can free yourself in 15 minutes, I'll let you sleep the rest of the day here without disturbing you. If not…"

Bruce held his eyes, nodded.

Ducard looked at the clock and folded his hands, watching.

Bruce took stock. Exhaustion hampered his thoughts. His arousal fought with his rational mind. It would be so easy to give in.

He pulled himself up as much as he was able and started tracing along the intricate weave with his lips and tongue. He delicately picked at one rope end with his teeth, felt it slacken slightly. He pulled harder and felt the entire net tighten again. A groan of frustration escaped him. He started again. He almost understood the pattern now. He twisted hard to reach the key knot. He could almost touch it. He stretched his tongue and delicately licked it. So close. The thought of Ducard's cock in his mouth and against his tongue overwhelmed him for a moment. And then Ducard was there, leaning over him, kissing him hard, taking his breath, his concentration. When the kiss ended, Ducard wrapped a black silk scarf around his face, blinding him.

"Five minutes," he whispered.

Bruce grunted and started again. Slowly, hampered by the loss of sight. When he finally reached the solution point again, he felt Ducard's hot breath against his chest. He stopped and opened his mouth for the kiss he knew had to be coming. Something touched his mouth, soft and supple, but not warm. He smelled the leather, tasted the salt, the taste of Ducard. And something else, the gritty dirt of the ground below the wall. Ducard's gauntlet. But not on his hand. Rolled into a tight ball and thrust into his waiting mouth. Another silk scarf secured it in place.

"Time's up. Now roll over." Warning, desire and promise in that smoky voice.

Bruce struggled to twist and turn his bound and beaten body into obeying.

Ducard's hands were warm on his back, his ass. They stroked and petted him soothingly. Stopped at the small of his back and pressed hard.

"Good boy."



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[info]meletor_et_al
2005-10-18 04:34 am UTC (link)
...*incoherent gibberish*

I've read this in progress, I've (nominally) betaed it... and damn, it is still unbelieveably hot. ropes. lacing. mind-games. SEX.

and the glove.

and, SEX.

so... awesome.
sex.

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-18 09:58 am UTC (link)
So happy you liked it!!!!! I do so love a good rope trick and of course i hve you to thank for setting it all up so i could mindfuck poor Bruce a bit more...

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[info]temve
2005-10-18 05:12 am UTC (link)
Oh my. That man has a devious imagination indeed. And a well-stocked bedroom! :)

Loved the rope webbing and Bruce trying to untie it with his teeth (licking the key knot? Unexpectedly, totally, hot.)

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-18 09:59 am UTC (link)
you have no idea how glad i am that you thought that was hot. it was a bit dicey writing it and wondering if everyone would just think i'm weird...

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[info]temve
2005-10-18 09:03 pm UTC (link)
We're all weird here, my dear... but we're the same kink kind of weird!

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-19 01:59 am UTC (link)
yes...good! i have found a place! and believe you me, my Bruce kink plotbunnies know no bounds. (lots of bonds though...)

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[info]walksbyherself
2005-10-18 05:31 am UTC (link)
I was wondering when somebody would actually cut Bruce-darling free. *grin*

Oooooh, those rope gauntlets...

He's just too pretty not to tie up, isn't he?

My friend and I are making a pilgrimage downtown tomorrow afternoon to pick up the DVD. This is a perfect pre-DVD present. And it's entirely possible I'll pass out rewatching the training sequences, having mentally edited in a few of our "cut scenes."

Bravo, darling; beautiful work.
~Kat

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-18 10:02 am UTC (link)
Thank you thank you thank you!

I absolutely had to cut him free in order to tie him up again! He is far far too pretty to leave alone like that.

Have fun with those cut scenes! When do we get your part in this madness?

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[info]walksbyherself
2005-10-18 01:27 pm UTC (link)
*points to part two* I'm the one responsible for that rope-corset monstrosity. *satisfied grin*

Of course, I will probably jump back in here fairly soon...Chapter seven is claimed, but after that, who knows?

Considering new forms of torture plot details,
~Kat

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-19 01:56 am UTC (link)
Yes, I knew that. I'm a total dork. but i still want you to write more more more!

mmmm...plot details!

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[info]kyrre
2005-10-18 08:36 am UTC (link)
*fans herself* I'm not sure if Bruce will survive the day. I am lucky that I read this in parts. If I would read the Nine Hours of Sweet Torture in one session ....

And then Ducard was there, leaning over him, kissing him hard, taking his breath, his concentration.

DUCARD, that is CHEATING!

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-18 10:03 am UTC (link)
I can't wait till this is done and i do get to read it all at once! This was a great idea!

And yes, Ducard gets to make his own rules up as he goes, doesn't he?

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[info]phurie_dae
2005-10-18 10:17 pm UTC (link)
Rope...gauntlets?

*whimpers*

Bruce being all defiant makes me cringe and squirm gleefully at the same time. Just...GUH!

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-19 01:57 am UTC (link)
Yay! glad i could make you squirm!


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[info]silly_walk
2005-10-19 12:23 am UTC (link)
omg. batman begins dvd. just unwrapped. sitting beside my computer.
omg. this fic. arm gauntlets. bondage. bruce.
this is to yummy for words.

(love the last line, btw)

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-19 01:58 am UTC (link)
Glad you liked and glad to see you back in my twisted little world again, even if it is a different fandom!

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[info]imadra_blue
2005-10-19 06:03 am UTC (link)
Oh, wow. So hot. Ducard is such a stern master. *evil grin* Another hot part.

And oh God, it's my turn already...? *slinks off*

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-22 07:48 pm UTC (link)
Sorry for the late reply and thank you muchly. your continuation of this is divine, my dear. i love me a good spanking...

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[info]lady_elina
2005-10-19 09:49 pm UTC (link)
He struggled against the utter helplessness of his position when Ducard stepped back to admire his handiwork.

"Yes, you are beautiful like this. Now roll over."


I now ded from teh hot.

Ahem.

Translation: damn good job. I may need a moment to recover from this. I should be going to sleep, but... I'm not sure I can.

Thank you.

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[info]shrieking_ell
2005-10-22 07:48 pm UTC (link)
So glad you liked!!!!!!

You're quite welcome ;-)

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[info]skull_bearer
2006-01-09 03:10 pm UTC (link)
"Good boy."

EEEEP! *meeble*

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